Re: Mirvik (COMMENTS THREAD)
It's possible I did use too many words, not really sure without going back to look it all over, but thanks for the input, glad you liked it.
Part 2 is now up, hopefully it's as good as the first one is.
Future parts will have a lot of scene switching for a while as things for the first 'act' of the line really heat up and begin to affect more and more people/worlds. So expect in future parts to see quite a number of different place in a hurry.