[Complete - Full] [RJ155863] - Sarah of the Rotation Cut v2.2.1 - Translation v2.3.2

[kR1pt0n1t3]

Don't get your hopes up. The release will probably take another week or two.
Christmas is coming up so I probably won't work much on the game.

The translation itself is close (my notepad regex says ~27 lines) to completion but I don't plan to release it until I've made everything I set my mind to do.
Plus, I still have to go through the lines at least once, fix grammar mistakes, rewrite lines I find appalling and squash any potential bugs I find.
In short, I'll polish the game as much as I can once I finish the translation.

I spent too much time on the game to stop giving crap almost near the end.

 

[FinalCloud]

Haha, its cool, good luck with the last few bits and I look forward to the release =)

 

[rizo]

I just tried the link in the main post and most things are translated but the main characters name isn't translated. Not sure if you know this or not but just thought I'd post letting you know. I only played a little bit cuz I plan on waiting until the full translation to give this a go cuz it looks great! Keep being awesome and hope you had a good holiday.

 

[camikaa]

Oh yees, it looks like it's nearly getting that [Complete - Full] tag!
Fighto! Fighto!

 

[kR1pt0n1t3]

I just tried the link in the main post and most things are translated but the main characters name isn't translated. Not sure if you know this or not but just thought I'd post letting you know. I only played a little bit cuz I plan on waiting until the full translation to give this a go cuz it looks great! Keep being awesome and hope you had a good holiday.

I don't get it? What's not translated?

I just downloaded the game from the link in the first post, started the game and the name is translated.
Are you sure you're not loading another save file where the name wasn't translated?

 

[rizo]

I don't get it? What's not translated?

I just downloaded the game from the link in the first post, started the game and the name is translated.
Are you sure you're not loading another save file where the name wasn't translated?

Oh I just had a look again, it's my bad I loaded a bad save. Starting the game normally is fine. Sorry for the false report.
Hyped to play this, keep being awesome.

 

[kR1pt0n1t3]

*BUMP*

 

[camikaa]

Congratulations on the completion!
I'll play and report if I find anything that seems to be wrong

A big thank you and happy new year

 

[elfloren]

Hey kR1pt0, good job! I will definitely give it a try ^_^

 

[camikaa]

Hello!
As I mentioned about reporting stuff, even if they are minor I'll report them.
(And I hope people don't see this as a bad thing, I like to report, even if it's small stuffs so the translations can become even better over the time)
So at the Openning:

Spoiler

It's missing a space after "Bals" and there is a double space after "his"

First encounter with Miya, the Innkeeper:

Spoiler

Rather "then" ~ than

Following after, at conversation with Aramis and Porthos:

Spoiler

"teacger"

 

[kR1pt0n1t3]

Thx Camikaa for reporting those. Fixed those you mentioned but gonna upload after few days, I'm sure there's much more like those.
If it's easier for you, you don't need to upload screenshots. Just write the line row where the grammar mistake is, I can easily find it in notepad by using search and find.

 

[camikaa]

Thx Camikaa for reporting those. Fixed those you mentioned but gonna upload after few days, I'm sure there's much more like those.
If it's easier for you, you don't need to upload screenshots. Just write the line row where the grammar mistake is, I can easily find it in notepad by using search and find.

Not a problem! And Ok I'll just write the phrase so you can copy paste making it easier for you to find.

First time entering the temple, talking with Eleanor:
"heared" ~ heard
"By the way, I heared that Aramis is going to confess to you."

Edit 1:
After confusion at the barrier:
"Porthos, we should start looking for new girl soon shouldn't we then?"

I think the phrase should be either looking for a new girl ~ or looking for new girls

Afterwards, Lana phrase:
"to" ~ too
"You've had to much drinks, Karen."

Edit 2:
After having sex with Aramis for the first time, while on the bed
"cums" ~ comes
Aramis:
"Actually, I won't say it now... As long as I can make up my mind when the time cums..."

Edit 3:
First scene with Peta-kun, at the cave:
"rapidily" ~ rapidly

"Peta was driven by sexual excitement that he had never experienced before and he began rubbing his penis rapidily along Sarah's crotch."

Edit 4:
First scene with the Old Man at the Inn:
"cum" ~ come
Sarah:
"Well, I'll cum again."
(She's saying goodbye and confirming that she'll come over again)

Edit 5:
Missing space at "ship,there"
Acient Temple Secret I:
"If you go through the cave in the west foresdt, and then go north, cross a lake in the ship,there you will find the Temple of the Goddess Aphrodite."
It's a book inside Military Academy

Edit 6:
There is something wrong with the class event, inside Military Academy.
After you go inside the class and speak with the kids and Porthos, Sarah will go out of the classroom and the game will get a black screen, while the sounds are still playing and you can even open the menu, etc.

