Re: Champions of Corruption (Formerly Unnamed Text Game)
The writing of the whole scenario is the problem with Marble, especially when you're partially addicted.
The lack of an option for indifference is the main offender.
The lack of an option for dominance is a further offender.
You don't have to option to shrug and let someone else milk Marble, first of all, starting things off on the same bad foot which is thematic to this encounter.
You randomly encounter her at the farm when you're trying to do something else, and without an option to wave and pass on, you sit and talk with her about inconsequential shit, somehow permitting her to grow more and more clingy over you.
Just because you don't want to hurt her feelings unduly doesn't mean you're all sappy over the fucking cow.
Similarly, in the same addiction path, you only get the options to "comfort" or "blame" her for being a Lacta Bovine, and not one to be indifferent.
Chick's one of the corrupted monsters in the game, so what? It's neither here nor there. If you don't give a damn, or even if you like corrupted creatures or Lacta Bovines in general, that doesn't mean you either hate Lacta Bovines, or like Marble in particular. But those latter two are essentially your conversational options.
When you break your addiction without either humoring her "self-hating" bullshit or "blaming" her, she sort of shuffles into your camp without you having the option to dissuade her, and without the option to either rape/enslave her at camp or to kick her the fuck out.
For no reason at all, you permit her to decide when to fuck you, rather than the other way around.
For no reason at all, let her decide what size of cock she'll take, too, even when you actually wouldn't tolerate bullshit like that.
Hell, as soon as you break your addiction, you run to tell her, even if you don't actually think it's any of her fucking business.
It's absolute nonsense.
Additionally, as to dominance, the rape option that IS available is only halfway satisfying, and it doesn't lead on to an enslavement path either.
I'm afraid the encounter is just plain old deficient.
Can you try to do a better job?