tentacle3g hentleman
Just want to share my thoughts on the Sex Exploit Room Teleportation Crystal. Perhaps we can rename it as "H Achievement Title Bonus Crystal"?
I feel "Achievement" is more easily understood, and would encourage more people to click on it.
Overall, it is a nice touch when the character give a remark upon changing to a new title. But I think there is an opportunity for the girls to say how they feel, along with a matching portrait (e.g. Jiao Long's Sperm Drinker title's dialogue "Minions, offer your essence Ki to your princess!" should not be using a shy/look away portrait, the devious look/evil grin would work much better).
Jeanne can play the innocent card ("Oh no, I can't believe I have done xxx so many times already..."), The shy/look away portrait would work much better for her.
Leanna can say "I want to feel the sensation of xxx again... No no no, I need to focus..."
Lastly, since the character portrait is always showing inside this room, whenever the player is on the right side of the room, let's move the portrait to the left side to not cover up the crystal
Jiao Long's crystals - The tiers are all standardized to 1, 10, 50 times. 50 times maybe fine for some recurring sex act that you get during battle H. However, it doesn't make sense to say do the bunny waitress or night club 50 times to unlock the third tier... because now it is just plain grinding.
So, let's reclassified the # of times you unlock the crystals based on the event type (is it easily obtainable via battle?
If so, set the unlock to 10,30,50) If not, then maybe 1,5,10.
On to the title translation. I like how you have Princess > Queen > Goddess for the 3 tiers. However, the shy/stare away portrait does not match what Jiao Long's personalities/what she is saying on some of the title changes.
As always, Capitalization of First Letter on Titles
1-1 Futa, no changes
1-2 Correct Essential Ki to Essence Ki. "Devouring" is an alternative to "Sperm-Drinking" (which is similar to 3-1). Devouring Princess/Queen/Goddess. The evil grin portrait would work well here.
1-3 Matron mother is redundant, it is easier if you just use Matron Princess/Queen/Goddess.
2-1 As you have Princess/Queen/Goddess at the end, we can try to be consistent by changing it to "Anal Lover Princess"
2-2 Simply "Orgy Princess/Queen/Goddess"
2-3 The middle crystal should read Lesbian Queen (instead of Princess)
3-1 "Fellatio" or "Swallowing Princess/Queen/Goddess"
3-2 Titty Princess/Queen/Goddess (not sure if Paizuri is commonly use in the west)
3-3 Let's be consistent on Tight or Fine
4-1 No change
4-2 No change
4-3 Masturbating Princess/Queen/Goddess (if we can, use a portrait that shows Jiao Long is masturbating)
5-1 No change
5-2 Sadistic Princess/Queen/Goddess
5-3 Enslaved Princess/Queen/Goddess
6-1 Slutty Princess/Queen/Goddess or Courtesan Princess/Queen/Goddess
6-2 No change
6-3 Soapland Princess/Queen/Goddess
Jeanne: Instead of "Arch Paladin", I would use "Saint"
For her title change dialogue, perhaps we can change it to "Oh no, I can't believe I have done xxx so many times already..."
Rather than the innocent blushing (and looking straight forward) portrait, we should use one where Jeanne feels guilty and look to the side (similar to what Jiao Long is currently using.
1-1 Slutty Saint or Courtesan Saint to be consistent. Still have Chinese text
1-2 Soapland Saint
1-3 Diva Saint
1-4 Enslaved Saint
1-5 Beach Honey Saint
2-1 Nudist Saint
2-2 Masturbating Saint, portrait of Jeanne masturbating, and dialogue: "I know I shouldn't be doing this, but I can't stop myself..."
2-3 Fellatio or Swallowing Saint
2-4 Titty Saint. The dialogue still have Chinese text in it.
2-5 Same as Jiao's 3-3, use either Tight or Fine to be consistent. Tight Pussy Saint
3-1 Anal Lover Saint
3-2 Orgy Lover Saint
3-4 Lesbian Saint
3-5 Matron Saint
Hu: going to be a little creative with him. Can consider dropping the word Warrior from the title. For fun's sake, we can have Jiao Long doing Hu's dialogue, with Hu being forced to obey.
Hu@10: Lecherous Kitten [Warrior]
Hu@30: Salacious Cat [Warrior]
Hu@50: Hardcore Tiger [Warrior]
Leanna:
Same as Jeanne, but replace Saint with Mercenary