Jungle girl[No the thread is not misplaced]
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Re: Jungle girl[No the thread is not misplaced]
Judging from this picture,she needs more boob. Could be just the arms messing with the perspective, though.
I fixed the lips, I hope. I also reverted to previous color scheme. The updated pic replaced the original frame. If there are strong opinions on colors, I'd like to hear them. Recolor is easy, but the more pics get made, the longer it takes to switch.
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Judging from this picture,she needs more boob. Could be just the arms messing with the perspective, though.
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Re: Jungle girl[No the thread is not misplaced]
It may just be me, but the legs seem a little long in proportion to the actual body
It may just be me, but the legs seem a little long in proportion to the actual body
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I finally got what about her lips in the first pic annoy me. Even though she's scared or whatever, the lower lip shouldn't be curved like that. It's still a convex shape.
I dunno if you considered it, but you could use the old artwork and trace it, then improve what you think needs improving and making animation based on that, instead of having to make a totally new char design.
I finally got what about her lips in the first pic annoy me. Even though she's scared or whatever, the lower lip shouldn't be curved like that. It's still a convex shape.
I dunno if you considered it, but you could use the old artwork and trace it, then improve what you think needs improving and making animation based on that, instead of having to make a totally new char design.
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Re: Jungle girl[No the thread is not misplaced]
Hrm....as Rule pointed out her breasts do seem to be a tad on the small side. Not that there's anything wrong with that, but to me JG will always be the one with the biggest bust. Also as Phoenix pointed out her legs, well leg (the left one) seem to be a bit long. I think you've got it starting too high, though that may just be me. I haven't drawn a walk sequence for almost two years, and I'm pretty crap at drawing people in a profile view anyway.
Hrm....as Rule pointed out her breasts do seem to be a tad on the small side. Not that there's anything wrong with that, but to me JG will always be the one with the biggest bust. Also as Phoenix pointed out her legs, well leg (the left one) seem to be a bit long. I think you've got it starting too high, though that may just be me. I haven't drawn a walk sequence for almost two years, and I'm pretty crap at drawing people in a profile view anyway.
Re: Jungle girl[No the thread is not misplaced]
Hmmm... I think if you're going to remake JG, then the original colour scheme is the way to go. I definitely like the red-haired pale-skin scheme better.
Legs seem about 20% too long. The sidepic's breasts are quite small... for JG, at least. Especially when you compare against the front view earlier on.
Hmmm... I think if you're going to remake JG, then the original colour scheme is the way to go. I definitely like the red-haired pale-skin scheme better.
Legs seem about 20% too long. The sidepic's breasts are quite small... for JG, at least. Especially when you compare against the front view earlier on.
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Re: Jungle girl[No the thread is not misplaced]
Large dinner plate shaped breasts? Wide but really flat?
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Re: Jungle girl[No the thread is not misplaced]
Radar-dishes girl!
I'm processing your remarks, thanks for expressing an opinion
Does action script allow for node-level transformations?
@wonderboy: I didn't think about tracing the original version, mostly because I prefer to work on a clean base rahter than do fixing, but also because I like drawing.
To answer more completely to your first remark concerning the lack of originality, I think of whatever characters LM created the way comics characters are used. Someone creates a concept, then people can use them for their stories. It is also the root of fan-made stuff and I don't see why I would have to reject it.
I understand the fact it can be seen as a lack of imagination, or intellectual piracy, but I prefer to see it as a collaborative work. Zomg communism!
Radar-dishes girl!
I'm processing your remarks, thanks for expressing an opinion
Does action script allow for node-level transformations?
@wonderboy: I didn't think about tracing the original version, mostly because I prefer to work on a clean base rahter than do fixing, but also because I like drawing.
To answer more completely to your first remark concerning the lack of originality, I think of whatever characters LM created the way comics characters are used. Someone creates a concept, then people can use them for their stories. It is also the root of fan-made stuff and I don't see why I would have to reject it.
I understand the fact it can be seen as a lack of imagination, or intellectual piracy, but I prefer to see it as a collaborative work. Zomg communism!
Re: Jungle girl[No the thread is not misplaced]
Lol, I don't think you're lazy at all, I mean, we've been talking 'bout doing something like this for ages, but we were all too, guess what? Lazy.
And I understand it's not out of unoriginality.
