RPG [Ahriman] 風紀剣士アサギ/ Defender of Public Morals: Swordswoman Asagi (RJ149951)

[Donny]

Re: Defender of Public Morals: Swordswoman Asagi (Ahriman) 風紀剣士アサギ

Looks like there is a few news in his page, mostly a twitter and a pair of images. Im not sure what he said about the new events.

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Almost had a heart attack from excitement. Those images are from a work in progress demo for the sequel of Kunoichi Den of Pleasure. He was basically talking about adding the in battle rape system as it was pretty well received in PMA. He said he'll post more news on the sequel via twitter.

Miya, the swordswoman, is weak to breast stimulation. Shirabe, the policewoman, is weak to anal play just like a certain someone. I'm not sure how Yomi (the protagonist from the first Kunoichi game will appear in this game. It's possible she's been captured off screen and will either be a rescue target and or a potential fallen evil boss, I suggested something similar to this to Ahriman and he really liked it so who knows).

I wonder if there's a wiki for his games and characters, I've got a lot of inside information (non spoiler stuff) I'd like to compile in one place for public knowledge.

I wasn't expecting a demo to be close to completion so soon, but I couldn't be happier. The Kunoichi game is what first made me fall in love with Ahriman's style of bondage and heroines surrendering to pleasure. Hell, he could make a Kunoichi 3,4,5 or 6 and I'd buy every one.

 

[TNT90]

Re: Defender of Public Morals: Swordswoman Asagi (Ahriman) 風紀剣士アサギ

Been really busy lately, my apologies. I've been working on Ahriman's birthday present comic thing which is basically a continuation of events after Blade is sold in the Sadist bad ending. I completely got carried away with that, Phantom Pain, school and work. I've gotten a much better work schedule that allows for more free time during the week. I'd be happy to help with any bad ending segments you already haven't done.

No problem man, I know all too well the distracting lure that is Phantom Pain.
I posted a bit back (page 44) on the progress with translating the defeat scene, other than updating it with the suggestions by ToWhit, I haven't made any other progress.

 

[Welkin]

Re: Defender of Public Morals: Swordswoman Asagi (Ahriman) 風紀剣士アサギ

Donny, doubt there is an English wiki out there, so you will have to start one Thanks for the info on his next game.

What's Phantom Pain?

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just came out, so I am busy with that. Heavy CR focus, similar to 赤首の闘技場 minus the QTE. Too bad no spanking despite all the convenient in-combat position

 

[nguyentri666force]

Re: Defender of Public Morals: Swordswoman Asagi (Ahriman) 風紀剣士アサギ

Donny, doubt there is an English wiki out there, so you will have to start one Thanks for the info on his next game.

What's Phantom Pain?

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just came out, so I am busy with that. Heavy CR focus, similar to 赤首の闘技場 minus the QTE. Too bad no spanking despite all the convenient in-combat position

The game(Phantom Pain) he mentioned is a non H game that is basically one of the prequels to Metal Gear Solid.

 

[TNT90]

Re: Defender of Public Morals: Swordswoman Asagi (Ahriman) 風紀剣士アサギ

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just came out, so I am busy with that. Heavy CR focus, similar to 赤首の闘技場 minus the QTE. Too bad no spanking despite all the convenient in-combat position

Same here. And before that I went through Miniature Garden, and still haven't stopped playing the Succubus Heaven demo. And now I have more exams coming up soon. Just spent 3+ hours drinking too much coffee at Panera studying for and writing the damn things.

Edit: Did a bit more translating. Maybe one more good effort will finish this scene. Updates in spoiler, would appreciate any feedback.

Spoiler

Ura: (On auction block being sold)
み、みりゅなぁ... [This is slurred 'miru na'/見るな, so...]
こ、こんな格好みりゅなぁ・・・ ['Konna kakko miru na']
D-don't loooook...
Don't look at me like thiiiss...

み、みりゅなぁ... ['Miru na']
D-don't loooook...

(Skip a bit)

Sadist: (With Whip after the auction)
よほどの傾奇者でもなければ嘆くべき事よ憤怒に焦がれるべき時よなぁ・・・ ['Yo hodo no kabukimono demo nakereba nagekuki koto yo funnu ni kogareru toki yo naa']
Instead of burning with rage,
now they're burning with desire...

Whip:
ひぃん！[Hiin!]
き、気持ちいぃですぅ・・・ [Ki, kimochi ii desu]
ウィップはクズなんですぅ [Whip wa kuzu nandesu]
雌豚以下の肉便器だから
なじられても感じる変態なんですぅ・・・ [Mesubuta ika no nikubenki dakara, najiraretemo kanjiru hentai nandesu]
Hiin!
I-It feels so good!
Whip is garbage,
a cum dumpster lower than a sow.
I am a true disgusting pervert...

Sadist:
くくく・・・ [Kukuku]
随分と出来上がったものじゃのぉ [Zuibun to dekiagatta mono ja no...]
もはやチンポどころかこの世の苦行全てを快楽に変える変態になったか？ [Mou haya chinpo dokoroka kono yo no kugyou subete wo kairaku ni kaeru ni natta ka?]
Kukuku...
You have developed quite nicely.
Have you already become a slave to this
world of pleasure, much less my dick?

Whip:
そうですぅ・・・ [So desu]
ご主人様のチンポオナホですぅ・・・ [Goshujinsama no chinpo onaho desu]
屈辱も痛みもすべて気持ちいい変態マゾですぅ [kutsujoku mo itami mo subete kimochii hentai mazo desu]
ウィップは性処理しか能のないマゾアナル便器ですぅ・・・ [Whip wa sei shori shika nou no nai mazo anal benki desu]
That's riiight... I'm master's cock slave...
I'm a perverted masochist who loves pain and humilation.
Whip the anal masochist toilet exists for sex...


Sadist:
・・・そうか
ならば*元飼い主の存在*ももはや忘れたか？
...Is that so?
Have you *forgetten your former master* completely?

Whip:
へぅ・・・？
Huh...?

