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Yeah, so there's another 'book' on the way here. I've decided to break this one up into parts, with a second thread for comments only. I expect this one to be just as long as the Ori one was when it's all finished, and we all know it took me over a year to write that one. Well, it's been more than a year now, and this one is only 1/4 of the way done if that. I'll be posting parts up as they are done after the first five are up. Currently, there are 4 parts to this that are done. I will post one today, one tomorrow, one EARLY Tuesday morning, part 4 on Wednesday Night, and Part 5 when it is finished, likely Thursday. After that, updates will occur as they are completed.
DISCLAIMER: MGM Studios own Stargate and all references to it. This work is purely a fan written fiction, and is in no way intended to infringe upon the MGM trademark or Copyrights of the above mentioned series.
And now, on to the good stuff:
Part 1: Mirvik's Arrival:
Mirvik Nasholn had once been a high ranking member of the Wraith rebels. No longer though. The incident that had changed him forever had cost him that spot. He reflected quietly upon what had happened for a moment. It had been a year or so ago, though time was irrelevant to a being that could live forever. Mirvik had been assigned to run a group of the rebels into the High Command's territory and conduct a bombing run. What they hadn't know was that the Command had been working with the humans of the Pegasus galaxy to create a retro-virus that would effectively alter the rebel's DNA all at
once and make them like the Command, in an attempt to deter them from their beliefs. Mirvik had been unfortunate enough to have his dart shot down by one of the humans, and had been rendered unable to move from the crash. Had he been able to move, he wouldn't be alive today. All Wraith rebels were taught that if you were shot down, you activated the self-destruct so the Command couldn't interrogate you. Mirvik hadn't been able to activate it, and had been captured by the humans and the Command. He had been forcibly injected with the retro-virus, but it hadn't worked like the idiots had thought it would. Instead of removing only one flaw of his Iratius DNA, the damn thing had removed all of it, making him a pathetic human. Mirvik hadn't remembered much for a while, but had ultimately remembered who he was, and had managed to escape, slowly returning to his wraith state. He had returned to the rebels, expecting to at the worst be demoted, but had been met with hostility the second he entered their space. The rebels he had once called family had tried, unsuccessfully, to kill him. Enraged, he had killed half of the guards in his way and exploded out of their space with a stolen hive ship. Mirvik had spent the past year stealing samples of various isotopes and of the retro-virus that had been used on him. Finally, he had his answer.
Mirvik had done the impossible. He had refined the retro-virus to remove his need to feed on humans, but had also refined it enough to allow him to keep all the strengths of a wraith, without actually having their DNA, or Human DNA. He himself was a completely unique species now. The details were difficult to explain, but Mirvik didn't have any need to explain what he was any longer to anybody. He only answered to himself, and all he cared about now was revenge. With further refinement, he had created numerous hybrids like himself, making him only one of a new species. He was not stupid however, and had designed it so that none of his creations could ever turn on him. Now, one year after the massive betrayal that had forced him to become a one man army, he had a hybrid army of his own. Stronger than both wraith and humans, a formidable army that could operate wraith technology. In the year he had been working on the second phase of his plan, he and his army had stolen an additional twenty hive ships, making the number they had twenty one now. A few upgrades here and there from stolen technology, and his hive ships were now invincible to all known forms of wraith weaponry. Now however, Mirvik had finally accomplished half of what he had set out to do. He had created an isotope that would kill humans and wraith alike, and had made certain it would kill every single one it came into contact with of those species. Mirvik had enhanced this isotope to be a potent killer. Although it would kill slowly and painfully, it would kill any human or wraith it came into contact with. It's method of transmission was strange however. Anyone who was infected with it would spread it by simply being on the same planet as an uninfected person, and the isotope took between a day to a week to begin to show it's symptoms, plenty of time for an infected person to spread it far and wide. The only step left now was for Mirvik to find a suitable host for it, possibly one that would be affected by it, but might take longer to show the signs. For that, he knew the best way to spread it throughout both galaxies he hated was to find two hosts. Mirvik had released the isotope directly into the human populations of the Pegasus galaxy, specifically where the rebels were likely to be feeding on. It had begun to spread like wild fire through the galaxy, and Mirvik himself was even surprised at how effective and fast it was. The current death toll had been well into the billions already amongst the wraith and human populations combined. Mirvik had watched as the rebels, who had begun to finally outnumber the council's forces, had suffered the largest losses thus far, over half of their fleet decimated. He had finally decided to help his work spread to the council, and had purposely damaged a rebel ship and disabled their self-destructs, and allowed a council ship to capture them after infecting that ship with the isotope. He had laughed quite a bit when he had heard the council believed that whatever disease was afflicting them had come from that rebel ship, and they had begun actively destroying rebel ships at every chance they had, taking no prisoners. Little did they know it was
already too late for them all, the isotope did not fade, it would continue to spread until it had nothing to feed on in the galaxy, at which point it would become dormant. Now however, Mirvik knew it was time to begin in the Milky Way, and he had set a course there.
