RPG RPG Maker [Tentacle3g] Sword Maiden of Azure Dragon (RJ250198)

[Welkin2]

satoshi1, Tentacle3g here actually wrote an almost 600-page Chinese novel for the story before he started work on the game

 

[satoshi1]

satoshi1, Tentacle3g here actually wrote an almost 600-page Chinese novel for the story before he started work on the game

Damn, that must have been hard. Did anyone read it and know the ending?

 

[hentleman]

Damn, that must have been hard. Did anyone read it and know the ending?

The game is “loosely” based on his novel, but there's a lot, and i mean a lot of changes. I suspect when the game finishes, it will be two different animals.

 

[tentacle3g]

Its an RPG dude! Role Playing Game -.-

Do you think of yourself as the heroine?

I guess you're a male（if I guess wrong please don't mind）.

If you are referring to the "sense of substitution", you should play the games of the male heroes.

If you don't like the heroine like that, then I'm very sorry, but nothing can please everyone.

 

[tentacle3g]

Eh, I think I read some wuxia with characters like that. A bisexual king though who loves the MC who were usually little boys. But hey, that is just the manhua I found once in awhile.

The heroine of this game also likes the little boy...

 

[tentacle3g]

satoshi1, Tentacle3g here actually wrote an almost 600-page Chinese novel for the story before he started work on the game

I wrote the novel ten years ago.

Many plots have been compressed into games.

 

[tentacle3g]

Damn, that must have been hard. Did anyone read it and know the ending?

If you are interested, I can send this novel to you.

Of course it's Chinese...

 

[tentacle3g]

The game is “loosely” based on his novel, but there's a lot, and i mean a lot of changes. I suspect when the game finishes, it will be two different animals.

If we make game according to the plot of my novel, we will probably have to do it for at least ten years...

 

[deltahypheno]

I would like to know if there are futa content that could help increase the pregnant count in this build(0.55) yet?(I've seen something about repopulation of the west. ) I think it took quite some time to rescue the teammate and I don't want the girls to get turned on automatically when encounter H-mon yet.

 

[Welkin2]

I would like to know if there are futa content that could help increase the pregnant count in this build(0.55) yet?(I've seen something about repopulation of the west. ) I think it took quite some time to rescue the teammate and I don't want the girls to get turned on automatically when encounter H-mon yet.

Nope, not yet. In current build, you get 1 count from the rebuild the church quest line, the rest require you to feed your party to the H Monster /evil Jiao Long grin.

 

[tentacle3g]

I would like to know if there are futa content that could help increase the pregnant count in this build(0.55) yet?(I've seen something about repopulation of the west. ) I think it took quite some time to rescue the teammate and I don't want the girls to get turned on automatically when encounter H-mon yet.

In the 0.55 version, FUTA is nothing about pregnant.

In addition, if you lose to H monsters(H-mon) many times, girls will automatically burst their clothes when meet H-mon.

If girls get pregnant, they will automatically go to the nursery and spawn.

 

[tentacle3g]

Nope, not yet. In current build, you get 1 count from the rebuild the church quest line, the rest require you to feed your party to the H Monster /evil Jiao Long grin.

If you lose too many times to a H monster, it will affect personal end.

Except for the big ends (Badend and Realend), the main role has a variety of personal ends (H or non H).

 

[nanaya1234]

Any plans to full translate 0.55 before releasing new paid version?

 

[tentacle3g]

Any plans to full translate 0.55 before releasing new paid version?

Of course, I'm glad you have that kind of expectation.

If you can support our Patreon, the quality and speed of translation can be ensured.

 

[Welkin2]

tentacle3g hentleman

Just want to share my thoughts on the Sex Exploit Room Teleportation Crystal. Perhaps we can rename it as "H Achievement Title Bonus Crystal"?
I feel "Achievement" is more easily understood, and would encourage more people to click on it.

Overall, it is a nice touch when the character give a remark upon changing to a new title. But I think there is an opportunity for the girls to say how they feel, along with a matching portrait (e.g. Jiao Long's Sperm Drinker title's dialogue "Minions, offer your essence Ki to your princess!" should not be using a shy/look away portrait, the devious look/evil grin would work much better).
Jeanne can play the innocent card ("Oh no, I can't believe I have done xxx so many times already..."), The shy/look away portrait would work much better for her.
Leanna can say "I want to feel the sensation of xxx again... No no no, I need to focus..."

Lastly, since the character portrait is always showing inside this room, whenever the player is on the right side of the room, let's move the portrait to the left side to not cover up the crystal


Jiao Long's crystals - The tiers are all standardized to 1, 10, 50 times. 50 times maybe fine for some recurring sex act that you get during battle H. However, it doesn't make sense to say do the bunny waitress or night club 50 times to unlock the third tier... because now it is just plain grinding.
So, let's reclassified the # of times you unlock the crystals based on the event type (is it easily obtainable via battle?
If so, set the unlock to 10,30,50) If not, then maybe 1,5,10.