Blade:
ふぅ・・・
んん！・・・
Fuu...
Nn!...

Whip:
・・・この声？
お嬢様？
*こ、この匂いはお嬢様の香り！？*
お嬢様！
おられるのですか！？
...That voice?
Milady?
Th-that smell is milady's fragrance!?
Milady!
Are you there!?

Sadist:
ほう？気づくか・・・
さすがは元犬よのぉ・・・
Heh? You noticed...
You truly are her former dog...

Whip:
お、お嬢様はどうされたのですか？
ご、ご主人様！！
お嬢様は・・・！？
W-what have you done to her?
M-master!!
Milady...!?

Sadist:
ふむ・・・
*マスク・オブ・ホワイト*の熱烈なファンだと名乗る変態金持ちがおってなぁ
Heh...
*White Mask* has been transformed and
introduced to her hardcore fans.

Whip:
・・・ま、まさか・・・！？
...Y-you don't mean...!?

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Sadist:
随分と凝った注文であったぞ [Zuibun to kotta chuumon de atta zo]
あの高飛車が好みらしくな・・・ [Ano takabisha ga sukimirashiku na...]
精神は堕とさずに身体だけを開発せよと申す・・・ [Seishin wa oto sazu ni karada dake wo kaihatsuse yo to mousu]

Her fans were quite elaborate.
Rather strange and domineering tastes...
Her mind fell as her body was developed...

今のあ奴は強がりばかりの性奴隷よ [Ima no aitsu wa tsuyogari bakari no sei dorei yo]
触れられるだけで身体を震わせる全身性感帯じゃからのぉ・・・ [Sawarerareru dake de karada wo furuwaseru zenshin seikantai ja kara no...]

She has been reduced to a sex slave.
Her whole body an erogenous zone,
quaking in pleasure with every touch.

くくく・・・不憫よなぁ・・・ [Kukuku... fubin yo na...]
せめて心が染まっておれば痛みはないものを [Semete kokoro ga somatte oreba itami wa nai mono wo]
あれほどの変態の仕打ちにどれほど小娘の心が壊されるか見ものじゃなぁ [Are hodo no hentai no shiuchi ni dore hodo komusume no kokoro ga kowasareru ka mimono ja na...]

Kukuku...Pitiful...
She has given herself to the pleasure to escape pain.
Her mind has been destroyed with such perverse treatment.

Whip:
そ、そんな・・・ [S, sonna]
お許し下さいご主人様！！ [Oyurushite kudasai goshujinsama!]
私はなんでもいたします！！ [Watashi wa nandemo itashimasu!]
お嬢様は・・・お嬢様だけは！！[Ojousama wa... ojousama dake wa!]
N-no way・・・
Please forgive me, master!!
I'll do anything you want!!
But milady... Not milady!!

Sadist:
ほう・・・
あらゆる苦痛が快感ではなかったのか？
元主人の凋落なぞ心躍るご褒美ではないか？

Hmm...
Is not every pain pleasurable?
Should your former master not have such rewards?

Whip:
し、しかし・・・
こればかりは・・・
こればかりはお許しを・・・
*肉便器*でも
*性奴隷*でも*マゾ家畜*でもかまいません
どうか・・・
どうかお嬢様はお助けください・・・

B-but...
This...
This I can forgive...
I don't mind being a *Cum dumpster*,
*Sex slave*, or *Masochist animal*.
But please...
please help her...

Sadist:
く・・・くくく・・・
良い絶望だぞ雌犬ぅ・・・
久々に殺意を込めておるのぅ
・・・*ワシを猿回しにする*と言った時のようだ

Ku...kukuku...
Your despair is excellent bitch...
Your fury has been absent for so long.
...My sadistic mastery has been underused.

Whip:
・・・ぐ・・・っ・・・
あ、あの時のご無礼はお詫びいたします・・・
この身をいかようにも痛めつけてください
人の尊厳も、
心の破壊も、
命でも
好きにお奪いください！

...Gua...ah...
I apologize for my rudeness then...
Please bully this body anyway you please.
My dignity,
my purity,
even my life,
take it, please!

すべてを捧げます・・・
*魂魄の全てまで永遠の忠誠を誓います・・・*

I give it all to you...
*I even swear everlasting loyalty...*

Sadist:
よいぞよいぞ・・・胸をすくような慟哭ぞぉ・・・！
尻穴もワシのマラを食い千切らんばかりだ！

Whip:
お許し下さい・・・！
お慈悲を・・・
どうか・・・どうか・・・！！

Sadist:
・・・どうした犬？
食いつかんのか？
*ワシが哀願に心動かす人間ではない*ことは知っていよう？
貴様の主人が助かるにはワシの喉元を食いちぎる意外ないぞ？

Whip:
・・・っ・・・くぅぅぅ・・・
放せえぇぇぇぇ！！！
お嬢様に触れるなぁぁっぁぁっぁああ！！

Sadist:
おっ・・・ぐぅぅぅ・・・
よいぞぉ・・・
腹に響く憤怒よぉ・・・
姫巫女とやらの父親の髑髏を皿に酒を煽った時でもこれほどの殺意はなかったぞ！

Whip:
殺す・・・っ！！
お嬢様を害するものは全て殺してやる！！
許さぬ・・・絶対にゆるさ・・・んひぃぃい！！

Sadist:
ほれぃ！！
もっと締めぬと勝てぬぞ！
久々の怒張じゃ！
これほど太く硬くなったのは久しい！
貴様の怒りをもっと寄越せ！
ワシをもっと興じさせよ！！

Whip:
んひぃぃ！！
・・・あぎぃぃぃ！！
お、おのれぇぇぇ・・・はひぃぃ！！
こ、殺してや・・・
んん！！
・・・るぅぅ・・・

Sadist:
悦じゃ・・・
これぞ愉悦じゃ・・・！
仁王が如き憤怒を！
夜叉の如き憎悪を！
これを屈服させることほど心地よきことなし！

Whip:
*さど*・・・
*すとぉぉ*・・・
んん！！
・・・ゆ、ゆるさ・・・あひぃぃ！！
ゆるさな・・・
んぁぁぁ！！
・・・いぃぃぃ・・・

Sadist:
くくく・・・
続きは*ホワイト*の新しい飼い主との部屋でいたすか？
全身で敗北を感じで全霊で猛るが良いぞぉ・・・

 

[Donny]

Re: Defender of Public Morals: Swordswoman Asagi (Ahriman) 風紀剣士アサギ

Same here. And before that I went through Miniature Garden, and still haven't stopped playing the Succubus Heaven demo. And now I have more exams coming up soon. Just spent 3+ hours drinking too much coffee at Panera studying for and writing the damn things.

