Just finished the game on both Amore and Elona. I think the CG for Tomoe under Amore is bugged. I couldn't save Tomoe's pokegal under Amore's storyline. Not a big loss considering you can get the CG under Elonaa's story. Just frustrating as I had to reload several times to try and figure out what was wrong.
Doesn't help that I can't figure out where to see a pokegal's affinity is either
I saved her just fine on my save... the only error i meet in the entire game was the Mushroom girl already in evolved form and evolving again. Outside of this, translation is awesome. However keep in mind that the "answers" to the pokegal between the scenes will trigger the variations, since game has no NG+ or explanation... based in the combinations of ur answers, u can invade the Black Team corps, and not kill/trample on the scientist(Tamato) then place her in re-habilitation route, then she will say something about a locker and a key, u move to one of the lockers in the other screen and Tomoe pocket gal will be there at the end of the road... well, i think it may change based in the answers u give to Amore while playing though.