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Re: Just Twisting About
Been a while since I looked at this thread, so some comments.
Nice sketch(last pic), what are all the background things? And it seems a bit strange to see her right knee in combination with her feet/legs like that(Right for her, not for the viewer), though that may just be because it's a sketch, and I'm looking at details. Arms, and head are looking very good though, and the rest of the body is nice.
The tentacle one, all useful feedback was given by DeMatt already, so I'll just say I like it.
The furry picture, it shows that it's a first furry picture(Pictures of furries in general are just different from pictures of humans/tentacle monsters), as the face on the pink one seems..Weird, because of the nuzzle's position/size. Besides that, nice shadow effect on the smaller blobs of cum, and overall just a nice picture.
So, yeah, nice pictures
Been a while since I looked at this thread, so some comments.
Nice sketch(last pic), what are all the background things? And it seems a bit strange to see her right knee in combination with her feet/legs like that(Right for her, not for the viewer), though that may just be because it's a sketch, and I'm looking at details. Arms, and head are looking very good though, and the rest of the body is nice.
The tentacle one, all useful feedback was given by DeMatt already, so I'll just say I like it.
The furry picture, it shows that it's a first furry picture(Pictures of furries in general are just different from pictures of humans/tentacle monsters), as the face on the pink one seems..Weird, because of the nuzzle's position/size. Besides that, nice shadow effect on the smaller blobs of cum, and overall just a nice picture.
So, yeah, nice pictures
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Re: Just Twisting About
the things in the background are things belonging to horror series that needed to die but just never did
Freddy Krueger's hand, Jigsaw's mask, Chucky's head, Jason's Mask, a badly drawn Leatherface's leatherface, Candyman's hook-hand, Pinhead's head, and a Phantasm sphere.
Her knee might be off, I'll look into it a bit more
the things in the background are things belonging to horror series that needed to die but just never did
Freddy Krueger's hand, Jigsaw's mask, Chucky's head, Jason's Mask, a badly drawn Leatherface's leatherface, Candyman's hook-hand, Pinhead's head, and a Phantasm sphere.
Her knee might be off, I'll look into it a bit more
Re: Just Twisting About
I think the "problem" with the knees is that it's just a sketch so far. Either she's walking forwards (in which case the legs are just all bad, because the thighs look to be at the same position), or she's leaning against a wall with one foot stuck out and the other bent back and directly under her (which I think is the goal). There'd probably have to be some kind of glass case there to hold the trophies, for her to lean against.
To put yourself into a similar posture, stand with your back to a wall, put your hands under your butt on the wall, stick a foot out in front, then transfer your weight to your outflung foot. Your weight will be carried by said foot and the wall, while your other foot simply rests.
I think it'll look better once Twisted adds some colouring and shading, thereby emphasizing the bends and position.
I think the "problem" with the knees is that it's just a sketch so far. Either she's walking forwards (in which case the legs are just all bad, because the thighs look to be at the same position), or she's leaning against a wall with one foot stuck out and the other bent back and directly under her (which I think is the goal). There'd probably have to be some kind of glass case there to hold the trophies, for her to lean against.
To put yourself into a similar posture, stand with your back to a wall, put your hands under your butt on the wall, stick a foot out in front, then transfer your weight to your outflung foot. Your weight will be carried by said foot and the wall, while your other foot simply rests.
I think it'll look better once Twisted adds some colouring and shading, thereby emphasizing the bends and position.
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Hum. I know I said it'd look better with shading... and it does... but it doesn't look as good as I thought it would. Lessee:
Hum. I know I said it'd look better with shading... and it does... but it doesn't look as good as I thought it would. Lessee:
- I like the bloodless version better. If she's had enough time to make a trophy wall, why's she still bloody?
- Is that metal pipe thingy her weapon that she's carrying, or is it a pipe she's hanging from? Because if the former...
- ... then her left shin and the bottom of her right foot need to be DARKER. They're tilted down and away from the viewer.
- For that matter, I think her right foot is angled too far up. How far out is that right leg sticking, anyways?
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Re: Just Twisting About
Maybe she just took a bath filled with the blood of a thousand virgins?
Maybe she just took a bath filled with the blood of a thousand virgins?
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it would, if the light was coming from a different angle
but yes, that is her excessively large weapon
as fer the leg stickin' out, not quite sure as to how far exactly it is. Im gonna say that if she were to pull a 90* turn, her heel would most likely be right before the candyman hook, horizontally.
as fer the blood, maybe she just got done blowing somebody apart. I kinda added it in because i felt it gave it a bit more of a badass feel.
There's something about people covered in the blood of their enemies that's just badass. I'unno why, it just is.
it would, if the light was coming from a different angle
but yes, that is her excessively large weapon
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(i know theres no scope in that one, but ive seen it with one, that one just shows the immensity of it more)as fer the leg stickin' out, not quite sure as to how far exactly it is. Im gonna say that if she were to pull a 90* turn, her heel would most likely be right before the candyman hook, horizontally.
as fer the blood, maybe she just got done blowing somebody apart. I kinda added it in because i felt it gave it a bit more of a badass feel.
There's something about people covered in the blood of their enemies that's just badass. I'unno why, it just is.
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Re: Just Twisting About
Quite sorry about this picture, its not hentai at all!
No nudity even
Had to size it down to 1024x1280, the original is 2048x2560
Though, if you want the full one, here:
Quite sorry about this picture, its not hentai at all!
No nudity even
Had to size it down to 1024x1280, the original is 2048x2560
Though, if you want the full one, here:
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