Edit: Did a bit more translating. Maybe one more good effort will finish this scene. Updates in spoiler, would appreciate any feedback.

Spoiler

Ura: (On auction block being sold)
み、みりゅなぁ... [This is slurred 'miru na'/見るな, so...]
こ、こんな格好みりゅなぁ・・・ ['Konna kakko miru na']
D-don't loooook...
Don't look at me like thiiiss...

み、みりゅなぁ... ['Miru na']
D-don't loooook...

(Skip a bit)

Sadist: (With Whip after the auction)
よほどの傾奇者でもなければ嘆くべき事よ憤怒に焦がれるべき時よなぁ・・・ ['Yo hodo no kabukimono demo nakereba nagekuki koto yo funnu ni kogareru toki yo naa']
Instead of burning with rage,
now they're burning with desire...

Whip:
ひぃん！[Hiin!]
き、気持ちいぃですぅ・・・ [Ki, kimochi ii desu]
ウィップはクズなんですぅ [Whip wa kuzu nandesu]
雌豚以下の肉便器だから
なじられても感じる変態なんですぅ・・・ [Mesubuta ika no nikubenki dakara, najiraretemo kanjiru hentai nandesu]
Hiin!
I-It feels so good!
Whip is garbage,
a cum dumpster lower than a sow.
I am a true disgusting pervert...

Sadist:
くくく・・・ [Kukuku]
随分と出来上がったものじゃのぉ [Zuibun to dekiagatta mono ja no...]
もはやチンポどころかこの世の苦行全てを快楽に変える変態になったか？ [Mou haya chinpo dokoroka kono yo no kugyou subete wo kairaku ni kaeru ni natta ka?]
Kukuku...
You have developed quite nicely.
Have you already become a slave to this
world of pleasure, much less my dick?

Whip:
そうですぅ・・・ [So desu]
ご主人様のチンポオナホですぅ・・・ [Goshujinsama no chinpo onaho desu]
屈辱も痛みもすべて気持ちいい変態マゾですぅ [kutsujoku mo itami mo subete kimochii hentai mazo desu]
ウィップは性処理しか能のないマゾアナル便器ですぅ・・・ [Whip wa sei shori shika nou no nai mazo anal benki desu]
That's riiight... I'm master's cock slave...
I'm a perverted masochist who loves pain and humilation.
Whip the anal masochist toilet exists for sex...


Sadist:
・・・そうか
ならば*元飼い主の存在*ももはや忘れたか？
...Is that so?
Have you *forgetten your former master* completely?

Whip:
へぅ・・・？
Huh...?

Blade:
ふぅ・・・
んん！・・・
Fuu...
Nn!...

Whip:
・・・この声？
お嬢様？
*こ、この匂いはお嬢様の香り！？*
お嬢様！
おられるのですか！？
...That voice?
Milady?
Th-that smell is milady's fragrance!?
Milady!
Are you there!?

Sadist:
ほう？気づくか・・・
さすがは元犬よのぉ・・・
Heh? You noticed...
You truly are her former dog...

Whip:
お、お嬢様はどうされたのですか？
ご、ご主人様！！
お嬢様は・・・！？
W-what have you done to her?
M-master!!
Milady...!?

Sadist:
ふむ・・・
*マスク・オブ・ホワイト*の熱烈なファンだと名乗る変態金持ちがおってなぁ
Heh...
*White Mask* has been transformed and
introduced to her hardcore fans.

Whip:
・・・ま、まさか・・・！？
...Y-you don't mean...!?

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Sadist:
随分と凝った注文であったぞ [Zuibun to kotta chuumon de atta zo]
あの高飛車が好みらしくな・・・ [Ano takabisha ga sukimirashiku na...]
精神は堕とさずに身体だけを開発せよと申す・・・ [Seishin wa oto sazu ni karada dake wo kaihatsuse yo to mousu]

Her fans were quite elaborate.
Rather strange and domineering tastes...
Her mind fell as her body was developed...

今のあ奴は強がりばかりの性奴隷よ [Ima no aitsu wa tsuyogari bakari no sei dorei yo]
触れられるだけで身体を震わせる全身性感帯じゃからのぉ・・・ [Sawarerareru dake de karada wo furuwaseru zenshin seikantai ja kara no...]

She has been reduced to a sex slave.
Her whole body an erogenous zone,
quaking in pleasure with every touch.

くくく・・・不憫よなぁ・・・ [Kukuku... fubin yo na...]
せめて心が染まっておれば痛みはないものを [Semete kokoro ga somatte oreba itami wa nai mono wo]
あれほどの変態の仕打ちにどれほど小娘の心が壊されるか見ものじゃなぁ [Are hodo no hentai no shiuchi ni dore hodo komusume no kokoro ga kowasareru ka mimono ja na...]

Kukuku...Pitiful...
She has given herself to the pleasure to escape pain.
Her mind has been destroyed with such perverse treatment.

Whip:
そ、そんな・・・ [S, sonna]
お許し下さいご主人様！！ [Oyurushite kudasai goshujinsama!]
私はなんでもいたします！！ [Watashi wa nandemo itashimasu!]
お嬢様は・・・お嬢様だけは！！[Ojousama wa... ojousama dake wa!]
N-no way・・・
Please forgive me, master!!
I'll do anything you want!!
But milady... Not milady!!

