RPG Patreon Active RPG Maker [BrokenTorpedo] Queen in Deficit

[BrokenTorpedo]

Hello all, so here's the adult RPG I am cooking up at the moment.
Well, the title doesn't make much of a sense does it? You can't really say a person is "in Deficit"...

Anyway, here you'll play as a newly crowned queen of a little kingdom, who has to pick up after her father's untimely death. And how she could end up solving many problem sexually.
It'd be a combination of RPG and Management game, and a bit of strategy. It's inspired by and Paradox's EU series and Nerial's Reigns. And lots of Hentai RPGs, notably Clymenia's works.

It's still pretty early in production. Since I not only make the game, but also draw the arts myself.

Spoiler: screenshots

Follow on my development more closely here (Download link included) :

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Patreon page:

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I don't really put anything Patreon exclusive at the moment, but had I ever start any poll on stories direction or game features it'd be set up on there.
So, donate how much you like, and only donate if you feel like it.

12.23.2021(0.19a) changelog:
-Repeatable H-events in the Carmelli reconstruction event chain, with the option to finish inside.
-New H-event in the barrack's morale raising options.
-Added the last Carmelli reconstruction H-scene's recollection version, which was left out in the last version.
-Changed the game icon.
-Added an extra control sheet in the game folder, since a lot of players didn't know those exist.
-Other minor changes and bug fixes.

Older changelog

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09.20.2021(0.18a) changelog
-New H-event in the Carmelli reconstruction event chain.
-New H-event follow up to the nude meeting.
-Added a guide to the card game with Nighveil.
-Remade the world map.
-Other minor changes.

06.29.2021(0.17a) changelog
-New H-event in the Carmelli reconstruction event chain.
-One mini H-Event against the wall, for now it only triggers with one thug on the left side of the city, and another man with blue headcloth in the slum.
-Now when making peace with Floranerica, the "Seek Alternative Method" with the Duke will lead to the Duke scenes with small dialogue variation.
-The discretion of the diplomatic options during war will work and reflect the VP you have against the opponent
-More chating dialogue with Williamina.
-Carmelli's broken bridge cut-scene after the first time you turned down the opportunity, will now only occurs at week 3 and 4.
-Other minor changes.

04.25.2021(0.16a) changelog:
-New H-event with the Barbarian cultural event chain.
-New H-event of Williamina in the arena of Verrtignis.
-Simple chating option with Williamina in the Palace, though the content is still very lacking at the moment.

10.05.2020 (0.15a) changelog:
-New event chain triggered after the Barbarian Chief's second scene.
-New H-event with the event chain mentioned above, trigger by talking to the Chief.
-New H-event in the Carmelli reconstruction event chain.
-Some other minor changes.
-Bug fix:
=Fixed the bug with the cold down of the locust plague.
=Fixed the bug of the Barbarian Chief's second scene's recollection version.
10.05.2020 (0.14a) changelog:
-New H-event with the Duke.
-New H-event for the Barbarian in the hostage's resident.
-Some new random events.
-Some visual change in the main town corresponding to the statues.
07.15.2020(0.13a)changelog:
-New H-event in the Carmelli reconstruction event chain.
-New H-event follow up to the nude meeting.
-Reworked the Immediate Conscription decision.
-Minor dialog update for the repeatable horseback scene.

05.24.2020(0.12a) changelog:
-New H-event in the barrack.
-Next stage of the non-H Carmelli reconstruction event.
-Repeatable version of the poker game and the first bar scene with it.
-Fixed the bug where troops number won't go down in war at all.
-Readjusted the calculationof tax and expense.
-One minor dialog update outside the bar.

03.31.2020 changelog:
-A few random events that balances out things a bit.
-New event line that can be opened when reach maximum loan number.
-New H-event of Williamina in the arena of Verrtignis.
-New H-event in the arena of Verrtignis.

01.25.2020 changelog:
-Expand the intro.
-New H-event when losing to the barbarian can be accessed, after the event that triggers when you get 50+ victory point against them.
-New non-H event in the Carmeli.
-A non-H scene in the Traders' League where you ask to extend the maximum amount of loans.
-A random event that triggers when you are at war while having high Prestige.
-New H-event with the Duke.

11.18.2019 changelog:
-UI improvement.
-New H-event with the Duke.
-New non-H eventin the Carmeli.
-Two variations of Barbarian H-event in Carmeli hostage's resident.
-New H-event for low morale in the Barracks (civilian dress required)
-Added the recollection room, which could be accessed from the palace 2F.

06.15.2019 changelog:
-Some Bug Fixes/ Re-Balancing
-One more H-event in the Painter event chain which brings it to a conclusion.
-Conclusion to the border bandits events.
-An event with Williamina (the bodyguard),which you can access in the bed room. But there's one unfinished art work in it.
-Opened up the Town Hall of Carmeli with an intro. It’s for a branch latter.

05.07.2019 changelog:
-New H event with the Duke.
-Follow up event for the Slum Bar event: note that both of the H events in the bar are avoidable, and they are not recurrent.
-Made it so the player have more control over triggering some of the H event or not.
-One annoying random event.
-New button on the title card, it's a script I fond made by modern algebra.