Save file for testing:

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Edit 7:
After reforging Sarah's sword at the blacksmith:
"cum" ~ come
Zomahofu:
"If you want me to reforge it again, cum again tomorrow."

Edit 8:
Rentan scene after beating 4 monsters on the field.
"gradully" ~ gradually
"Rentan gradully increased the speed of his hand that was rubbing Sarah's clitoris."

Edit 9:
This phrase looks a bit odd, at least on my opinion:
NSFW image.

Spoiler

Punishment for getting home too late.

Edit 10:
Peta and Aslan peeping, second event:
"Porthosn" ~ Porthos
Aslan:
"Oh, amazing... That's a pussy that teacher Porthosn was talking about, right?"

Edit 11:
Swordsman at the north watchtower
"outisde" ~ outside
"I think I heard a woman's voice outisde..."

 

[Malvezzi]

Finally, just what I've been waiting for a while.

Once again, thank you very much for another translation. This is a very nice New Year present.

 

[camikaa]

More reports

Zomahofu:
"cum" ~ come
"But if I end up in bed again, Sarah will cum again and nurse me back ot health."

Edit 1:
One of Aramis scenes at the Military Academy
Aramis:
"you" ~ your
"I want to put it inside you ass next, Sarah."

Edit 2:
Female Bodyguard at South Watchtower, after Aramis break up thing
"Stiil" ~ Still
Female Bodyguard:
"Stiil, there's one thing I don't understand. Atos he says he loves me..."

Edit 3:
Mowing Uncle:
"insideh" ~ inside
"Damn him, I was about to put it insideh her..."

Edit 4:
There is a bug on the event inside Armor and Item Shop, where you ask to buy panties with a hole in the middle.
After asking Mierupa, he starts to walk to the left and then the game freezes up.

Save file for testing:

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Edit 5:
Wallis at Armor and Item Shop
"very" ~ were
Wallis:
"What's the matter? Last time you very peeking, you masturbated. Why aren't you doing it now?"

Afterwards:
"cummed" ~ came
Sarah:
"Uhhh...Haaaa....Haaaa... He cummed inside me..."

And afterwards as well:
Mierupa:
"Haa... haa... When you cum, make sure to scream that You came? by my dick!!"

"You came?" ~ you came

Edit 6:
Mon:
"Please cum again."

"cum" ~ come

Edit 7:
At the Inn in the evening, Gordon event:
"You came?" ~ you came
Sarah:
"It's hard to wipe it off my ass since You came? so much...

Afterwards
Pilgrim:
"No, just say if you like me or not."

It should be "like her or not" since the Pilgrim is asking Gordon about Natalia

Edit 8:
Old Man at the Inn:
"swallowed" ~ swallow

Sarah:
"Of course, because my friend said that she'd swallowed it too..."

Edit 8:
Old Man at the Inn:
Untranslated name
NSFW image:

Spoiler

 

[mio262]

Hi, I found stuck bug. When I talk to the cashier to buy the heartless panties, after the dialogue finish he move to the left and the game would freeze. During that time, I couldn't open the window or move. Did anybody get this same bug?
Edit: I was able to bypass this bug by loading the save file into a clean game without the recent translation and played from the save. I put back in the original game where is it first created and it didn't freeze so far..

 

[kR1pt0n1t3]

Copy this inside data folder to fix that stuck bug inside the shop.

#!0LoiwTpA!KV82UP0rEKYtQjxskqubkb0QAal6Nq-fAlDBcsUmbjs

I'm still looking into why the screen goes black inside the military academy. It's something weird as fuck. I can't see anything wrong inside the code.
I have to go now but I'll look it up again when I come home.

 

[crazybat]

Wow Nice Job Kr1pt0n13!!. Now I need to find some time to actually play it. I've played a partial translated version but was never able to finish it, because I got stuck by bugs.
Have a full translations sure is going to make this game much more fun knowing whats actually going on!

 

[rizo]

Thanks ! This is going to be fun! I as well as many others appreciate the work you put into this. I will buy this game after a few days when I get the money.

 

[kR1pt0n1t3]

I fixed both of the bugs that were reported. I updated the link in the first post.
You can copy save files to new translation version and everything should work without any problems.

 

[camikaa]

Thanks for the fixes! I'll continue to report anything else that I might find.
Also, does anyone know if I'll block myself from events/scenes if I did not enter the classroom inside Military Academy before breaking up with Aramis? As for now I cannot enter it anymore.

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Edit 1:
Inside the temple, talking with Prelate about the red crystal.
"Marena" ~ Melena
"Portos" ~ Porthos

Sarah:
"Aramis has Marena, Atos and Portos also have ones they love, and they are just starting their lives..."

Edit2:
One of Gordon's scenes.
"becasue" ~ because

Sarah:
"That's becasue it feels good..."