Sadist:
ほう・・・
あらゆる苦痛が快感ではなかったのか？
元主人の凋落なぞ心躍るご褒美ではないか？

Hmm...
Is not every pain pleasurable?
Should your former master not have such rewards?

Whip:
し、しかし・・・
こればかりは・・・
こればかりはお許しを・・・
*肉便器*でも
*性奴隷*でも*マゾ家畜*でもかまいません
どうか・・・
どうかお嬢様はお助けください・・・

B-but...
This...
This I can forgive...
I don't mind being a *Cum dumpster*,
*Sex slave*, or *Masochist animal*.
But please...
please help her...

Sadist:
く・・・くくく・・・
良い絶望だぞ雌犬ぅ・・・
久々に殺意を込めておるのぅ
・・・*ワシを猿回しにする*と言った時のようだ

Ku...kukuku...
Your despair is excellent bitch...
Your fury has been absent for so long.
...My sadistic mastery has been underused.

Whip:
・・・ぐ・・・っ・・・
あ、あの時のご無礼はお詫びいたします・・・
この身をいかようにも痛めつけてください
人の尊厳も、
心の破壊も、
命でも
好きにお奪いください！

...Gua...ah...
I apologize for my rudeness then...
Please bully this body anyway you please.
My dignity,
my purity,
even my life,
take it, please!

すべてを捧げます・・・
*魂魄の全てまで永遠の忠誠を誓います・・・*

I give it all to you...
*I even swear everlasting loyalty...*

Sadist:
よいぞよいぞ・・・胸をすくような慟哭ぞぉ・・・！
尻穴もワシのマラを食い千切らんばかりだ！

Whip:
お許し下さい・・・！
お慈悲を・・・
どうか・・・どうか・・・！！

Sadist:
・・・どうした犬？
食いつかんのか？
*ワシが哀願に心動かす人間ではない*ことは知っていよう？
貴様の主人が助かるにはワシの喉元を食いちぎる意外ないぞ？

Whip:
・・・っ・・・くぅぅぅ・・・
放せえぇぇぇぇ！！！
お嬢様に触れるなぁぁっぁぁっぁああ！！

Sadist:
おっ・・・ぐぅぅぅ・・・
よいぞぉ・・・
腹に響く憤怒よぉ・・・
姫巫女とやらの父親の髑髏を皿に酒を煽った時でもこれほどの殺意はなかったぞ！

Whip:
殺す・・・っ！！
お嬢様を害するものは全て殺してやる！！
許さぬ・・・絶対にゆるさ・・・んひぃぃい！！

Sadist:
ほれぃ！！
もっと締めぬと勝てぬぞ！
久々の怒張じゃ！
これほど太く硬くなったのは久しい！
貴様の怒りをもっと寄越せ！
ワシをもっと興じさせよ！！

Whip:
んひぃぃ！！
・・・あぎぃぃぃ！！
お、おのれぇぇぇ・・・はひぃぃ！！
こ、殺してや・・・
んん！！
・・・るぅぅ・・・

Sadist:
悦じゃ・・・
これぞ愉悦じゃ・・・！
仁王が如き憤怒を！
夜叉の如き憎悪を！
これを屈服させることほど心地よきことなし！

Whip:
*さど*・・・
*すとぉぉ*・・・
んん！！
・・・ゆ、ゆるさ・・・あひぃぃ！！
ゆるさな・・・
んぁぁぁ！！
・・・いぃぃぃ・・・

Sadist:
くくく・・・
続きは*ホワイト*の新しい飼い主との部屋でいたすか？
全身で敗北を感じで全霊で猛るが良いぞぉ・・・

Alright perfect, I'll finish it when I get home. Excellent work so far! I've seen the bad endings so many times I've practically memorized the dialogue, so from memory that was all pretty accurate, especially the parts with Whip pleading to the Sadist. That was like verbatim, great work on that segment. From memory, it continues with Whip threatening Sadist with death threats and with her getting so angry that she clenches up. The Sadist (living up to his name) goes even harder from there, reaping even more pleasure from her (emotional) pain. Sadistic, but he is the Sadist lol.

Even though this one of my favorite bad endings, the pain Whip feels makes it a bit bittersweet. Also we don't get to see much of Blade and she gets kind of left out. I suppose this ending is definitely meant for the fans of Whip. Even Ahriman said this was one of his favorite endings as he likes messing with the normally proud and coolheaded Whip.

The Incubus bad ending is my favorite because all the heroines end up thoroughly happy with their training, and it's reflected through the general enjoyment of everyone involved. This is the "Heaven of Pleasure" Akusuke envisioned, and it's great.

 

[TNT90]

Re: Defender of Public Morals: Swordswoman Asagi (Ahriman) 風紀剣士アサギ

Alright perfect, I'll finish it when I get home. Excellent work so far! I've seen the bad endings so many times I've practically memorized the dialogue, so from memory that was all pretty accurate, especially the parts with Whip pleading to the Sadist. That was like verbatim, great work on that segment. From memory, it continues with Whip threatening Sadist with death threats and with her getting so angry that she clenches up. The Sadist (living up to his name) goes even harder from there, reaping even more pleasure from her (emotional) pain. Sadistic, but he is the Sadist lol.

Even though this one of my favorite bad endings, the pain Whip feels makes it a bit bittersweet. Also we don't get to see much of Blade and she gets kind of left out. I suppose this ending is definitely meant for the fans of Whip. Even Ahriman said this was one of his favorite endings as he likes messing with the normally proud and coolheaded Whip.

The Incubus bad ending is my favorite because all the heroines end up thoroughly happy with their training, and it's reflected through the general enjoyment of everyone involved. This is the "Heaven of Pleasure" Akusuke envisioned, and it's great.

Sweet, looking forward to it. Just copied the remainder of the victory scene to a text file. Sooooo much text in that one.

 

[Donny]

Re: Defender of Public Morals: Swordswoman Asagi (Ahriman) 風紀剣士アサギ

Sweet, looking forward to it. Just copied the remainder of the victory scene to a text file. Sooooo much text in that one.