Mirvik's ship emerged from hyper-space not too far from the planet called Earth. Mirvik knew that the planet had been at one time known to have Tiberion ships orbiting it, so he had made sure to remain well out of sensor range. It was likely the Tiberion's, as warlike as he had heard them to be, were scouting defenses of the planet in preparation for a full scale invasion. His isotope would probably help them, but he didn't care. If the Tiberion's sped up the process he didn't care, for after all, once he had finished his work, and upgraded the way he wanted to, not even they would be able to stand up to his power. Mirvik had taken great pains to avoid any chance of being spotted with this, and he had run sensor sweeps of the planet to find the perfect host. He had stumbled by pure luck across a half human, half nymph life reading near a central focus point of human activity. A further reading had yielded a female with those life signs, which was perfect for him. A quick set of his beaming technology, stolen from the Draque, and he had a lock on a spot where the female was. Taking a recall device, he pushed a button, and he vanished in the snapping green light of the transporter.
Anastasia had just returned from the town, carrying new clothing for herself and her girlfriend Zaleia. A sudden hum in the air caught her attention, and she whipped around to find yet another one of Talok's people not too far from her. At least, she thought he was a wraith, he looked different somehow. Anastasia had long gotten over the shock of the bug men, it had become normal for her, and she had realized that Talok would never hurt her or anyone in the school for that matter. However, what happened next startled even her. The bug man walked up to her, words seeming to form on his lips, surely about to ask her where to find something, when she suddenly felt a rough hand close over her arm, and something cold lash into her skin, breaking it. The pain she felt was horrible, and she dropped the new clothes she had been carrying, crying out in pain as the bastard withdrew a strange looking device from her arm. Mentally she screamed at the sight of her own blood, wondering what the hell he had stabbed her for, and unknowingly sending that scream to her brother, Shade.
Shade had been trying to relax along with Sho, cuddling close to her, both fully clothed when his peaceful thoughts were broken by the soul shattering scream of his sister in pain, and trouble. Fear resonated through the scream as well as pain, and Shade bolted upright, nearly tossing Sho to the floor from the abrupt move. A growl escaping from his lips as he headed for the door was all Sho needed to see, and she knew that something had happened to his sister. Wordless, they raced through the halls to get to her.
After only a few moments, Shade and Sho rounded the corner, and spotted the device with blood on it in the Wraith's hands, and Anastasia laying on the floor, not moving at all, paralyzed with fear. Shade's voice turned demonic as he practically bellowed, "What the hell have you done to my sister you bug faced freak?"
Mirvik looked up, a bit surprised to see a demon in front of him, and let out a chuckle. "Only what your entire species deserves foolish demon, well, I should say hers." He pointed towards Sho, and then added, "enjoy what time you have left traitorous scum, I will revel in the knowledge I will certainly outlive both of these bitches, and every living thing on this world!" With the last words, he tossed something in Sho's direction. Another device of some kind, forcing Shade to turn his attention away from the wraith hybrid.
