Re: Defender of Public Morals: Swordswoman Asagi (Ahriman) 風紀剣士アサギ
@bigtotoro
There are extra scene variants? Oh my, I'll need to go over that again and check. Which brings me to my main point.
Some News:
Good News: I think I've finally hit my saturation point on MGSV.
Bad News: That was replaced by getting absorbed into the First law series by Joe Abercrombie. What a ride of a book.
Worse News: And we have a new massive set of experiments going on at work. Fucking hate mice.
Worster News: ...And I have two exams on the 21st and 25th that I should really starting studying for.
So yeah, don't expect much soon. Haven't even played the new Noxian Nights demo yet.
So Ahriman has seen our thread and our work on the translation. He's really excited and supports us, so yay! He showed it to me like it was a new thing and I was like "Yeah that's the project I was telling you about like a few weeks ago, and I'm actually helping work on it too. Remember the rgss2 file questions?" And he like had an "Oh!" moment when it all came together lol.
So as for Act two, are you talking about the stuff dealing with rescuing Whip? Here's the intro to the Sadist's boss fight again. I'll go ahead do the defeat scene today if you're not already past translating it.
I've got full dominion on the boss fight scenes, my favorite parts! Rest assured they'll be the highest quality I can muster, with assistance from multiple translation tools and help from Master Ahriman himself. (Basically, dibs again
)
Also, in reference to your job TNT, Bill Nye voice: "Science RULES!"
Sadist boss fight intro dialogue
(including in battle opening dialogue)
*asterisks indicate the enclosed text was colored, most often than not, pink*
Asagi: これは・・・
That's...
Blade: まさか・・・ウィップがあの程度の輩に敗北してまんぐり陵辱されるなんて・・・っ
No way... I never thought Whip would be defeated by *pile-driver rape*!
Asagi: とにかく助けねば
Anyway, we have to help!
Sadist: ほう、子鼠どもがまだウロウロしておったか
Ha! You vermin still around?
Blade: ウィップをお放しなさい！
Let Whip go!
*Sadist: 放す・・・これは人聞きの悪い
まるで己（オレ）がこのメス犬を捕らえているかのような口ぶりだな
Let her go... that wouldn't do any good.
She's already resigned to her role as a bitch, as you soon will.
Whip: ふぅん！・・・むむぅぅん！！
Mmmph!...Mmmm!!
Ura: どっからどう見てもそうじゃねぇか！
No matter what you say, it is purely appearances!
Sadist:くくく・・・浅慮、浅薄、
浅学じゃな
よく見てみろ、
こやつの恍惚に染まった肌を・・・
熱情を含んだ薄桃の吐息を・・・
Heheheh... it is unwise to be so superficial, so ignorant; take a good look: her skin, dyed pink with ecstasy... her light sighs of passion...
Asagi: 戯言を申すな・・・っ
ウィップ
殿がそのようなはしたない格好で喜ぶものか・・・っ
Don't talk nonsense! Whip doesn't enjoy such a lewd appearance!
Sadist: それを浅いと言っておるのだ
(As I said, don't be superficial)<- (actual translation, but I think this alteration fits a bit better, due to Asagi's reaction)
You just don't get it
Asagi: ...?!
Sadist:四肢を縛められる事で知る充足感がある
(She feels a sense of fulfillment having her limbs tied)
尻穴を太マラに抉られることで至る境地もある
(and having her asshole gaped by a big cock)
四肢を縛められる事で知る充足感がある尻穴を太マラに抉られることで至る境地もある圧倒的な
雄に服従する喜びこそが牝の悦と言うものじゃ
・・・そらっまた
圧倒的な雄に服従する喜びこそが牝の悦と言うものじゃ・・・そらっまた深く抉（えぐ）ると喘（よ）がっ
ておる
She feels the satisfaction of being a woman; *she feels the pleasure of obediently surrendering to a man*, and is delighted to be bound and fucked in the ass by a big cock. She feels the joy of submission to a powerful man; deep down, she craved this.
