FruitSmoothie
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Re: Aegis Thousand Year War - DMM Online Game
The first post does need some work in my opinion. Everything is scattered and jumbled, the images of characters don't really tell anything about the game itself. Text needs some better formatting, bold, underline, text size changes as well if possible. Main post is kind of an eyesore atm and it's difficult to find the actual helpful information in it.
Eye candy is nice and all, but it shouldn't be the main images/attraction in the post. I think the main Nanally image should be removed in place of a battle video or two since that's what really explains the game. The images in the screenshots could probably use some scaling down as well, most people don't have huge monitors and those take up most the screen.
<iframe width="640" height="360" src="//www.youtube.com/embed/aP-n1467lQs" frameborder="0" allowfullscreen></iframe>
If somebody wanted to make like an English "trailer" to the game, that'd be a better place to put some images of your favorite girls, along with clips of battles or whatever. I may do that in the future, but I don't have any great video editing software atm.
It's all in Japanese, doesn't much help here since most people need English. Those videos are a bit long as well.If there was a way to embed videos to this board, I would say this along withYou must be registered to see the linksbelongs in the opening post as an honest, shining example of what this game is all about:
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The first post does need some work in my opinion. Everything is scattered and jumbled, the images of characters don't really tell anything about the game itself. Text needs some better formatting, bold, underline, text size changes as well if possible. Main post is kind of an eyesore atm and it's difficult to find the actual helpful information in it.
Eye candy is nice and all, but it shouldn't be the main images/attraction in the post. I think the main Nanally image should be removed in place of a battle video or two since that's what really explains the game. The images in the screenshots could probably use some scaling down as well, most people don't have huge monitors and those take up most the screen.
<iframe width="640" height="360" src="//www.youtube.com/embed/aP-n1467lQs" frameborder="0" allowfullscreen></iframe>
If somebody wanted to make like an English "trailer" to the game, that'd be a better place to put some images of your favorite girls, along with clips of battles or whatever. I may do that in the future, but I don't have any great video editing software atm.
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