Took a lot longer than expected, 6 or 7 hours Ended up learning some new words though. I guess if you're into sadism you'll like the last few exchanges between Whip and the Sadist. I personally would've preferred if she was genuinely a mind broken sex slave, so that way she wouldn't be emotionally tortured like that. She'd be too busy enjoying herself. Well, it IS a Bad Ending so what can ya do? Below is a 99% translation of the entire scene. There's just one line by Ura during the auction that I want to run by Ahriman so I can get a little clarification. It could change the context of her auction, from her saying "Don't look at me" to saying "look at me" (implying mind break/surrender). It's only one line, and I think I still translated it, but other than that it's a done deal.

I'll do the Incubus ending next, as it's the shortest in the game (and my favorite!)

Spoiler

6000・・・9000・・・でました9000！パブア村の双剣士ミシェル落札です！
6000...9000... Sold for 9000! The swordsman Michele from Pabua village is successfully sold!
まずは別室で味見をどうぞ！性感開発等オプションもそちらで追加契約できます！
Please have your first sampling in the other room! You can contract *optional sexual training* as well!
さあ！お次は本日の目玉商品です！・・・ご覧下さい！！
Now! The following are today's featured products! Please take a look!
先日の「メス豚の穴」のアジトに侵入した二人組です！
The other day these *female pig holes" invaded our hideout!
片や東方の剣術を使う風紀剣士！(Says "on the other hand", but I changed it to make a little more sense)
On this side, a Public Morals swordsman who uses swordsmanship from the east!
片や喧嘩殺法の女番長！(Said "fighting", but fist-fighting is a bit more specific-- they're both "fighters" in a sense)
And on this side, a fist-fighting female gang leader of a group of delinquents!

いずれも女戦士好きの皆様を満足させる逸品です(it was either "warriors of love" or "lovely warriors". Lovely warriors sounded better given the context of the auctioneer describing the defeated heroines, but after reading the Atlas translation a few times the translation below turned out to be the most accurate.)
Both are true gems, these female warriors love satisfying everybody
Asagi ふぅ・・・ふぅぅぅ・・・
Fuu..Fuuu...
(end of untranslated section)
Ura: (On auction block being sold)
み、みりゅなぁ... [This is slurred 'miru na'/見るな, so...]
こ、こんな格好みりゅなぁ・・・ ['Konna kakko miru na']
D-don't loooook...
Don't look at me like thiiiss...

み、みりゅなぁ... ['Miru na']
D-don't loooook...
こ、こんな 格好 みりゅなぁ・・・
(It sounds like she's actually asking the audience to look at her. I'll ask Ahriman directly to get clarification)
ご覧下さい、我らがサドスト先生により開発された強く美しき肉体を・・・っ
張り艶ともに極上品です！(light body modification apparently, their asses do look significantly bigger)
See how their strong beautiful bodies have been developed by our teacher *Sadist Strike*... both of their glossy, voluptuous rear ends have swollen!
乳房もマンコも極楽を約束します！(cunt was used, but pussy flows better)
The breast and pussy promise paradise!
しかも！今回は女戦士物でも人気の高いシリーズ「強い女はアナルが弱い」の新作になります！
Also! The new female warrior series "Strong Woman is weak to Anal" is currently very popular !
たっぷりとほぐされたマゾア
ナルはもはや別生物とも言える柔軟さを誇ります！(had a tough time with this one, you may want to double check it. This was the closest I could get it to the source with it still making sense)キツさ！粘度！温かさ！複雑さ！美しさ！全てを兼ね備えた肛虐をご賞味ください！
The untied *anal masochist* can be proudly called a different living thing! Tight! Wet! Warm! Complex! Beautiful! Please show your appreciation of anal tyranny where everthing is given!
*applause*
しかも！この二人は戦士としても超一流！舐め舐め三兄弟からヴィラ盗賊団頭領打倒までさんざん暴れまわったこの雌豚戦士・・・
腕っ節はお墨付きです！
Furthermore! These two are five-star fighters! This violent female pig completely defeated the three Lick-Lick Brothers in the theive's villa... her physical strength is official!
さあ、この機会に是非お買い上げくださいまずは女番長ウラ！15000よりスタートです！はい20000！・・・30000！・・・45000！まだまだ登りますよぉ！お手元のカタログよりもこの表情をよくご覧下さい！
Now, please purchase by all means on this occasion: female school gang leader Ura! Starting from 15000! Yes 20000!... 30000!... 45000! Not yet even higher! Look at that, add her lustful expression to the catalog!
*picture is taken*
Ura: くそぉ・・・み、みりゅなぁ・・・・くそぉ・・・み、みりゅなぁ・・・・
Ura: Damn... D-don't look... Damn... D-don't look~...