Whip: ふぅぅん！！
むぅぅぅぅふぅぅ！！！
Fu~u~un!!
Mu~u~u~u~u~ufu~u~u~u!!!
*Blade: そんな・・・そんな・・・
*信じて殿軍（しんがり）を任せたウィップが*
No way... to think Whip would be defeated so thoroughly by *restrained anal piledriver training*, and that she would completely surrender like this!
Sadist: うはははっ！！
強気な牝ほど尻穴が弱いと相場が決まっておるわ！
Uhahahaha!! Such an arrogant woman's weakness is her asshole!
Ura: ・・・ケッ
口枷で反論を封じて好き勝手言ってるだけじゃねぇか！
...Tch, she can't offer a rebuttal while her mouth is sealed!
Sadist: 愚か者が・・・
ならば聞かせてやろう・・・
Fool... I'll let you see for yourself... the lewd cries of a bitch that has fallen as an *anal cum dump*! (meat toilet was used, but cum dump is basically the English equivalent)
Whip: あぁぁん！！
くるぅ！
入ってきちゃう！
ご主人様の特製子種が
生意気なウィップの肉体を支配されちゃうのぉ
降伏しちゃうのぉ・・・
A~a~a~hn!!
Kuru~u!
Cum inside me! Please fill Anal masochist Whip with Master's special sperm! Whip's insolent body has been dominated by the greatness of your cock! Oh damn-- I surrender to you... damn it-- I surrender... *I want to swear undying loyalty to you Master*...
Sadist: そうだ！
貴様は雌犬だ！
性処理の射精穴として忠誠を誓え！
That's right! You bitch! Swear eternal loyalty as a cum hole!
Whip: ふぁい・・・ウィップは
おチンポ奴隷として服従しま・・・
Fuaah... Whip is your submissive property, and as your cock slave...
Asagi: ダメだウィップ殿！
その言葉だけは口にしてはいけない！
貴方の主・・・
マスク殿の前だろう！
Don't do it Whip! Don't let those words leave your mouth! Your master...(White) Mask is right in front of you!
Whip: ま・・すく・・・
ブレ・・・イ・・・ド・・・
お嬢様は無事・・・
ひぃぃんっ！
Uh..ah...
Bl...a...de... Princess is safe... Hyi~a~ahn!
Sadist: 叫いておる！
儂への忠誠を誓う神聖な儀式の最中ぞっ！
Stay focused! You're in the middle of the sacred ritual to swear loyalty to me!
Asagi: ウィップ殿！
Lady Whip!
Whip: あひぃ・・・お尻・・・だめぇ・・・負けちゃう・・・おチンポに負けちゃうぅ・・・
*(She says dame~e which means "I'm (trying to look as if I am) too innocent to accept this kind of shameful situation!" I just put "so good" as a placeholder since there's no English equivalent I can think of)
Ahn...my ass...(so good!)... which is defeated...defeated by your cock... w...where... where is the Princess?
Asagi: む？マスク殿・・・？一体どこに！？
Huh? Where is Mask...? Where the hell--!?
Sadist: ほれぃほれぃ！はよ堕ちよ！とく堕ちよ！いま堕ちよ！！ (He says fall but surrender reads better in english)
Come on, come on! Surrender! Give in;
surrender!!
Whip: ひぃん！あひぃ！！ひゃぅぅ！どくどく注がれてるのぉ・・・おチンポ汁様にマゾアナルが制圧されちゃうぅ・・・お、お、おぉぉっ・・・お嬢様ぁぁぁ！！
Ahhn! Ahyii!! Hya~u~u! I'm being filled up with so much... *My masochist asshole is conquered by your dick's love juice*!... Princess--Fuwa~a~a~a~ah!
Blade: ホッホッホ！！オーホッホッホ！！
Hohohohoh!!
Sadist: む？・・・何奴？
Huh?...Who's that?
Blade: ・・・天より気高き忠誠がある
...There is nothing more noble than the loyalty when one pledges their life, who risked their lives to enter heaven through good karma... There is no fate deeper than the night of destiny
Sadist: 外か・・・っ！
Tch...Outside!
