On your sheet: Your HP should be 55, your PP should be 40, your speed should be 6 after your armors EV (that should be in parenthesis or something in case your armor gets torn off,) your Dodge should be 33 instead of 32, and you loose Sensitive and Open Soul from your Flaws. All that said, I'm still making your thread, so make sure you fix all that whenever you get the chance.
I'm not sure how I failed to notice this, but you've got a big problem on your DG2 sheet: Some of your main stats have odd numbers. That isn't allowed at all. You get 25 points for the 3 primary stats (Body/Mind/Spirit) and each of those increase a stat by 2. I did that to keep the math, which has a lot of division by 2, from getting completely fucked. Also, your stats are absurdly high. They total to 74, which is absurdly high considering you only have the 1 "Strong of" Talent, even with the bonus from being an elf, it shouldn't be that high. Did you, by chance, combine it with Full Blooded Demon?
Something that was pointed out to me: Your background says your characters mother was kidnapped by demons, and implies that your character was born from them. That would make your character half-demon, not half-daemon. Daemons are more like the gods in DG.