I would say I am very grateful for the translation of this, and will be buying your next translated game also, because the translation was good.
I enjoyed the game, it was good in some ways, BUT I personally feel it was quite overrated.
I enjoy things like outfits and things happening in combat (i.e. ecchi +cloth dmg etc).
Neither of these applied in this game (in any way that the player could control). I also did not really find Makina getting into any paticularly erotic situations, they almost all consisted of
"do you want to get banged for x reason" and then Makina just being like; yea sure, why not, slightly reluctantly at first until she becomes a slut. I also felt that there was a bit of a lack of variety in the CGs (sex positions etc), the Momo scenes for example were all fairly dull imo, 2/3 scenes or so with the merchant guy, they were all basically the same from a CG PoV. Similar with say, the final Makina scene for the massage, I was just like yea different dialogue, but the CG is pretty much identical to the last one. Oh also, no Makina gangbang scene was a bit of a bummer.