Sho for her part flung her hands up, creating a small wind tunnel in front of her, stopping the object in mid air, however upon doing so, the device exploded, sending her crashing into the wall, stunned. As Shade turned to the wraith that did this, it spoke again.
"Know this, I am Mirvik, and I will rejoice upon your deaths." With that, before Shade could stop him, he vanished in a flicker of green Draque light, leaving a very pissed, and confused Shade to take care of both his lover, and his sister.
Shade moved towards Sho first, almost torn between her and his sister, and was saved from having to choose when Sho started to get up on her own and said, "I'm alright, check on your sister." Shade nodded once and rushed to Anastasia's side, and knelt down beside her. Turning her over, he noticed that the spot where she was injected seemed to have swollen rapidly, but other than that she appeared to be fine, save the fact she was out cold. Shade knew that he should get her back to his room and make sure she was alright, and gently lifted her into his arms, carrying her. Sho followed him to their room, and soon enough he had laid Anastasia on the bed, dressing the wound inflicted upon her by the wraith. A thought occurred to him as he suddenly realized that the wraith, Mirvik he had called himself, hadn't seemed to be a pure wraith, but something different. After a time, the silence was broken by Sho.
"Is she alright Shade?" A worried look crossed her face and she added, "I wonder what he meant by what my race deserves? Creepy though, and that device was strange too."
Shade nodded at her and said, "I think she's alright, but I can't be certain. It doesn't appear to have had any nasty effects on her, but that could change. I don't think any of the doctors here in the school can be of any help though. We need to get a hold of Siphon, and fast, let him know what's happened here."
Sho nodded, and without any further words headed over to the dresser and retrieved the long range communications crystal Siphon had given them months ago. A few pushes and she finally got the device to work, and began to speak into it.
The Kara cruised along the hyper-space tunnel carved through space silently. Siphon sat, relaxed back into his chair reflecting on how things had gone in the Ori Galaxy. Siphon and the others had, at the request of the Doci, returned to their galaxy to help them rebuild a society after they had seen the shocking truth about their 'gods'. Siphon had taken his wife, Daina, along with him, and now that the hardest parts of the rebuilding was over with, they had both been quite eager to withdraw and head back to Earth for some much needed rest and relaxation. Daina was sleeping in their quarters still, and Siphon was just running through a few things before turning in himself. His peaceful work was interrupted by the chime of an incoming transmission. Glancing over at the board, he quickly realized it was from Shade and Sho back on Earth, and it was marked urgent. Standing up and moving over to the proper console he said to himself, "what the hell? Now what?"
Sho's image came across the screen and she spoke. "Siphon, it's Sho and Shade. Something has happened here. Shade's sister was attacked, by a, well, I'm not entirely sure what he was. Seemed to be a wraith hybrid of some kind. Hang on, Shade wants to say something." A beat passed and Shade's face took up the screen.
"Yeah, Anastasia was attacked and injected with something by that guy. He called himself Mirvik, no last name, just the first name. Also, he tossed a device at Sho that exploded when she stopped it. We don't know what it was, but the injury on my sister's arm has swollen quite bad, which I'll take probably isn't a good thing."
Siphon frowned, not recognizing the name, but worried that someone would so boldly attack someone on Earth. His features hardened as he said, "No, it probably isn't good. I'll have a look at her when we get back, but we'll be at least another two days to get back, we're just getting back from the Ori Galaxy. I can try to coax more power out of the drive, but the best I can manage is two days flat. I'm sorry, I wish we could get back faster, but with the destruction of the super gate that isn't possible."
Shade nodded, wanting to scream bloody murder, but knew that Siphon wouldn't lie to him. Two days it would be then. "Alright, I'll try to keep you updated as much as possible on things if I can. I just hope that nothing bad happens."
Siphon nodded, understanding how frustrated Shade must feel. "That makes two of us. As soon as we are in range I'll be in touch with the wraith and find out what they know of this name if anything. It's too bad they haven't upgraded to the crystals yet. It'll be another day or so before we're in range to hail them at all. I'll check in with you once I have spoken to them."
