Re: Madrigal OOC Chatter
Ah, I see the reset!
1) Change the race to 'Daemon'. Just 'Daemon'. She can look
like a part-dragon, or a part demon (and demons look very different in this game from the usual, so referencing either them or dragons may be more loaded than you think! Kattunge left an image on the first or second page of this thread if you want to peek!) but she can't
be part anything just now.
2) For personality, I would
love if you took this character and made her up as if she lived on this planet, instead of outright telling us that you just picked her up from somewhere else and plopped her in. I have no qualms against people cloning characters that they like, but I
do get frustrated when they don't bother to make up a personality to suit the different life that that same character undoubtedly had and instead use examples from other roleplays to fill in the blanks. :x Sorry, just a peeve of mine. Was Mithral always a slave, born and bred in a pit only to be sold off to the Burrows? If she was always a slave, what kind was she -- trained for pleasure or for fighting, maybe? Whatever way you cut it, she'll be wondering why the Burrows are so different. Was she a free-born daemon but she or her clan were captured and sold off to slavery? Did she have any masters between being captured/leaving her original training pit? You don't have to answer these all specifically, but they're things to keep in mind while making a character for Madrigal, because they're going to have an impact on how your character thinks and acts!
3) Little nitpick, but I'm going to say it again anyways.
Mithral is a dragongirl of the far east, a half-and-half with a body of a female human, with silvery scales on most of her body.
should wind up sounding something like:
"Mithral is an exotic looking, humanoid female daemon, her silver-scaled body resembling an eastern dragon out of earth's myth."
The rest of her description is fine, it's just that by saying 'dragongirl', you're referencing Mithral to the five dragon species that actually inhabit Madrigal -- non of which look anything like Mithral. XD The 'far east' of Madrigal is quite likely very different from earth's conception of what 'far east' means... hell, maybe the Burrows
are the far east for that planet! 'With a body of a female human' isn't necessary if you state that she's a humanoid daemon, as humanoid daemons look much like humans anyhow. I guess you could elaborate: 'she looks very much like a human female/woman, but with [insert next descriptions here]'.
XD I hope that all isn't too much. I will go clarify the rules in the character sign up that by 'any species', I mean 'any species found in the world at present'! ^_^"" Sorry for any miscommunication there!