Vicissitudo
Sex Demon
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Re: A very hesitant Attempt...
Well yes, you are absolutely right. I just had not the time to do it yet!I don't know if I'm retarded, or it's just my style, but it seems as if her lips (both set's) are lacking some color.
Also I think you might want to make her toenails, and fingernails a bit whiter, or different from skin tone.
Just tips from my own style I guess.
Edit:
Her asshole might be a bit too pink.
That butt hole is pretty scary..looks like the Sarlacc pit from Return of the Jedi.Make it more juicy likeYou must be registered to see the links. One of my favourite asshole artists 'Gunnmx'!
glorious. Loving the eyes!I wasn't really satisfied...I reworked the whole thing a bit...
Back to shadings now..
You might be right but I had a big "fight" with the older head. With the hair and the shoulders really looked weird to me.Tbh,
I think I liked the other head more, but it's your art broham.
I think this new head looks a bit stiff, maybe raise it, and or tilt it a bit.
That's all I got for now.
Oh, well thank you! However, this is actually my very first hentai artwork. I've still have a lot to learn... I opened this thread because I needed the courage and motivation to restart drawing. Hentai was a good theme and did the trick! I'm having fun!I have to admit that I really envy how you're so flexible when working with your art. The shading, lightning and the styles you have showed are great. Nice work.
Thank you for the constructive feedback and for the link! I always welcome any kind of criticism.I really like how you did the eyes brows the shading/colouring, the red shading below the eyes makes her look even more kinky, alot of attention to detail I really like it,,,,, sadly not so much detail when it comes to the mouth and the nose it's in total contrast to the afore mentioned.
Maybe it's not just the lack of detail, the more I look at it when I compare it to the eyes and brows the lines in general are contrasting, more wide/lulled not as defined and distinctive as the upper portion of the face.
Don't read too much into it, but the nose and mouth definetly strike me a bit odd at least while taking a first glance, they grow on me when I take a longer look, though!...
Here is my favourite artist, when it comes to drawing faces and facial expressions,You must be registered to see the links, maybe it helps with your process...
I'm also considering to add some tattoos and piercings here and there. Not sure though.