VN/TEXT [BBBen] Let Me In (v1.0.0 updated 30 Jul 2015)

[thswherizat]

Re: Let Me In (beta v0.4.0 updated 8 Jul 2015)

So now that I've played the game and gotten all the endings, I'd like to give my review!

Overall, I think it was a fresh idea to H games with a lot of fun things to try. A danger of the text-entry system you used is that for every 10 options you add, there will always be another 50 that people can think of trying to use. For instance, I was personally hoping for a few other ways to convince her to show herself off.

It was a bit frustrating though how sometimes you would type a word in that she had just used (I think "singing" was one) and it would say that she didn't understand that word. She just said it!

Overall, I think this was a very good game. With more options included and additional paths, I think it could be great. But I think it's an early project that you can build on in later games.

 

[super_slicer]

Re: Let Me In (beta v0.4.0 updated 8 Jul 2015)

I really like the concept of this game, tricking a princess into sexy time with a goblin is a pretty.. arousing idea. (Oddly enough, it's the trick that gets me going)

For the most part it's ungodly hard, untill you look at someone else's questions and go "Christ I'm so stupid, why didn't I ask that?". LoL I spent like two straight hours entering text that she didn't understand. Only real correction I could suggest is

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that once she has sang for you there should be a wider array of acceptable compliments to give her, tried: "I like your voice", "Your voice is pretty"

and neither worked. Unfortunately I can't give you a transcript b/c my porn computer doesn't have internet access.

Keep up the good work!

 

[BBBen]

Re: Let Me In (beta v0.4.0 updated 8 Jul 2015)

Thanks very much to both of you, I'm glad you enjoyed the game and that's good feedback. There are some natural limitations to how great the game can be at what it does, but I'll try to expand the Princess' responsiveness a bit more over time with player transcript feedback.

 

[thswherizat]

Re: Let Me In (beta v0.4.0 updated 8 Jul 2015)

Are you thinking of doing more with this game, or making other games of this format? I can still think of lots of ways you could expand this setting, but I also could see you wanting to move on to a new project.

 

[BBBen]

Re: Let Me In (beta v0.4.0 updated 8 Jul 2015)

Are you thinking of doing more with this game, or making other games of this format? I can still think of lots of ways you could expand this setting, but I also could see you wanting to move on to a new project.

Right now I'm working on Pervert Action: Legacy - in fact I just had a big day trying to get an alpha version ready for my Patreon backers. Doing LMI was kind of a diversion from that larger project, but one I was keen to do because it seemed like a fresh idea.

I completed the four endings I planned and the game's got a good amount of content considering I want it to be a short experience; the main thing it needs is more responsiveness, although I've improved that a lot over subsequent versions I'd still like it to be better, and I'll keep working on that if I get more transcripts and feedback. If you've got ideas about the game you'd like to share do go ahead and post them or send them to me; I've got time restraints on what I can do but I'd still listen.

I think there's room for more games like this one, and I've had a few ideas about how a different one might be tried. I would actually love to see someone else try the same format because I'd like to see what other people might bring to the genre, but I know that probably won't happen. I've had a couple of ideas myself about how another similar game might work, but right now with my focus on PAL I don't want to bite off more than I can chew.

 

[BBBen]

Re: Let Me In (beta v0.4.0 updated 8 Jul 2015)

I have now posted the full release version of the game, (v1.0.0) which can be found through the

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. This version contains new images, options and responses.

Changelog v1.0.0 - 29 Jul 2015

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- 3 new images
- New stripping/show off options (for the new images)
- More responses & better syntax
- minor bug fixes
- a couple of new tips