Diego
Jungle Girl
- Joined
- Aug 12, 2014
- Messages
- 26
- Reputation score
- 6
Strong NTR needs a proper build up, where the roles of A and B as the initial couple are clearly defined.
Plus points if there are parts of the story:
...showing how A and B properly developed feelings for each other.
...introducing C, who clearly wants to steal B from A.
...where A and B try to overcome a challenge together, which could be orchestrated by C or needs C's participation.
...where B starts to trust C or C manages to find ways to interact with B.
...where B starts to distance herself/himself from A. C spends time with B.
...where A doesn't trust C/B and tries to save the relationship.
...where B questions staying with A. A's efforts are not enough but still thinks there is hope for their relationship.
...where B starts to actively seek and prioritize C over B.
...where B no longer is interested with A or is forced to stay with C.
...where C and B reveal their relationship to A. A ultimately despairs.
Minus points if any of the previous developments are not properly handled or are skipped completely. For example :
C stealing B without any effort.
Most H mangas and doujins go this route with the "my current mate doesn´t properly satisfy me so I sleep with the first person I meet" which is basically cheating.
A doing nothing to stop C's efforts.
Another common route, in this case A just simply doesn't do anything, hoping the situation will be fixed by itself.
...showing how A and B properly developed feelings for each other.
...introducing C, who clearly wants to steal B from A.
...where A and B try to overcome a challenge together, which could be orchestrated by C or needs C's participation.
...where B starts to trust C or C manages to find ways to interact with B.
...where B starts to distance herself/himself from A. C spends time with B.
...where A doesn't trust C/B and tries to save the relationship.
...where B questions staying with A. A's efforts are not enough but still thinks there is hope for their relationship.
...where B starts to actively seek and prioritize C over B.
...where B no longer is interested with A or is forced to stay with C.
...where C and B reveal their relationship to A. A ultimately despairs.
Minus points if any of the previous developments are not properly handled or are skipped completely. For example :
C stealing B without any effort.
Most H mangas and doujins go this route with the "my current mate doesn´t properly satisfy me so I sleep with the first person I meet" which is basically cheating.
A doing nothing to stop C's efforts.
Another common route, in this case A just simply doesn't do anything, hoping the situation will be fixed by itself.
-The player identifies with A, interested in the feeling of despair upon the realization of losing B.
-The player identifies with B, interested in enjoying B's transformation or suffering.
-The player identifies with C, interested in feeling superior upon achieving what was intended.
-The player identifies with nobody, an spectator who was merely interested in the schadenfreude.
