TheMagister
Demon Girl
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Re: Seeds of Chaos [Ren'Py]
I wonder how your game will progress in keeping all the events random...It's hypocritical of Alexia to critique you claiming Helayna when she falls into a drunken fervor with Greyhide. It would be odd to trigger her library scene with Andras if she's already been more corrupted later in the story.
I can understand keeping all the sex as separate events, so people who don't want NTR/gay/straight stuff can just keep their likes and dislikes separate, but I also think the game loses something in a continuity level. That library scene is exactly alluring because it shows a change in Alexia's character, a growing corruption. I think the story would benefit from having scenes more linked together, forming chain of events that tie them all together.
Also, I am not as critical of momdadno's art as other people seem to be, but I must say, when I saw the Cla-min artwork I was a bit disappointed. Her sprite shows her to be shortstack while the artwork portrays her as more human-like. I think you spend most of your money on artwork, right? Then it's important to make sure that the art is high quality (generally good) and consistent (less so).
I wonder how your game will progress in keeping all the events random...It's hypocritical of Alexia to critique you claiming Helayna when she falls into a drunken fervor with Greyhide. It would be odd to trigger her library scene with Andras if she's already been more corrupted later in the story.
I can understand keeping all the sex as separate events, so people who don't want NTR/gay/straight stuff can just keep their likes and dislikes separate, but I also think the game loses something in a continuity level. That library scene is exactly alluring because it shows a change in Alexia's character, a growing corruption. I think the story would benefit from having scenes more linked together, forming chain of events that tie them all together.
Also, I am not as critical of momdadno's art as other people seem to be, but I must say, when I saw the Cla-min artwork I was a bit disappointed. Her sprite shows her to be shortstack while the artwork portrays her as more human-like. I think you spend most of your money on artwork, right? Then it's important to make sure that the art is high quality (generally good) and consistent (less so).