On to the title translation. I like how you have Princess > Queen > Goddess for the 3 tiers. However, the shy/stare away portrait does not match what Jiao Long's personalities/what she is saying on some of the title changes.
As always, Capitalization of First Letter on Titles
1-1 Futa, no changes
1-2 Correct Essential Ki to Essence Ki. "Devouring" is an alternative to "Sperm-Drinking" (which is similar to 3-1). Devouring Princess/Queen/Goddess. The evil grin portrait would work well here.
1-3 Matron mother is redundant, it is easier if you just use Matron Princess/Queen/Goddess.
2-1 As you have Princess/Queen/Goddess at the end, we can try to be consistent by changing it to "Anal Lover Princess"
2-2 Simply "Orgy Princess/Queen/Goddess"
2-3 The middle crystal should read Lesbian Queen (instead of Princess)
3-1 "Fellatio" or "Swallowing Princess/Queen/Goddess"
3-2 Titty Princess/Queen/Goddess (not sure if Paizuri is commonly use in the west)
3-3 Let's be consistent on Tight or Fine
4-1 No change
4-2 No change
4-3 Masturbating Princess/Queen/Goddess (if we can, use a portrait that shows Jiao Long is masturbating)
5-1 No change
5-2 Sadistic Princess/Queen/Goddess
5-3 Enslaved Princess/Queen/Goddess
6-1 Slutty Princess/Queen/Goddess or Courtesan Princess/Queen/Goddess
6-2 No change
6-3 Soapland Princess/Queen/Goddess

Jeanne: Instead of "Arch Paladin", I would use "Saint"
For her title change dialogue, perhaps we can change it to "Oh no, I can't believe I have done xxx so many times already..."
Rather than the innocent blushing (and looking straight forward) portrait, we should use one where Jeanne feels guilty and look to the side (similar to what Jiao Long is currently using.
1-1 Slutty Saint or Courtesan Saint to be consistent. Still have Chinese text
1-2 Soapland Saint
1-3 Diva Saint
1-4 Enslaved Saint
1-5 Beach Honey Saint
2-1 Nudist Saint
2-2 Masturbating Saint, portrait of Jeanne masturbating, and dialogue: "I know I shouldn't be doing this, but I can't stop myself..."
2-3 Fellatio or Swallowing Saint
2-4 Titty Saint. The dialogue still have Chinese text in it.
2-5 Same as Jiao's 3-3, use either Tight or Fine to be consistent. Tight Pussy Saint
3-1 Anal Lover Saint
3-2 Orgy Lover Saint
3-4 Lesbian Saint
3-5 Matron Saint

Hu: going to be a little creative with him. Can consider dropping the word Warrior from the title. For fun's sake, we can have Jiao Long doing Hu's dialogue, with Hu being forced to obey.
Hu@10: Lecherous Kitten [Warrior]
Hu@30: Salacious Cat [Warrior]
Hu@50: Hardcore Tiger [Warrior]

Leanna:
Same as Jeanne, but replace Saint with Mercenary

 

[tentacle3g]

tentacle3g hentleman

Just want to share my thoughts on the Sex Exploit Room Teleportation Crystal. Perhaps we can rename it as "H Achievement Title Bonus Crystal"?
I feel "Achievement" is more easily understood, and would encourage more people to click on it.

Overall, it is a nice touch when the character give a remark upon changing to a new title. But I think there is an opportunity for the girls to say how they feel, along with a matching portrait (e.g. Jiao Long's Sperm Drinker title's dialogue "Minions, offer your essence Ki to your princess!" should not be using a shy/look away portrait, the devious look/evil grin would work much better).
Jeanne can play the innocent card ("Oh no, I can't believe I have done xxx so many times already..."), The shy/look away portrait would work much better for her.
Leanna can say "I want to feel the sensation of xxx again... No no no, I need to focus..."

Lastly, since the character portrait is always showing inside this room, whenever the player is on the right side of the room, let's move the portrait to the left side to not cover up the crystal


Jiao Long's crystals - The tiers are all standardized to 1, 10, 50 times. 50 times maybe fine for some recurring sex act that you get during battle H. However, it doesn't make sense to say do the bunny waitress or night club 50 times to unlock the third tier... because now it is just plain grinding.
So, let's reclassified the # of times you unlock the crystals based on the event type (is it easily obtainable via battle?
If so, set the unlock to 10,30,50) If not, then maybe 1,5,10.

On to the title translation. I like how you have Princess > Queen > Goddess for the 3 tiers. However, the shy/stare away portrait does not match what Jiao Long's personalities/what she is saying on some of the title changes.
As always, Capitalization of First Letter on Titles
1-1 Futa, no changes
1-2 Correct Essential Ki to Essence Ki. "Devouring" is an alternative to "Sperm-Drinking" (which is similar to 3-1). Devouring Princess/Queen/Goddess. The evil grin portrait would work well here.
1-3 Matron mother is redundant, it is easier if you just use Matron Princess/Queen/Goddess.
2-1 As you have Princess/Queen/Goddess at the end, we can try to be consistent by changing it to "Anal Lover Princess"
2-2 Simply "Orgy Princess/Queen/Goddess"
2-3 The middle crystal should read Lesbian Queen (instead of Princess)
3-1 "Fellatio" or "Swallowing Princess/Queen/Goddess"
3-2 Titty Princess/Queen/Goddess (not sure if Paizuri is commonly use in the west)
3-3 Let's be consistent on Tight or Fine
4-1 No change
4-2 No change
4-3 Masturbating Princess/Queen/Goddess (if we can, use a portrait that shows Jiao Long is masturbating)
5-1 No change
5-2 Sadistic Princess/Queen/Goddess
5-3 Enslaved Princess/Queen/Goddess
6-1 Slutty Princess/Queen/Goddess or Courtesan Princess/Queen/Goddess
6-2 No change
6-3 Soapland Princess/Queen/Goddess

