Re: Cohabitation
A'ight.
I liked this, it was no nonsense. I like no nonsense. I found it this morning and thought the content updates were coming pretty quickly from your posts here. Hope the break doesn't wreck that too badly. Didn't run into any horrific bugs, just some grammar here and there so these are general observations:
1. Pop up a number somewhere for the current $ owned. I just kind of worked when I felt like it but lost track and didn't want to run out of cash so kept working 'to be sure'. I downloaded a save editor when I hit the 'end' and had idiotic amounts of cash.
I didn't mind not knowing lust/lewd/affection/suspicion to be honest. Since it's not 'your' stat, it seemed appropriate to not have an easily accessible digit assigned. I wouldn't even mind 'Affection [slightly/somewhat/greatly] increased', but that's subjective.
2. "Temptin' as it is, though, I'm not that big of a creepy asshole to actually rape her...", he said, as he thrust his dick between the thighs of a passed out, bare-breasted, blood-related female, whom he sneakily gave a massive dose of sleeping pills the night before.
Either the game needs some self-awareness or Calvin does. He's the creepiest of assholes.
3. You said in the OP you hope discussing the game will motivate you to keep working on it. You might not appreciate this bit of advice but I'm pledging a bit of dosh to Nverjos' Coceter Chronicles and he's got a 'I'm making this, pledge or don't'-attitude. He's got a single, $1 pledge tier up. I understand the 5/10/25 tiers look... professional, but personally, it's the single $1 tier that got me to pledge to Nverjos. Yes, someone can do a custom no reward pledge, but it's the message you send to visitors with a small donation tier that gets their attention. If you enjoy engaging and post repeatedly, pulling any patrons into development with polls and regular updates, that's both a motivator and a selling point.
No, Nverjos' patreon isn't going to make him rich (at least I hope not, the rich ones are the laziest ones), but I'll bet money he wouldn't have a tenth the patrons with 5/10/25.
Then again if your single patron gives you a fat 28 dollars you might say '200 pledges can suck it'.
4. Someone mentioned it already, but the leave confirmation is slightly unnecessary. Maybe even a way to single-click to every room from Megan's would be tits.
5. I'd love to see the spying livened up a bit by maybe varying Megan's wardrobe/comfort levels. Shy and socially awkward broad should probably change really really quickly with that pitiful divider to safeguard her from scumbag uncle.
I'll admit I'm no game designer so how you'd implement this is beyond me, but I feel like once you click the divider once, there's no reason to click it again.