Shade nodded, not looking happy at all but accepting the facts as they were. "Alright, I'll be in touch if anything else happens." With that his image winked out.
Siphon sat there for a few minutes, then went to the room where Daina was to tell her about what had happened.
DISCLAIMER: MGM Studios own Stargate and all references to it. This work is purely a fan written fiction, and is in no way intended to infringe upon the MGM trademark or Copyrights of the above mentioned series.
And now, on to the good stuff:
Part 1: Mirvik's Arrival:
Mirvik Nasholn had once been a high ranking member of the Wraith rebels. No longer though. The incident that had changed him forever had cost him that spot. He reflected quietly upon what had happened for a moment. It had been a year or so ago, though time was irrelevant to a being that could live forever. Mirvik had been assigned to run a group of the rebels into the High Command's territory and conduct a bombing run. What they hadn't know was that the Command had been working with the humans of the Pegasus galaxy to create a retro-virus that would effectively alter the rebel's DNA all at
once and make them like the Command, in an attempt to deter them from their beliefs. Mirvik had been unfortunate enough to have his dart shot down by one of the humans, and had been rendered unable to move from the crash. Had he been able to move, he wouldn't be alive today. All Wraith rebels were taught that if you were shot down, you activated the self-destruct so the Command couldn't interrogate you. Mirvik hadn't been able to activate it, and had been captured by the humans and the Command. He had been forcibly injected with the retro-virus, but it hadn't worked like the idiots had thought it would. Instead of removing only one flaw of his Iratius DNA, the damn thing had removed all of it, making him a pathetic human. Mirvik hadn't remembered much for a while, but had ultimately remembered who he was, and had managed to escape, slowly returning to his wraith state. He had returned to the rebels, expecting to at the worst be demoted, but had been met with hostility the second he entered their space. The rebels he had once called family had tried, unsuccessfully, to kill him. Enraged, he had killed half of the guards in his way and exploded out of their space with a stolen hive ship. Mirvik had spent the past year stealing samples of various isotopes and of the retro-virus that had been used on him. Finally, he had his answer.
Mirvik had done the impossible. He had refined the retro-virus to remove his need to feed on humans, but had also refined it enough to allow him to keep all the strengths of a wraith, without actually having their DNA, or Human DNA. He himself was a completely unique species now. The details were difficult to explain, but Mirvik didn't have any need to explain what he was any longer to anybody. He only answered to himself, and all he cared about now was revenge. With further refinement, he had created numerous hybrids like himself, making him only one of a new species. He was not stupid however, and had designed it so that none of his creations could ever turn on him. Now, one year after the massive betrayal that had forced him to become a one man army, he had a hybrid army of his own. Stronger than both wraith and humans, a formidable army that could operate wraith technology. In the year he had been working on the second phase of his plan, he and his army had stolen an additional twenty hive ships, making the number they had twenty one now. A few upgrades here and there from stolen technology, and his hive ships were now invincible to all known forms of wraith weaponry. Now however, Mirvik had finally accomplished half of what he had set out to do. He had created an isotope that would kill humans and wraith alike, and had made certain it would kill every single one it came into contact with of those species. Mirvik had enhanced this isotope to be a potent killer. Although it would kill slowly and painfully, it would kill any human or wraith it came into contact with. It's method of transmission was strange however. Anyone who was infected with it would spread it by simply being on the same planet as an uninfected person, and the isotope took between a day to a week to begin to show it's symptoms, plenty of time for an infected person to spread it far and wide. The only step left now was for Mirvik to find a suitable host for it, possibly one that would be affected by it, but might take longer to show the signs. For that, he knew the best way to spread it throughout both galaxies he hated was to find two hosts. Mirvik had released the isotope directly into the human populations of the Pegasus galaxy, specifically where the rebels were likely to be feeding on. It had begun to spread like wild fire through the galaxy, and Mirvik himself was even surprised at how effective and fast it was. The current death toll had been well into the billions already amongst the wraith and human populations combined. Mirvik had watched as the rebels, who had begun to finally outnumber the council's forces, had suffered the largest losses thus far, over half of their fleet decimated. He had finally decided to help his work spread to the council, and had purposely damaged a rebel ship and disabled their self-destructs, and allowed a council ship to capture them after infecting that ship with the isotope. He had laughed quite a bit when he had heard the council believed that whatever disease was afflicting them had come from that rebel ship, and they had begun actively destroying rebel ships at every chance they had, taking no prisoners. Little did they know it was
already too late for them all, the isotope did not fade, it would continue to spread until it had nothing to feed on in the galaxy, at which point it would become dormant. Now however, Mirvik knew it was time to begin in the Milky Way, and he had set a course there.