Jeanne: Instead of "Arch Paladin", I would use "Saint"
For her title change dialogue, perhaps we can change it to "Oh no, I can't believe I have done xxx so many times already..."
Rather than the innocent blushing (and looking straight forward) portrait, we should use one where Jeanne feels guilty and look to the side (similar to what Jiao Long is currently using.
1-1 Slutty Saint or Courtesan Saint to be consistent. Still have Chinese text
1-2 Soapland Saint
1-3 Diva Saint
1-4 Enslaved Saint
1-5 Beach Honey Saint
2-1 Nudist Saint
2-2 Masturbating Saint, portrait of Jeanne masturbating, and dialogue: "I know I shouldn't be doing this, but I can't stop myself..."
2-3 Fellatio or Swallowing Saint
2-4 Titty Saint. The dialogue still have Chinese text in it.
2-5 Same as Jiao's 3-3, use either Tight or Fine to be consistent. Tight Pussy Saint
3-1 Anal Lover Saint
3-2 Orgy Lover Saint
3-4 Lesbian Saint
3-5 Matron Saint

Hu: going to be a little creative with him. Can consider dropping the word Warrior from the title. For fun's sake, we can have Jiao Long doing Hu's dialogue, with Hu being forced to obey.
Hu@10: Lecherous Kitten [Warrior]
Hu@30: Salacious Cat [Warrior]
Hu@50: Hardcore Tiger [Warrior]

Leanna:
Same as Jeanne, but replace Saint with Mercenary

I have sent your opinion to the gentleman,thank you very much.

 

[tentacle3g]

Any plans to full translate 0.55 before releasing new paid version?

By the way, our English translation is not full time.

He is an English teacher and work busy.

He has been translating as soon as possible, but the quality is also guaranteed.

 

[FinalCloud]

Do you think of yourself as the heroine?

I guess you're a male（if I guess wrong please don't mind）.

If you are referring to the "sense of substitution", you should play the games of the male heroes.

If you don't like the heroine like that, then I'm very sorry, but nothing can please everyone.

You are right, I am Male.

I may be weird with how I play HRPGs, I do not exactly roleplay the female, if the protagonist is female, I roleplay as a neutral observor of the story, pretty much.
But obviously the female protagonist provides the PoV
If the protagonist is male I roleplay as the male protagonist

I do not like Male goes around r$ping females stories
I do not really like Male has and sleeps with a huge harem stories (if the story is actually good then I MAY play games like this)
I do not like (infact I HATE) NTR stories (I play the occasional NTR game if: protagonist is female (some people say this makes it not NTR, idk), the NTR elements are infrequent-ideally avoidable, it is translated to English and the art is good)

This means I look for games with a female protagonist pretty much. As the above basically covers every game with a male protag (most major NTR games have a male protagonist)

With a female protagonist (and therefore, in my case, an observer of the game), I just do not really like her to be
a total slut from start to finish, if I want to watch sluts having sex I could just watch normal porn lol!

There might be a decent story involved in the game, but naturally H-Games require the combination of good hentai and game elements.
And it is h-scene intrique combined with story that makes them worth playing.
There isnt as much intrique (imo) in watching a women who is a mega slut going around sleeping with people, we all know that if a decent looking women with big tits wants to go around sleeping with loads of people, she can, very easily.

Sorry for the text wall! But hey, there is some h-game player psychology for you...(lol)

 

[Welkin2]

FinalCloud

Having played thru the game, I am not sure if slutty is the right word to describe Jiao Long. She will be playing the role of the corrupter, which usually belongs to the male characters... so she needs this kind of personality. Her first scene with Xiong Hu may come across as a little slutty... but this is to help portrait her appetite for both men and women down the road. And if we proceed with the story, there is enough going on to show that she isn't a nymphomaniac. She doesn't have always have sex on her mind. If anything, she is devious and calculating (with ensnaring Leanna and NTRing Jeanne being top on her long list of ulterior motives). To me, that makes her a more colourful and fun character. There is quite a bit more depth to Jiao Long's character than what has been shown in the prologue. Tentacle3g's comment about her not being human is because she is a divine beast with a human-like appearance.

Jeanne is probably the closest one to being "pure" on the main cast, and Leanna does not start off as a slut despite her side job. (Nero is the virgin, but...) Anyway, the game's characters offer a diverse variety.

 

[omgyourmom]

i want to become a patron on patreon but it wants me to give an address. Why's that?

also, i get a black screen after this fight

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