・・・・・・
Sadist:・・・どうだ自分を助けに来た者共が下衆な輩に売られていくさまは？
Sadist: How does it feel knowing that the people who came to rescue you are being sold by "low lives"?
Whip: 屈辱的です・・・絶望的ですわぁ・・・はひぃ・・・ひぃぐぅ・・・
Whip: Disgraceful... It's hopeless-- oh my... Hahii... don't stop cumming...
Sadist:ほう？どう屈辱的なのだ？
Sadist: Oh? How is it disgraceful?
Whip: あ、あ、あん・・・んん・・・！か、身体中を拘束されて・・・吊るされてぇ・・・ま、マゾアナルか、身体中を拘束されて・・・吊るされてぇ・・・ま、マゾアナルをぉ・・・お、オナホールのようにグジュグジュってぇ・・・拡張開発されながらぁ・・・な、仲間のぉ・・・マゾアナルまでへ、変態デブ親父どもに買い取られるのにぃ・・・か、感じさせられてるのがぁ・・・へ、変態性癖すぎてぇ・・・く、屈辱ですわぁ・・・(had a hard time with this bit)
Whip: Ah, Ah, Ahn...Nn...! their entire bodies are restrained... they're hanging... anal masochists... they've became personal sex sleeves... during enhanced development... my companions became anal masochists... and were bought by perverted old men... they are allowed to experience humiliation and become their *inner pervert*...
Sadist: なるほど・・・確かにその状況で喘（よ）がるは異な事よなよほどの傾奇者でもなければ嘆くべき事よ憤怒に焦がれるべき時よなぁ・・・
Sadist: Indeed... *pant* they are certaintly in that situation by now, it's strange that you are so accepting of them becoming mindless slaves; you ought to be angrier...
Whip: ひぃん！き、気持ちいぃですぅ・・・ウィップはクズなんですぅ雌豚以下の肉便器だからなじられても感じる変態なんですぅ・・・
Hii~n! Thank you for cumming... Whip is a pervert even if it is denied because Whip is below a cumdumpster, Whip is a pig that is below trash...
Sadist:くくく・・・随分と出来上がったものじゃのぉもはやチンポどころかこの世の苦行全てを快楽に変える変態になったか？
Sadist: Hahaha... Have you completely become a pervert that has already given up everything in exchange for the pleasure of dick?
Whip: そうですぅ・・・ご主人様のチンポオナホですぅ・・・屈辱も痛みもすべて気持ちいい変態マゾですぅウィップは性処理しかご主人様のチンポオナホですぅ・・・屈辱も痛みもすべて気持ちいい変態マゾですぅウィップは性処理しか能のないマゾアナル便器ですぅ・・・
Whip: That's right... I'm master's *dick sleeve*... humiliation and pain all feel good, it's Whip's fate to become honorable master's dick sleeve... I'm a lowly *anal masochist cumdumpster* meant to serve you...
Sadist:・・・そうか
Sadist: ...Is that so?
(End of untranslated bit)
(Skip a bit)

Sadist: (With Whip after the auction)
よほどの傾奇者でもなければ嘆くべき事よ憤怒に焦がれるべき時よなぁ・・・ ['Yo hodo no kabukimono demo nakereba nagekuki koto yo funnu ni kogareru toki yo naa']
Instead of burning with rage,
now they're burning with desire...

Whip:
ひぃん！[Hiin!]
き、気持ちいぃですぅ・・・ [Ki, kimochi ii desu]
ウィップはクズなんですぅ [Whip wa kuzu nandesu]
雌豚以下の肉便器だから
なじられても感じる変態なんですぅ・・・ [Mesubuta ika no nikubenki dakara, najiraretemo kanjiru hentai nandesu]
Hiin!
I-It feels so good!
Whip is garbage,
a cum dumpster lower than a sow.
I am a true disgusting pervert...

Sadist:
くくく・・・ [Kukuku]
随分と出来上がったものじゃのぉ [Zuibun to dekiagatta mono ja no...]
もはやチンポどころかこの世の苦行全てを快楽に変える変態になったか？ [Mou haya chinpo dokoroka kono yo no kugyou subete wo kairaku ni kaeru ni natta ka?]
Kukuku...
You have developed quite nicely.
Have you already become a slave to this
world of pleasure, much less my dick?

Whip:
そうですぅ・・・ [So desu]
ご主人様のチンポオナホですぅ・・・ [Goshujinsama no chinpo onaho desu]
屈辱も痛みもすべて気持ちいい変態マゾですぅ [kutsujoku mo itami mo subete kimochii hentai mazo desu]
ウィップは性処理しか能のないマゾアナル便器ですぅ・・・ [Whip wa sei shori shika nou no nai mazo anal benki desu]
That's riiight... I'm master's cock slave...
I'm a perverted masochist who loves pain and humilation.
Whip the anal masochist toilet exists for sex...


Sadist:
・・・そうか
ならば*元飼い主の存在*ももはや忘れたか？
...Is that so?
Have you *forgetten your former master* completely?

Whip:
へぅ・・・？
Huh...?

Blade:
ふぅ・・・
んん！・・・
Fuu...
Nn!...

Whip:
・・・この声？
お嬢様？
*こ、この匂いはお嬢様の香り！？*
お嬢様！
おられるのですか！？
...That voice?
Milady?
Th-that smell is milady's fragrance!?
Milady!
Are you there!?

Sadist:
ほう？気づくか・・・
さすがは元犬よのぉ・・・
Heh? You noticed...
You truly are her former dog...

Whip:
お、お嬢様はどうされたのですか？
ご、ご主人様！！
お嬢様は・・・！？
W-what have you done to her?
M-master!!
Milady...!?

Sadist:
ふむ・・・
*マスク・オブ・ホワイト*の熱烈なファンだと名乗る変態金持ちがおってなぁ
Heh...
*White Mask* has been transformed and
introduced to her hardcore fans.

Whip:
・・・ま、まさか・・・！？
...Y-you don't mean...!?

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Sadist:
随分と凝った注文であったぞ [Zuibun to kotta chuumon de atta zo]
あの高飛車が好みらしくな・・・ [Ano takabisha ga sukimirashiku na...]
精神は堕とさずに身体だけを開発せよと申す・・・ [Seishin wa oto sazu ni karada dake wo kaihatsuse yo to mousu]

Her fans were quite elaborate.
Rather strange and domineering tastes...
Her mind fell as her body was developed...

今のあ奴は強がりばかりの性奴隷よ [Ima no aitsu wa tsuyogari bakari no sei dorei yo]
触れられるだけで身体を震わせる全身性感帯じゃからのぉ・・・ [Sawarerareru dake de karada wo furuwaseru zenshin seikantai ja kara no...]

She was bluffing from the start; she has been reduced to a sex slave.
Her whole body an erogenous zone,
quaking in pleasure with every touch.

くくく・・・不憫よなぁ・・・ [Kukuku... fubin yo na...]
せめて心が染まっておれば痛みはないものを [Semete kokoro ga somatte oreba itami wa nai mono wo]
あれほどの変態の仕打ちにどれほど小娘の心が壊されるか見ものじゃなぁ [Are hodo no hentai no shiuchi ni dore hodo komusume no kokoro ga kowasareru ka mimono ja na...]

