* Jiva Arts *
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Re: * Jiva Arts *
Looks like "back to the future" - teleport went little off the mark
Looks like "back to the future" - teleport went little off the mark
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Hey, not bad
Though, I can tell you are suffering from exact same thing I am - mileage
There are some perspective issues in second one, mostly due to background being in perspective yet she is not. Personally I would go with open hands and twisted/tensed fingers to show struggle with unstoppable excitement/cumming rather than fists.
Maybe even twist her body to the back a little to make it more dynamic
Keep calm and keep drawing
Hey, not bad
Though, I can tell you are suffering from exact same thing I am - mileage
There are some perspective issues in second one, mostly due to background being in perspective yet she is not. Personally I would go with open hands and twisted/tensed fingers to show struggle with unstoppable excitement/cumming rather than fists.
Maybe even twist her body to the back a little to make it more dynamic
Keep calm and keep drawing
OP
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Re: * Jiva Arts *
Thank you!
I will be working on poses and dynamics in general
Hey, not bad
Though, I can tell you are suffering from exact same thing I am - mileage
There are some perspective issues in second one, mostly due to background being in perspective yet she is not. Personally I would go with open hands and twisted/tensed fingers to show struggle with unstoppable excitement/cumming rather than fists.
Maybe even twist her body to the back a little to make it more dynamic
Keep calm and keep drawing
Thank you!
I will be working on poses and dynamics in general
Vicissitudo
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Nice to see another artist posting his works! Hopefully this section will be more alive!
As Yoshiiki pointed out you may improve the gesture a bit in order to make your characters look a bit less stiff and more dynamic. I'm telling you that because it's one of my major issues as well and I'm also trying to improve this aspect of my arts.
Great work overall and I hope to see more of your art soon!
Nice to see another artist posting his works! Hopefully this section will be more alive!
As Yoshiiki pointed out you may improve the gesture a bit in order to make your characters look a bit less stiff and more dynamic. I'm telling you that because it's one of my major issues as well and I'm also trying to improve this aspect of my arts.
Great work overall and I hope to see more of your art soon!
OP
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Thanks!)
I love this forum. Good people and no faeces flying directly into my face.
Good people giving good advices. Great!
You have cool arts! Nice style and well-drawn privates. Hot!
Later i`ll post other arts)
Thanks!)
I love this forum. Good people and no faeces flying directly into my face.
Good people giving good advices. Great!
You have cool arts! Nice style and well-drawn privates. Hot!
Later i`ll post other arts)
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I don't see why should one be rude.
Instead I personally like constructive critics because there is always something to learn from others. In my opinion being humble is the basic requirement to improve ourselves.
Again, I'm glad to see new artists around!
Great job with that last one! I like how you mixed the kinky/sexy nun with that hilarious pose situation!
I don't see why should one be rude.
Instead I personally like constructive critics because there is always something to learn from others. In my opinion being humble is the basic requirement to improve ourselves.
Again, I'm glad to see new artists around!
And a quick "sketch"
Great job with that last one! I like how you mixed the kinky/sexy nun with that hilarious pose situation!
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Re: * Jiva Arts *
Nice work, you got. ^^ I like artist who have his/her own style.
I try to find one for myself too, my friends often say my arts are shift fellow the
style of the character I draw. = =
Nice work, you got. ^^ I like artist who have his/her own style.
I try to find one for myself too, my friends often say my arts are shift fellow the
style of the character I draw. = =
