A very hesitant attempt

[Vicissitudo]

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[Sin]

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I don't know if I'm retarded, or it's just my style, but it seems as if her lips (both set's) are lacking some color.

Also I think you might want to make her toenails, and fingernails a bit whiter, or different from skin tone.

Just tips from my own style I guess.

Edit:

Spoiler

Her asshole might be a bit too pink.

 

[Vicissitudo]

Re: A very hesitant Attempt...

I don't know if I'm retarded, or it's just my style, but it seems as if her lips (both set's) are lacking some color.

Also I think you might want to make her toenails, and fingernails a bit whiter, or different from skin tone.

Just tips from my own style I guess.

Edit:

Spoiler

Her asshole might be a bit too pink.

Well yes, you are absolutely right. I just had not the time to do it yet!
I will in the next steps for sure.

Asshole too pink? Roger that! I'm gonna wipe her ass very w-...I mean, I'm going to fix that too. Thanks!

 

[chrisroxxx]

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Make it more juicy like

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. One of my favourite asshole artists 'Gunnmx'!

 

[Sin]

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Make it more juicy like

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. One of my favourite asshole artists 'Gunnmx'!

That butt hole is pretty scary..looks like the Sarlacc pit from Return of the Jedi.
Lol jk.

 

[chrisroxxx]

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It's hypnotastic, haha!

 

[Vicissitudo]

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I wasn't really satisfied...I reworked the whole thing a bit...

Back to shadings now..

 

[Raredragon]

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I wasn't really satisfied...I reworked the whole thing a bit...

Back to shadings now..

glorious. Loving the eyes!

 

[Vicissitudo]

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Damn, the drawing is getting me in too much. I'm seriously having fun with it!
I have to go back to work though...

Here another update.

Let me know what you think about it!

 

[Sin]

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Tbh,
I think I liked the other head more, but it's your art broham.

I think this new head looks a bit stiff, maybe raise it, and or tilt it a bit.

That's all I got for now.

 

[Vicissitudo]

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Tbh,
I think I liked the other head more, but it's your art broham.

I think this new head looks a bit stiff, maybe raise it, and or tilt it a bit.

That's all I got for now.

You might be right but I had a big "fight" with the older head. With the hair and the shoulders really looked weird to me.

Right now I'm into minor adjustments and finish the artwork. Next piece will be hopefully better!

Anyway thank you for the comment and good criticism! I appreciate!

 

[Perfeccia Ars]

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I have to admit that I really envy how you're so flexible when working with your art. The shading, lightning and the styles you have showed are great. Nice work.

 

[chrisroxxx]

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I really like how you did the eyes brows the shading/colouring, the red shading below the eyes makes her look even more kinky, alot of attention to detail I really like it,,,,, sadly not so much detail when it comes to the mouth and the nose it's in total contrast to the afore mentioned.
Maybe it's not just the lack of detail, the more I look at it when I compare it to the eyes and brows the lines in general are contrasting, more wide/lulled not as defined and distinctive as the upper portion of the face.
Don't read too much into it, but the nose and mouth definetly strike me a bit odd at least while taking a first glance, they grow on me when I take a longer look, though!...

Here is my favourite artist, when it comes to drawing faces and facial expressions,

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, maybe it helps with your process...

 

[Vicissitudo]

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I have to admit that I really envy how you're so flexible when working with your art. The shading, lightning and the styles you have showed are great. Nice work.

Oh, well thank you! However, this is actually my very first hentai artwork. I've still have a lot to learn... I opened this thread because I needed the courage and motivation to restart drawing. Hentai was a good theme and did the trick! I'm having fun!

I really like how you did the eyes brows the shading/colouring, the red shading below the eyes makes her look even more kinky, alot of attention to detail I really like it,,,,, sadly not so much detail when it comes to the mouth and the nose it's in total contrast to the afore mentioned.
Maybe it's not just the lack of detail, the more I look at it when I compare it to the eyes and brows the lines in general are contrasting, more wide/lulled not as defined and distinctive as the upper portion of the face.
Don't read too much into it, but the nose and mouth definetly strike me a bit odd at least while taking a first glance, they grow on me when I take a longer look, though!...

Here is my favourite artist, when it comes to drawing faces and facial expressions,

You must be registered to see the links

, maybe it helps with your process...

Thank you for the constructive feedback and for the link! I always welcome any kind of criticism.

Honestly I am "leaving" her face for later. I'm still retouching her treats time by time so I'm postdating the refines.
Eyes, nose and lips will be enhanced with colors and details as well as the hair too. I'm also considering to add some tattoos and piercings here and there. Not sure though.

I will do it as a very last passage!

I'll post an updated version of the artwork soon, I'm on it right now.

 

[Vicissitudo]

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Almost done...

 

[Vicissitudo]

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[LustFire]

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Heh. It's great that you got it done! I kinda got pounded by Hentai-Foundary's commentators, so my CG is gonna take a while to finish.

Some of the body placements are questionable, such as the top right guy. I'm a little curious what his right shin looks like. Anyways, keep it up! There's more to explore.

 

[chrisroxxx]

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I'm also considering to add some tattoos and piercings here and there. Not sure though.

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considering piercings and tattos, btw it's sparrow, just laugh, don't think about it too much!

I think she has like...27 piercings, well I did just count once, maybe I missed some...

 

[Crawdaddy]

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I was a bit surprised by the sudden face change. The new one, while perhaps more appealing, looks a bit generic and expressionless, imho. The first face had a look of slight shyness to it, that I found interesting, this one looks... I don't know, really - which I guess is the problem I'm getting at. It's a pretty face, but it's just sort of there.

Beyond that, I think the piece is very solid.

 

[Sin]

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The bubble on the black guys cock head was a nice touch. Nice piece Vicissitudo.