Mirvik's ship emerged from hyper-space not too far from the planet called Earth. Mirvik knew that the planet had been at one time known to have Tiberion ships orbiting it, so he had made sure to remain well out of sensor range. It was likely the Tiberion's, as warlike as he had heard them to be, were scouting defenses of the planet in preparation for a full scale invasion. His isotope would probably help them, but he didn't care. If the Tiberion's sped up the process he didn't care, for after all, once he had finished his work, and upgraded the way he wanted to, not even they would be able to stand up to his power. Mirvik had taken great pains to avoid any chance of being spotted with this, and he had run sensor sweeps of the planet to find the perfect host. He had stumbled by pure luck across a half human, half nymph life reading near a central focus point of human activity. A further reading had yielded a female with those life signs, which was perfect for him. A quick set of his beaming technology, stolen from the Draque, and he had a lock on a spot where the female was. Taking a recall device, he pushed a button, and he vanished in the snapping green light of the transporter.
Anastasia had just returned from the town, carrying new clothing for herself and her girlfriend Zaleia. A sudden hum in the air caught her attention, and she whipped around to find yet another one of Talok's people not too far from her. At least, she thought he was a wraith, he looked different somehow. Anastasia had long gotten over the shock of the bug men, it had become normal for her, and she had realized that Talok would never hurt her or anyone in the school for that matter. However, what happened next startled even her. The bug man walked up to her, words seeming to form on his lips, surely about to ask her where to find something, when she suddenly felt a rough hand close over her arm, and something cold lash into her skin, breaking it. The pain she felt was horrible, and she dropped the new clothes she had been carrying, crying out in pain as the bastard withdrew a strange looking device from her arm. Mentally she screamed at the sight of her own blood, wondering what the hell he had stabbed her for, and unknowingly sending that scream to her brother, Shade.
Shade had been trying to relax along with Sho, cuddling close to her, both fully clothed when his peaceful thoughts were broken by the soul shattering scream of his sister in pain, and trouble. Fear resonated through the scream as well as pain, and Shade bolted upright, nearly tossing Sho to the floor from the abrupt move. A growl escaping from his lips as he headed for the door was all Sho needed to see, and she knew that something had happened to his sister. Wordless, they raced through the halls to get to her.
After only a few moments, Shade and Sho rounded the corner, and spotted the device with blood on it in the Wraith's hands, and Anastasia laying on the floor, not moving at all, paralyzed with fear. Shade's voice turned demonic as he practically bellowed, "What the hell have you done to my sister you bug faced freak?"
Mirvik looked up, a bit surprised to see a demon in front of him, and let out a chuckle. "Only what your entire species deserves foolish demon, well, I should say hers." He pointed towards Sho, and then added, "enjoy what time you have left traitorous scum, I will revel in the knowledge I will certainly outlive both of these bitches, and every living thing on this world!" With the last words, he tossed something in Sho's direction. Another device of some kind, forcing Shade to turn his attention away from the wraith hybrid.
Sho for her part flung her hands up, creating a small wind tunnel in front of her, stopping the object in mid air, however upon doing so, the device exploded, sending her crashing into the wall, stunned. As Shade turned to the wraith that did this, it spoke again.
