Re: Just Twisting About
Super happy criticism time!
Areas worth praise:
Breasts, for being well drawn; the nipples' lack of clear definition is a nice touch.
Pubic hair, for the detail
Good areas:
Sweat (cum?), it certainly adds to the picture, but it's nothing exceptional in and of itself.
Cum - it's good but it makes the insertion look weird; I can't tell if it's in her or not. It looks more like it's in front of her crotch, as opposed to penetrating her.
Tentacles - I would say they are too 'lumpy' and not enough 'squiggly'; a more even tentacle depth makes them more attractive, as does curving bends, as opposed to sharp bends... oh, I'm not a very good describer, am I? See the tentacle that's apparently going into her ass, at the point where it stops going down and starts going sideways; this is the 'sharp bends' I'm talking about. Still, there's nothing wrong with the tentacles; after all, it's not like they have a set form, a way they 'must' be drawn.
The legs and feet - though the feet are very slightly iffy when you pay close attention to them, it's good overall. I would guess that it's mainly because the back part of her foot seems to be almost as long as the front section.
Areas that detract from the picture:
The head - crooked eyes, and I believe there's something iffy with the facial structure... my best guess as to where this iffy-ness comes from would be the cheek line as it curves backwards; the only reason I think this is because as I scroll up the picture, everything looks great until I reach the point where the cheek curves back. (Oh, and the hair is good, I don't count it as part of the head.)
All considered, it's a damn good picture for, as you put it, a 'quickie' without any shading - and it looks even better when you scroll the head off the top of the screen.
I must apologise, though; this kind of imprecise criticism tends to be more annoying than aiding, more 'hateful-sounding' than helpful. I would far prefer to give you more in depth criticism that properly points out what you could to do to make the picture better, instead of just saying 'this area is bad/good'... but I'm just not that good an art critic. Any more detailed advice I might try to give you would likely make the picture worse. Still, I try to do what I can, though my criticism in regards to art should be taken with considerably more seasoning than is normally applicable.