PokeGirls,Pokemorpgh,Pokemon Enthisics

[MacdaddyG]

I have found a very sexy interactive story that I wish to spread to this forum.
I enjoyed it but it look like it has no one to help input. I decided I would work on it but I wanted to encorage some of you to help out if you like it.

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[the_taken]

Re: PokeGirls,Pokemorpgh,Pokemon Enthisics

To many chefs spoil the broth (or something like that.)

When you let anyone write the next part of the story, you get weird stuff. Just following one path has gotten me some weird things where two girls get pregnant, lay an egg each, then three weeks later there's Pokeboys.

First part of the story is well written... I guess. But the quality seriously fluctuates as it goes.

My story is better.

 

[MacdaddyG]

Re: PokeGirls,Pokemorpgh,Pokemon Enthisics

Yah I like your story alot too
and some pll on those stories like to mess around but i think that story can be quite good and I like the idea
So if u mindur a great writer maybe u could find the time to input a few paragraphs

 

[MacdaddyG]

Re: PokeGirls,Pokemorpgh,Pokemon Enthisics

Lol double post

If you bother looking at the at the interactive book I'm MacdaddyG, so far the one to post the most since january, those our my examples of writing