"Know this, I am Mirvik, and I will rejoice upon your deaths." With that, before Shade could stop him, he vanished in a flicker of green Draque light, leaving a very pissed, and confused Shade to take care of both his lover, and his sister.
Shade moved towards Sho first, almost torn between her and his sister, and was saved from having to choose when Sho started to get up on her own and said, "I'm alright, check on your sister." Shade nodded once and rushed to Anastasia's side, and knelt down beside her. Turning her over, he noticed that the spot where she was injected seemed to have swollen rapidly, but other than that she appeared to be fine, save the fact she was out cold. Shade knew that he should get her back to his room and make sure she was alright, and gently lifted her into his arms, carrying her. Sho followed him to their room, and soon enough he had laid Anastasia on the bed, dressing the wound inflicted upon her by the wraith. A thought occurred to him as he suddenly realized that the wraith, Mirvik he had called himself, hadn't seemed to be a pure wraith, but something different. After a time, the silence was broken by Sho.
"Is she alright Shade?" A worried look crossed her face and she added, "I wonder what he meant by what my race deserves? Creepy though, and that device was strange too."
Shade nodded at her and said, "I think she's alright, but I can't be certain. It doesn't appear to have had any nasty effects on her, but that could change. I don't think any of the doctors here in the school can be of any help though. We need to get a hold of Siphon, and fast, let him know what's happened here."
Sho nodded, and without any further words headed over to the dresser and retrieved the long range communications crystal Siphon had given them months ago. A few pushes and she finally got the device to work, and began to speak into it.
The Kara cruised along the hyper-space tunnel carved through space silently. Siphon sat, relaxed back into his chair reflecting on how things had gone in the Ori Galaxy. Siphon and the others had, at the request of the Doci, returned to their galaxy to help them rebuild a society after they had seen the shocking truth about their 'gods'. Siphon had taken his wife, Daina, along with him, and now that the hardest parts of the rebuilding was over with, they had both been quite eager to withdraw and head back to Earth for some much needed rest and relaxation. Daina was sleeping in their quarters still, and Siphon was just running through a few things before turning in himself. His peaceful work was interrupted by the chime of an incoming transmission. Glancing over at the board, he quickly realized it was from Shade and Sho back on Earth, and it was marked urgent. Standing up and moving over to the proper console he said to himself, "what the hell? Now what?"
Sho's image came across the screen and she spoke. "Siphon, it's Sho and Shade. Something has happened here. Shade's sister was attacked, by a, well, I'm not entirely sure what he was. Seemed to be a wraith hybrid of some kind. Hang on, Shade wants to say something." A beat passed and Shade's face took up the screen.
"Yeah, Anastasia was attacked and injected with something by that guy. He called himself Mirvik, no last name, just the first name. Also, he tossed a device at Sho that exploded when she stopped it. We don't know what it was, but the injury on my sister's arm has swollen quite bad, which I'll take probably isn't a good thing."
Siphon frowned, not recognizing the name, but worried that someone would so boldly attack someone on Earth. His features hardened as he said, "No, it probably isn't good. I'll have a look at her when we get back, but we'll be at least another two days to get back, we're just getting back from the Ori Galaxy. I can try to coax more power out of the drive, but the best I can manage is two days flat. I'm sorry, I wish we could get back faster, but with the destruction of the super gate that isn't possible."
Shade nodded, wanting to scream bloody murder, but knew that Siphon wouldn't lie to him. Two days it would be then. "Alright, I'll try to keep you updated as much as possible on things if I can. I just hope that nothing bad happens."
Siphon nodded, understanding how frustrated Shade must feel. "That makes two of us. As soon as we are in range I'll be in touch with the wraith and find out what they know of this name if anything. It's too bad they haven't upgraded to the crystals yet. It'll be another day or so before we're in range to hail them at all. I'll check in with you once I have spoken to them."
Shade nodded, not looking happy at all but accepting the facts as they were. "Alright, I'll be in touch if anything else happens." With that his image winked out.
Siphon sat there for a few minutes, then went to the room where Daina was to tell her about what had happened.