Blade: 命をかけた誓いであろうと
命をかけた誓いであろうと天に与えられた試練に打ち勝つは容易ではない
どれほど
心を強く持とうと
心を強く持とうと
どれほど訓練を繰り返そうと逃れられぬカルマ・・・清廉の忠誠を曇らせ、どれほど訓練を繰り返そうと
逃れられぬカルマ・・・清廉の忠誠を曇らせ、どれほど訓練を繰り返そうと逃れられぬカルマ・・・清廉 の忠誠を曇ら
せ、鍛えた肉体を蝕むもの・・・人・・・
To swear one's life... It is not easy to overcome the ordeal of pledging one's life, to enter heaven you must have a strong heart and those that resign themselves, those with weaker hearts, must repeat training. To cloud up one's integrity, by undermining a person's body and clouding their karma, what is the result of such repeated training... People... I call it *anal masochism*!
Sadist: 曲者が・・・名を・・・名を名乗れ！
Suspicious person... your name... state your name!
Blade: 即堕ちアナルを責めた程度で
ウィップの心まで服従させれるなどと傲慢！たとえぽっかり即イキアナルが許しても
たとえぽっかり即イキアナルが許してもこの光天の白刃「マスク・オブ・ホワイト」が許しませんわ！
Such arrogance, to think Whip's heart would surrender so quickly because of her ass! Even if you beg for forgiveness, just for the anal gaping, the divine blade of White Mask would not allow it!
Sadist: くくく・・・「マスク・オブ・ホワイト」イト」この儂の調教にケチを付けるとはのぅ・・・その放言は高くつくぞ！
Heheheh... White Mask, I'm going to subject you to strict sexual training... your boasting has cost you dearly!
Blade: こちらのセリフですわ・・・私のウィップへの狼藉はただのお仕置きでは済ませませんことよ
My speech isn't finished... You will suffer violent punishment for messing with my Whip
Whip: お嬢様・・・に、逃げ・・・て
P-princess... run away... Ahn
Sadist: 者共であえい！くくくっ・・・飛んで火にいるメス豚め・・・っもう一度捕まえて今度こそ儂自らメス豚調
教してやろう
Gentlemen, now!
Keheheh... You foolish woman... I will capture you again, and I'll make sure you undergo thorough *female pig training*, personally.
Blade: ふふっ・・・ヒロインに二度の敗北はなくってよ
Heheh... the heroine never loses twice
Sadist: その強がりがいつまで続くかな？貴様の買い手は既に決まっておるのだ！
中年ロリコン豚男への特注品として躾てやる！
How long will you continue to bluff? Your buyer has already been decided! I'll train you as a special order for a *fat middle aged pedophile*! (lolicon was used but pedophile has the same meaning)
(Begining of fight)
Sadist: 小娘どもが・・・思い知れ！
You little girls... are nothing!
(Makes the party masochists)
Asagi: くぅ・・・な、なんのつもりだ！
Ahn... W-what are you planning!
Sadist: 貴様ら生意気な雌豚の本性を暴いてやろうと言うのだいい声で喘（な）けよ・・・
I'll make you insolent female pigs obey by exposing your true nature...
Blade: く・・・こ、これはマゾ化の呪縛・・・痛みが快感に変えられる呪いですわ！この状態でダメージを受ける
と快感で動けなくなってしまいますわ！
Damn, this is the cursed spell of masochism... pain is changed to pleasure! We will be stunned by pleasure when attacked in this state!
Ura: へ、変な芸当使いやがって・・・
Tch, what a strange trick...
Blade: この私ですらマゾ豚にされて一度は敗北させられた技・・・っ油断なさらないでくださいまし！
This technique changed even me into a masochist pig once... Don't let your guard down!
Sadist: くっくっく・・・自力では抜け出せぬ「拘束調教地獄」を見せてくれよう！
Keheheh... I will show you bondage sexual training hell, you won't be able to get away on your own!
(Start fight)