Kukuku...Pitiful...
She has given herself to the pleasure to escape pain.
Her mind has been destroyed with such perverse treatment.

Whip:
そ、そんな・・・ [S, sonna]
お許し下さいご主人様！！ [Oyurushite kudasai goshujinsama!]
私はなんでもいたします！！ [Watashi wa nandemo itashimasu!]
お嬢様は・・・お嬢様だけは！！[Ojousama wa... ojousama dake wa!]
N-no way・・・
Please forgive me, master!!
I'll do anything you want!!
But milady... Not milady!!

Sadist:
ほう・・・
あらゆる苦痛が快感ではなかったのか？
元主人の凋落なぞ心躍るご褒美ではないか？

Hmm...
Is not every pain pleasurable?
Should your former master not have such rewards?

Whip:
し、しかし・・・
こればかりは・・・
こればかりはお許しを・・・
*肉便器*でも
*性奴隷*でも*マゾ家畜*でもかまいません
どうか・・・
どうかお嬢様はお助けください・・・

B-but...
This...
This I can forgive...
I don't mind being a *Cum dumpster*,
*Sex slave*, or *Masochist animal*.
But please...
please spare her...

Sadist:
く・・・くくく・・・
良い絶望だぞ雌犬ぅ・・・
久々に殺意を込めておるのぅ
・・・*ワシを猿回しにする*と言った時のようだ

Ku...kukuku...
Your despair is excellent bitch...
Your fury has been absent for so long.
...My sadistic mastery has been underused.

Whip:
・・・ぐ・・・っ・・・
あ、あの時のご無礼はお詫びいたします・・・
この身をいかようにも痛めつけてください
人の尊厳も、
心の破壊も、
命でも
好きにお奪いください！

...Gua...ah...
I apologize for my rudeness then...
Please bully this body anyway you please.
My dignity,
my purity,
even my life,
take it, please!

すべてを捧げます・・・
*魂魄の全てまで永遠の忠誠を誓います・・・*

I give it all to you...
*I even swear everlasting loyalty...*

Sadist:
よいぞよいぞ・・・胸をすくような慟哭ぞぉ・・・！
尻穴もワシのマラを食い千切らんばかりだ！
That's it... pour out your heart! Your asshole is about to bite my dick off!

Whip:
お許し下さい・・・！
お慈悲を・・・
どうか・・・どうか・・・！！
Please forgive me...!
your benevolence...
I beg you... I beg you!
Sadist:
・・・どうした犬？
食いつかんのか？
*ワシが哀願に心動かす人間ではない*ことは知っていよう？
貴様の主人が助かるにはワシの喉元を食いちぎる意外ないぞ？
...Why bitch? Why aren't you biting (squeezing more tightly)? Don't you understand that you won't change my mind on saving your former master? Why does your damned master make you grip my shaft so tightly?

Whip:
・・・っ・・・くぅぅぅ・・・
放せえぇぇぇぇ！！！
お嬢様に触れるなぁぁっぁぁっぁああ！！
Kuuu... Let her gooooo!!!
Don't let them touch Milady!!

Sadist:
おっ・・・ぐぅぅぅ・・・
よいぞぉ・・・
腹に響く憤怒よぉ・・・
姫巫女とやらの父親の髑髏を皿に酒を煽った時でもこれほどの殺意はなかったぞ！
Oh... Ahhh... Yesss... your anger resounds in your belly... The princess shrine maiden didn't have such murderous intent even after seeing me drink sake from her father's skull!

Whip:
殺す・・・っ！！
お嬢様を害するものは全て殺してやる！！
許さぬ・・・絶対にゆるさ・・・んひぃぃい！！
I'll kill you...!!
I'll kill anything that harms Milady!!
I won't allow... absolutely won't allow... Hiiiii!!
Sadist:
ほれぃ！！
もっと締めぬと勝てぬぞ！
久々の怒張じゃ！
これほど太く硬くなったのは久しい！
貴様の怒りをもっと寄越せ！
ワシをもっと興じさせよ！！
There you go!! You won't win if you don't tighten more!
It hasn't been this swollen in such a long time!
It's become hard, swollen and long!
Give me even more of your anger you bitch!
Amuse me even more!!
Whip:
んひぃぃ！！
・・・あぎぃぃぃ！！
お、おのれぇぇぇ・・・はひぃぃ！！
こ、殺してや・・・
んん！！
・・・るぅぅ・・・
Nhiii!!
...Haghiiii!!
Y-you... Hiiii!!
Gonna kill ...
Nn!! Ruuu...
Sadist:
悦じゃ・・・
これぞ愉悦じゃ・・・！
仁王が如き憤怒を！
夜叉の如き憎悪を！
これを屈服させることほど心地よきことなし！
I enjoy it... give me more pleasure...! Your anger is like a demon's! Your hatred is like the Devil's! There's nothing more enjoyable than making you surrender like this!

Whip:
*さど*・・・
*すとぉぉ*・・・
んん！！
・・・ゆ、ゆるさ・・・あひぃぃ！！
ゆるさな・・・
んぁぁぁ！！
・・・いぃぃぃ・・・
*Sa...Sadist*...
Nn!!
...I-I won't allow... Ahiiii!! I won't forgive... Naaaa!!... iiiii...

Sadist:
くくく・・・
続きは*ホワイト*の新しい飼い主との部屋でいたすか？
全身で敗北を感じで全霊で猛るが良いぞぉ・・・
Heheheh... Will you continue in the room with White's new owner? Though rage flows throughout your body, it'll be good for defeat to be felt throughout your soul...

*Edit* Changed one of the lines involving the skull of a princess shrine maiden's father, Ahriman explained the true terror behind that one. Also, I didn't figure out if Ura was repeating herself based on what Ahriman told me so I don't have any changes for that bit.

 

[Deekin]

Re: Defender of Public Morals: Swordswoman Asagi (Ahriman) 風紀剣士アサギ

He was basically talking about adding the in battle rape system as it was pretty well received in PMA. He said he'll post more news on the sequel via twitter.

