Re: Rise Senki Sinamonica
Here's an update to the translation: mediafire.com/download/05pa103xu0242iv/rise_senki_sinamonica_data_eng_1_01.zip
It's just a small update that fixes some things I'd missed, such as translating the pickup text for some resources and some text formatting issues (RPG Maker VX is rubbish at previewing text). Nothing that will affect the game play in any way.
It's both good, and yet kinda off as well.
Monica's secret Move is "Final*Area*Killing Blow" in the intro, yet you have the last bit as 'Not Yet'.
The 'Fuse' is more of a 'Contract', it's made to poke fun at the entire Kyubi ordeal.
I liked how you did Diene's saying of "Rocket Launcher", as that's about the best way to carry out such a joke.
You left out the entire line of "To defeat your foes, you must bring them towards climax!" doing the battle explanation.
'Defense' should be changed towards 'Health' in the status explanation at the end, as all status effects deduct HP per 'turn'.
I'm not too sure how to take the 'Bug Feeler' Translation when you clearly did all other cases as 'Tentacle', I would keep in line with that, ether naming it "Insect Tentacles" or something around those lines? Consistency mostly.
About "Sawami": She's actually a joke character if you haven't noticed. Her attitude, face, and methods remind me a lot of one character from Plastic Nee-San. Now if it's a direct stab at them or not, I couldn't say, but like most of the content, it's direct as stabs towards different media.
Otherwise past the start, I gotta say it's clear you took your time and some effort with all of this. YOu never seem to have text crawl out of the text boxes or anything. That's pretty impressive in it's own right, and then you even enhanced the battle stuff a bit as well! ( I MIGHT have to borrow how that works with your allowance =O )
