Hitami's Escape From Cursed Book

[NeithR]

Title: Hitami's Escape From Cursed Book
Genre: Platformer, Hentai
Engine: GMS Standard

So, this will be my first hentai game *huft huft*.

So, the game is about a witch who is trapped inside a cursed book.
She must escape from the book page by page and chapter by chapter while she must fight the abstract and symbolic monster who will strip and raep her.

Because my art and music skill are still not good enough, probably the progress will be a bit slow. Also, since I will compete in 1GAM 2014 in the next January, I have to make other game too (but it will be a good opportunity to me too to improve my skill at short time at that moment since I am planning to make a very small game each month).

Next Planned Progress
- Making a gameplay level
- GUI
- Title screen
- Char design
- I forgot... \v)/

Update:
News for this game will also posted here:

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[Djinbu]

Re: Hitami's Escape From Cursed Book

What kind of style do you plan to be using - anime, anime/western, 3d?

 

[NeithR]

Re: Hitami's Escape From Cursed Book

What kind of style do you plan to be using - anime, anime/western, 3d?

I am planning with anime style... which I am currently working on for the character design.

 

[NeithR]

Re: Hitami's Escape From Cursed Book

Finally an update I can post .
So, after playing around with GMS, I can use the similar way when using GM 8.0. The programming experience I did for previous 12 games this year also helped me to build better structure of my codes even it was from different languages.

The main character: Hitami

Mocks up of the game (since I will change it again)

Spoiler

Title Screen

Gameplay Screen

Gameover Screen

And a h-animation which is the first time I made a h-animation

 

[Ethernite]

Re: Hitami's Escape From Cursed Book

.... guess we should become active member here soon.
Been waiting for this~
You know I'll always ready to help if you need something~

 

[NeithR]

Re: Hitami's Escape From Cursed Book

.... guess we should become active member here soon.
Been waiting for this~
You know I'll always ready to help if you need something~

Finally you commented here, heheh \ v) /
Hope you post your project too
Well, actually there is something you can help, but I will save it for later =D

 

[Kyrieru]

Re: Hitami's Escape From Cursed Book

*OBLIGATORY SPRITE EDIT GO*

- Skin color was fine.
- clothes were too dark, at a glance it looks like a one tone black
- arms are a bit thin? Unless it's just a style thing.
- I don't think black lines under the eyes are necessary. there's enough contrast between the skin and the white of the eyes to show where the eye ends.
- moved all the shadows towards the center a bit.
-added a line to the bottom of the hat and clothes to make it look less flat. (as if you're looking at them from above)
- added shadow below the knees to help show where they are.

Take from that what you will, I suppose. It's a pretty good resolution for a character. Not too hard to animate, but expressive enough to show emotions on her face.

 

[NeithR]

Re: Hitami's Escape From Cursed Book

*OBLIGATORY SPRITE EDIT GO*

- Skin color was fine.
- clothes were too dark, at a glance it looks like a one tone black
- arms are a bit thin? Unless it's just a style thing.
- I don't think black lines under the eyes are necessary. there's enough contrast between the skin and the white of the eyes to show where the eye ends.
- moved all the shadows towards the center a bit.
-added a line to the bottom of the hat and clothes to make it look less flat. (as if you're looking at them from above)
- added shadow below the knees to help show where they are.

Take from that what you will, I suppose. It's a pretty good resolution for a character. Not too hard to animate, but expressive enough to show emotions on her face.

Thanks very much for the edit, Kyrieru
Now I found some of my mistakes

So, I tried revising mine based on what I learned from your edit:
- Gave shade in between eye and eyebrow, since when I see your edit, I immediately touched my own between eye and eyebrow, which makes me realize it is not flat
- Removed the dark line below the eye and replaced it with eye color since I can still see well between eyes and the skin color
- Changed clothes color (the base color with more purplish color) (The shade color with same previous hue, but with higher value and hue)
- Lowered the saturation of the wand yellow base color
- Removed the shade on the bottom part of skirt which was to simulate folding on the bottom part of the skirt.
- Added extra bottom part of the hat based which is just like you said
- Edited something else which I am not too good to explaining

Here is the result

The arms are a bit thin because I don't know the how much width I should use, so I use the distance between the start of boobs and the shoulder at the end part xD

Somehow when I see the skin color between these two, they look different color despite using the same skin color O_O

 

[Kyrieru]

Re: Hitami's Escape From Cursed Book

Somehow when I see the skin color between these two, they look different color despite using the same skin color O_O

It's because I used more shadows than the original, so it looks darker at a glance.

 

[NeithR]

Re: Hitami's Escape From Cursed Book

Finally made a progress for the game . It took a while since the long part was for the designing the system, game mechanism, and the concept.