You should do the thing with the mouth though... Concave-convex
Lol, I don't think you're lazy at all, I mean, we've been talking 'bout doing something like this for ages, but we were all too, guess what? Lazy.
And I understand it's not out of unoriginality.
You should do the thing with the mouth though... Concave-convex
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Re: Jungle girl[No the thread is not misplaced]
I actually thought the alternative colour scheme was pretty snazy. I do like seeing variations on familiar things. And I'll also add, since everyone's attention has been elsewhere, very nicely drawn plants too. Hard to deny the traditional pale and red colours of course. Either would be good. Extra choice is extra marks for extra effort.
I actually thought the alternative colour scheme was pretty snazy. I do like seeing variations on familiar things. And I'll also add, since everyone's attention has been elsewhere, very nicely drawn plants too. Hard to deny the traditional pale and red colours of course. Either would be good. Extra choice is extra marks for extra effort.
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Re: Jungle girl[No the thread is not misplaced]
I also prefer the alternate colour scheme, so making them both selectable would be awesome.
And yes, bigger boobs definitely needed for tentacle tit-fucking.
I also prefer the alternate colour scheme, so making them both selectable would be awesome.
And yes, bigger boobs definitely needed for tentacle tit-fucking.
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Re: Jungle girl[No the thread is not misplaced]
Raptor will play his first time with one color, then play with the other during his second time.
Raptor will play his first time with one color, then play with the other during his second time.
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Re: Jungle girl[No the thread is not misplaced]
Hooker hates people who speak of first-person in third-person. Wait, what?
Hooker hates people who speak of first-person in third-person. Wait, what?
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Re: Jungle girl[No the thread is not misplaced]
What I meant with node transformation is the fact to modify a shape by moving/rotating/etc control points (nodes) that define it's shape, ie remove a node in a square to obtain a triangle.
On the bad news, my computer is rebooting without reasons, which makes it hard to work, and quite time consuming. I save more often now, but that kind of reboot when I'm in the middle of something tends to weaken my motivation.
What I meant with node transformation is the fact to modify a shape by moving/rotating/etc control points (nodes) that define it's shape, ie remove a node in a square to obtain a triangle.
On the bad news, my computer is rebooting without reasons, which makes it hard to work, and quite time consuming. I save more often now, but that kind of reboot when I'm in the middle of something tends to weaken my motivation.
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Re: Jungle girl[No the thread is not misplaced]
as far as i know, short of programming a graphics engine inside of flash, it is not possible to do anything more than transform functions (rotate, stretch and probably skew per object as opposed to per point) with code.
as far as i know, short of programming a graphics engine inside of flash, it is not possible to do anything more than transform functions (rotate, stretch and probably skew per object as opposed to per point) with code.
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Re: Jungle girl[No the thread is not misplaced]
Breaking my veil of "not supposed to be here until school finishes" (since if anyone was paying attention, they've probably noticed me silently lurking in the shadows ;3)
Does your machine tend to overheat? If this is not the cause of a virus, you should check to make sure your machine is getting a sufficient amount of air-flow to prevent it from overheating (which can cause it to reboot or freeze). Get that problem checked out before it's too late. I've been eagerly observing this project over the past few months.
GET 'ER DONE!
Breaking my veil of "not supposed to be here until school finishes" (since if anyone was paying attention, they've probably noticed me silently lurking in the shadows ;3)
Does your machine tend to overheat? If this is not the cause of a virus, you should check to make sure your machine is getting a sufficient amount of air-flow to prevent it from overheating (which can cause it to reboot or freeze). Get that problem checked out before it's too late. I've been eagerly observing this project over the past few months.
GET 'ER DONE!
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It's not the temperature, I've been monitoring it(and it probably wouldn't explain the reboot right at the beginning of a windows session). It's probably not a virus since the secondary OS has similar trouble.
I checked the power and the RAM. That leaves something very wrong with the mobo.
Anyway, since I didn't work on that specific project recently, I'll just drop this here and hope it helps you people wait
It's not the temperature, I've been monitoring it(and it probably wouldn't explain the reboot right at the beginning of a windows session). It's probably not a virus since the secondary OS has similar trouble.
I checked the power and the RAM. That leaves something very wrong with the mobo.
Anyway, since I didn't work on that specific project recently, I'll just drop this here and hope it helps you people wait