That's unfortunate. As much as I liked PMA's battle system, I really missed how the cut-ins were animated in Kunoichi. I wish he could have animated portraits with PMA's battle system, but I imagine it'd be too much work.

 

[Donny]

Re: Defender of Public Morals: Swordswoman Asagi (Ahriman) 風紀剣士アサギ

That's unfortunate. As much as I liked PMA's battle system, I really missed how the cut-ins were animated in Kunoichi. I wish he could have animated portraits with PMA's battle system, but I imagine it'd be too much work.

I agree with you there, I feel that it added to the whole sense of "The heroines are actively being overwhelmed right in front of you" by showing them being progressively seduced in real time.

The animated cut ins also worked well with the whole scrolling gameplay in the sense that when a heroine was caught the scrolling stopped, as if the story had the potential to end earlier than expected (via bad ending).

I think the Angel Hunt game had the animated violation stuff with like the whole thing basically being a bad ending simulator, at the cost of any type of gameplay.

I can ask him if he ever plans on brining back those cut in animations, but I do think they fit better in Kunoichi because of how the gameplay worked.

 

[Donny]

Re: Defender of Public Morals: Swordswoman Asagi (Ahriman) 風紀剣士アサギ

I'll come out of the dark to explain a little about my processes with the previous translations I did for this. I think TNT and I work with similar methods.

I use Google translate combined with combing many websites when I'm translating. To me it's a combination of artistic and logical work because you are trying to translate as well as take into context what the author is writing. This deals with choosing the right words or word combination since some are Japanese-only phrases.

Meat Toilet, a direct Japanese-to-English translation, is a good example, where we have to figure what the closest English (for some British, Australian, OR American depending on which dialect you are translating) equivalent. I think that we've all agreed that "Meat Toilet" is closest translated into American English as "cum bucket."


This is most definitely the same thing that manga and anime translators have to do too. But unlike us, the big companies probably have a consultant who tries to explain the dialects and the way a character acts in the japanese language.

Another good example (to me) of character dialect would be Whip. She is a refined person who is obviously Blade's guardian, but also has an unhealthy infatuation with Blade as well. < I > chose to use "Milady" over "Princess" because I haven't heard anything about Blade having a royal background. Granted, I also haven't read the dialogue that TNT has translated so far.

I. . . should do that.

Yes, Blade is (secretly) a Princess. She has history with Prince Black, AKA Shield. They were former allies before he got all lust driven and took up the identity of Prince Black while making an adult movies business (presumably funded by his royal background). The short and quick of it is she is dressed (if you can say that about a mostly naked woman) up as a heroine and took up the identity of White Mask to protect her country "covertly".

Whip of course plays along with her heroine thing because that's her Princess (and she's pretty serious about her loyalty). Some of her rejected in game artwork shows her as a bit of a side kick, complete with a mask if I'm not mistaken. I suppose one over the top masked heroine was enough.

I think I described the whole Prince Black/ Shield, White Mask/ Blade sub plot in more detail way back. If you'd like to see the source I can see if I can dig up the explanation of it from Ahriman. Makes for some nice lore.

Milady is definitely acceptable, and works perfectly. I use it as well in my translations.

 

[TNT90]

Re: Defender of Public Morals: Swordswoman Asagi (Ahriman) 風紀剣士アサギ

Finally finished getting the Sadist defeat scene translation put into the game. Only had exams yesterday, today, and another on Monday to distract me from it. Now to start work on the victory scene.
Wouldn't hold your breath though, group projects after Exams: Round 2 is over.

Update on MEGA as usual.

 

[bigtotoro]

Re: Defender of Public Morals: Swordswoman Asagi (Ahriman) 風紀剣士アサギ

Awesome.

Some bugs that I noticed:
Last line of the auction was untranslated.
Some lines go out of frame:
"...if you don't tighten m-"
"your hatred is like t-"


Good luck with exams

 

[TNT90]

Huh, I thought I fixed all those, I'll have to recheck it later.

For some unknown reason, the corrections I made prior to uploading didn't take. Pretty much had to redo all of those but now I'm certain those issues should be remedied. Shouldn't be any off screen or untranslated lines now. If there are, let me know, preferably with what the line is so I can find it easier, and I'll fix it asap.

Should be up on MEGA now.

 

[DarkfallDC]

Re: Defender of Public Morals: Swordswoman Asagi (Ahriman) 風紀剣士アサギ

How do you install the translated files into the game? Is there a specific location we have to put things?

 

[TNT90]

Re: Defender of Public Morals: Swordswoman Asagi (Ahriman) 風紀剣士アサギ

Just the standard method. Extract the rgss3a file. Put the Data and Graphics folders you extracted in the same folder as the Game.exe. Delete the rgss3a file. Overwrite the data and graphics folders with those in the translation zip. Enjoy.

 

[Catgarius3396]

Re: Defender of Public Morals: Swordswoman Asagi (Ahriman) 風紀剣士アサギ

Hmm at the start of the game (in studio 1) after I chase that guy and want to go through the second door (After he throws those wine bottles at you) I get this error, can anyone help me out?

puu.sh/kYbYz/cfc443af85.jpg

 

[TNT90]

Re: Defender of Public Morals: Swordswoman Asagi (Ahriman) 風紀剣士アサギ

There were some issues regarding that file earlier. See the earlier post I made dealing with it: http://www.ulmf.org/bbs/showpost.php?p=710269&postcount=522

(Download the attached image and put it in the folder I mention. For some reason you don't have it. Alternatively you could re-download it from dlsite. Or buy it properly and do so if you haven't, only $7 or so.)

 

[lazycat]

Re: Defender of Public Morals: Swordswoman Asagi (Ahriman) 風紀剣士アサギ

' 'a another rough sketch on his blog, this time with tentacles.

 

[black990]

Re: Defender of Public Morals: Swordswoman Asagi (Ahriman) 風紀剣士アサギ

This game is still a trial or full game?