Here's some screenshot

Spoiler

- Revised character

- Cloth damage

- Level portal (Content Page)

I also finally made an alpha version 0.1 .

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Control:
- Left/ Right Arrow key: Movement
- Up Arrow key : Jump, Go into portal
- Space key : Select, Escape from h-animation (temporary)

It has only:
- 1 h-animation
- Get attacked while cause damage get thrown

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It's because I used more shadows than the original, so it looks darker at a glance.

I didn't know that would cause illussion xD.
I tried with simple sphere to test it but didn't work, but I haven't tested it with other object.


// Edit:
added url and thumbnail since 15 posts reached

 

[NeithR]

Re: Hitami's Escape From Cursed Book

Finally made my blog for my h-game development especially the info for this game.

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And the latest post:

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Edit:
Finally 15 posts! I can post url too \ ( :v ) /

 

[undeadclown]

Re: Hitami's Escape From Cursed Book

I think the bra and panties come off before they're supposed to in this. Like it went like shoes, something that looked like a bra, hair, hat, something that look liked panties and then the dress.

 

[NeithR]

Re: Hitami's Escape From Cursed Book

I think the bra and panties come off before they're supposed to in this. Like it went like shoes, something that looked like a bra, hair, hat, something that look liked panties and then the dress.

Yes, it does because I haven't decided whether bra/panty comes off before the dress gone. Thanks for pointing it out .

I am planning that bra/panty will come off only if the dress is gone. Also, there will some certain attack which can cause bra/panty comes off first before the dress.

 

[undeadclown]

Re: Hitami's Escape From Cursed Book

Well the thing is, with the dress in place it's hard to tell what's going on, so I'd personally recommend always making the dress come off before either of the underwear, but that's just my two cents.

 

[NeithR]

Re: Hitami's Escape From Cursed Book

Well the thing is, with the dress in place it's hard to tell what's going on, so I'd personally recommend always making the dress come off before either of the underwear, but that's just my two cents.

Thanks for the two cents .
Generally, the dress will always come off first like from bullet or slash attack.

However, there will also a certain attack that will cause underwear lose first instead of dress, like:
- Small size creature (like fairy) who will go inside the dress and steal one of underwear
- Monster who flip her dress and then steal/destroy the underwear

 

[NeithR]

Re: Hitami's Escape From Cursed Book

Sorry for no update news recently .
I was doing my two of non-h games for a monthly challenge which are finally finished. Good thing I found some bugs on scripts which I use for the HEFCB and finally fixed them .

Now, here's a little update of this game, new hairclips for both side Hitami's hair.

Spoiler

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[Twisted1]

Re: Hitami's Escape From Cursed Book

Couple of quick critiques on the artwork (from a non-artist, so take them with a grain of salt):
-Arms are too skinny.
-Shading of her left arm seems off, judging by the direction of the other shadows.
-Something about her face is really throwing me off. The skull seems too large, and some sort of indication of a nose (perhaps even just a shadow) would probably help too.

But regardless, I'm glad to see you're making progress! I wish I personally had any sort of talent in drawing (I'm too perfectionistic to slog through all the practice necessary to get good at drawing), so it's always nice to see good art!

 

[NeithR]

Re: Hitami's Escape From Cursed Book

Couple of quick critiques on the artwork (from a non-artist, so take them with a grain of salt):
-Arms are too skinny.
-Shading of her left arm seems off, judging by the direction of the other shadows.
-Something about her face is really throwing me off. The skull seems too large, and some sort of indication of a nose (perhaps even just a shadow) would probably help too.

But regardless, I'm glad to see you're making progress! I wish I personally had any sort of talent in drawing (I'm too perfectionistic to slog through all the practice necessary to get good at drawing), so it's always nice to see good art!

Thank you very much for the critique .
I couldn't find the mistake when drawing it even when I feel something wrong.
I will make a revised version of it added with the fixed mistake you pointed out .

And the last, I don't really have good talent in drawing so I have to build it .

 

[Twisted1]

Re: Hitami's Escape From Cursed Book

You're welcome! I'm happy to help in any little way I can.

And the last, I don't really have good talent in drawing so I have to build it .

You're still lightyears ahead of me, my friend.

 

[NeithR]

Re: Hitami's Escape From Cursed Book

You're welcome! I'm happy to help in any little way I can.



You're still lightyears ahead of me, my friend.

But I haven't trained for lightyears long yet xD

==
Btw, I made a side project called "Arubei's Escape Adventure" series too just in case this game too several months to finish since I will busy in this month for real life things and several of my skills need to be improved .
http://www.ulmf.org/bbs/showthread.php?t=25276