Lurker Wars: The Exiles

[Bartnum]

Alright, so this is an idea I came up with the other day and was encouraged to pursue. It's basically a continuation of the story of the original Lurker Wars, based in part on the actual events. It'll focus on 5 members in particular, though that's not to say that the other members won't appear.

I'm not promising regular updates or decent writing. I'll bring out new chapters whenever I can, and I'm open to suggestion in terms of plot, but if I don't find the time to write it (or at least write it well), then that's that.

So, yeah. Leave comments here. NOT IN THE STORY THREAD.

 

[Momiji]

Re: Lurker Wars: The Exiles

Very very cool, and a nice spin-off idea from the original LW. I sense a bit of A-Team vibe when you're describing the group itself.

 

[Sinfulwolf]

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I agree with Mo. It is a great set-up and spin off from the original, and the prologue you've got up reminds me of Mad Max in a way. Interested to see if you keep at it and see what happens.

Also, will this be happening alongside my own sequel of sorts, or will it ignore that entirely?

 

[DarkFire1004]

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LEAVE ME ALONE. I'LL FINISH THAT FINAL CHAPTER AT SOME POINT. IT'S SUMMER. I SWEAR I'LL FINISH IT THIS TIME. REALLY.

But uh... Yeah, great idea. I'd love to see this go on.

 

[Bartnum]

Re: Lurker Wars: The Exiles

It'll ignore yours, Sin.

I've got a rough idea of the next chapter planned out, so I'll try and get it done sometime this week.

EDIT: Chapter 1 is finished, and will be uploaded soon.

EDIT2: Chapter 1 is now uploaded.

 

[Sinfulwolf]

Re: Lurker Wars: The Exiles

Sounds good. Was just checking for when I do pick up mine again. Makes it easier for both of us.

 

[Obeliskos]

Re: Lurker Wars: The Exiles

I feel like I'm being portrayed as some cocksucking rebel without a cause
also you WILL note darkfire's burning passion for me at least 10 times in every chapter

 

[Nunu]

Re: Lurker Wars: The Exiles

cocksucking rebel maybe, but I always thought you where loyal to the cause.

 

[Obeliskos]

Re: Lurker Wars: The Exiles

I forgot I put "cocksucking" in my post so I thought you were just insulting me

 

[Momiji]

Re: Lurker Wars: The Exiles

I feel like I'm being portrayed as some cocksucking rebel without a cause

oh shit bart is portraying obe exactly how he is

stop the fucking presses

 

[Obeliskos]

Re: Lurker Wars: The Exiles

stop pretending to be me you wannabe piece of shit nigger

where's darkfire I need my lover

 

[Momiji]

Re: Lurker Wars: The Exiles

stop pretending to be me you wannabe piece of shit nigger

where's darkfire I need my lover

oh jesus more insults

oh god another gay reference too bad it's not funny

it was never funny fuck you

 

[DarkFire1004]

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Am I too late for the orgy?

 

[Obeliskos]

Re: Lurker Wars: The Exiles

ban mo from life he's trying to be me

DARKFIRE YOU'RE BACK <3

 

[DarkFire1004]

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Well maybe if you would look four degrees to the right, you would notice that I've always been here. ):

 

[Momiji]

Re: Lurker Wars: The Exiles

So yeah, going back on topic...

Do you have a general idea of where you want to go with the story in general, Bart?

 

[Wonderboy]

Re: Lurker Wars: The Exiles

So yeah, going back on topic...

Do you have a general idea of where you want to go with the story in general, Bart?

Redundancy is redundant.

Speaking of which, please put up a spoiler warning in the discussions of coming events so that you don't spoil the coming events for us.

 

[Bartnum]

Re: Lurker Wars: The Exiles

I've got no intention of spoiling any upcoming events.

And yes, I do have a rough idea of where I'm taking it.

 

[Bartnum]

Re: Lurker Wars: The Exiles

Chapter 2 is now up, comprising my first attempt at an action/fight sequence.

 

[Sinfulwolf]

Re: Lurker Wars: The Exiles

I think ye did an excellent job with the action sequence. My only real critique is that when multiple characters are present you should say who's speaking. It's easy enough to understand when there are only two people in the sequence, but when there's more it can be difficult to tell who is doing the talking.