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Turtle Poker
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Re: Not Your Typical Work Day (xivvix)
(Congradulations, you've gotten the first critical in the game (since I started the rule). Unfortunately, it's a critical failure...)
(At 8 HP from this little failure btw, Jamie at 16)
In her rush to fire the grenade, Melissa failed to notice the end of the gun had been warped by hitting the pavement so many times, especially from that last explosion. The grenade hit some blockage, and for some reason the safety failed to trigger, resulting in another explosing right then and there. Amazingly, Melissa was not killed instantly but instead flung back across the road and into a medium sized rock formation. She wasn't even knocked out, but was very much in pain and dazed now. Jamie was still alive too, though the bluenette couldn't see her, she was screaming quite loudly, possibly hurt.
The monster observed this little display with a bit of confusion, but it was not one to ignore good fortune. It took its time and found a stable path down the steep embankment and head towards the devestated women.
(Congradulations, you've gotten the first critical in the game (since I started the rule). Unfortunately, it's a critical failure...)
(At 8 HP from this little failure btw, Jamie at 16)
In her rush to fire the grenade, Melissa failed to notice the end of the gun had been warped by hitting the pavement so many times, especially from that last explosion. The grenade hit some blockage, and for some reason the safety failed to trigger, resulting in another explosing right then and there. Amazingly, Melissa was not killed instantly but instead flung back across the road and into a medium sized rock formation. She wasn't even knocked out, but was very much in pain and dazed now. Jamie was still alive too, though the bluenette couldn't see her, she was screaming quite loudly, possibly hurt.
The monster observed this little display with a bit of confusion, but it was not one to ignore good fortune. It took its time and found a stable path down the steep embankment and head towards the devestated women.