04.05.2019 changelog:
-Painter event chain: currently has 3 events.
The first one is a random event than will have a chance of 1 out of 6 happen after the 5th day.
once you triggered the first one, the follow up can be found in the national decisions.
-Slum bar: New H event
After reclaiming the Carmeli, wait till the 7th of May, an event chain about raiders will show up, that'll make the slum accessible.
There are a lot of dialogues for this one.
And I am planning on adding one more H-event latter when wrapping up this event chain.
-Civilian Dress
Introduced as part of the slum event.
-Immediate Conscription:
For gathering a lot of troops all at once, can be found in the national decisions.
With penalty of course.
-Verrtignis
A neighbouring country that'd be now accessible, though nothing to interact but an intro.

02.24.2019 changelog:
-New H event with the Duke.
-New H event with recruiting.
-New mechanic: national decisions in the throne room, you can now hire assistant officials to aid in minor tasks, once you gain enough territories.
-New control option: press A to hide text box, press Q to show text history.
-Church in Brezfort is now open, you can buy Absolution Certificate which cleans your Infamy, but nothing else is there yet.

01.22.2019 changelog:
Minor Bug fix:
-Bug fixes, now the events with the Duke will work normally hopefully.
-Added some more random events ( since it's in the same file)

01.16.2019 changelog:
-New H event with the Duke.
-New H event in the farming province Carmeli when losing)
-Fast travel within hometown.
-Menu now shows the date.
-Now you are able to take loan form the trader's league.
-Maps of Floranerica and Carmeli are now accessible.
-Some dialogue for some minor NPCs.
-Battle background noise.
Still not much for the moment though.

Not much you can do for the moment.
-There's two H scenes that can be triggered in the barrack
though Recruitment and Raise Morale, but some Impurity is required.
-One scene with the Duke of Floranerica (trigger by going to world mad and travel to Floranerica.)

 

[Sangera]

As an EU4 Player i had a good laught at the comet sighted message.

I really like the idea.

 

[BrokenTorpedo]

Hello all, here's another update!
I ended up put a lot more work on things other than the sex scenes.
Still, added two new event chains, one of them has 3 different levels and the other just has one now.

Download Link is the same as always:

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Have fun~

Change Log:

Spoiler

-Painter event chain: currently has 3 events.
The first one is a random event than will have a chance of 1 out of 6 happen after the 5th day.
once you triggered the first one, the follow up can be found in the national decisions.

-Slum bar: New H event
After reclaiming the Carmeli, wait till the 7th of May, an event chain about raiders will show up, that'll make the slum accessible.
There are a lot of dialogues for this one.
And I am planning on adding one more H-event latter when wrapping up this event chain.

-Civilian Dress
Introduced as part of the slum event.

-Immediate Conscription:
For gathering a lot of troops all at once, can be found in the national decisions.
With penalty of course.

-Verrtignis
A neighbouring country that'd be now accessible, though nothing to interact but an intro.

 

[BrokenTorpedo]

Hello all, another update is here.
So, I didn't finish as much as I'd like with this update. There're still 2 new H events, but there're less minor stuffs done this time around.

Download Link is the same as always:

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Have fun~

Change Log:

Spoiler

-New H event with the Duke.
-Follow up event for the Slum Bar event: note that both of the H events in the bar are avoidable, and they are not recurrent.
-Made it so the player have more control over triggering some of the H event or not.
-One annoying random event.
-New button on the title card, it's a script I fond made by modern algebra.

 

[BrokenTorpedo]

Hello all, here's another update!
Download Link is the same as always:

You must be registered to see the links

Have fun~

Change Log:

Spoiler

-Some Bug Fixes/ Re-Balancing
-One more H-event in the Painter event chain which brings it to a conclusion.
-Conclusion to the border bandits events.
-An event with Williamina (the bodyguard),which you can access in the bed room. But there's one unfinished art work in it.
-Opened up the Town Hall of Carmeli with an intro. It’s for a branch latter.

 

[BrokenTorpedo]

Hello all, here's another update! Unfortunately, due to some real life issue and partially of my poor time management, there's only one new H event this time.
Download Link is the same as always:

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Have fun~

Change Log:

Spoiler

-One more H-event in the Duke's event chain, with a 1/2 chance to trigger after the first sex one.
-An event that let you go to war with Bailabaikal.
-Option to inspecting reconstruction work on the province of Carmeli.
-Steward's dialogue option "What am I working on again?" now works.
-Removed the spy option on world map.
-Add Strength value to country descriptions.

 

[BrokenTorpedo]

So, here are some designs I came up for the female barbarian warrior. A potential ally and also enemy to the PC. Name not yet decided.

I decided to let my patrons vote for the final design. So if you want to participate in making this decision, maybe consider jump on board for this one. (the poll will end on Aug. 26th BTW.)

 

[BrokenTorpedo]

Hello all, here's another update!
Download Link is the same as always:

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You can read more about the game and the update Here:

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Please report any bug you encountered. Any feedback would also be appreciated. Thanks, and have fun.

Change Log:

Spoiler

09.30.2019(0.08)
-Switching to one turn per week.
-Portrait for the Duke.
-Portrait for the Barbarian Warrior.
-Continuation of the Barbarian storyline.
-New H-event of the Barbarian Warrior.
-New H-event in the Barbarian Tribe if you refused the first offer.
-New control: Shift now "toggles" run. F5 zoom the window to screen size.

 

[BrokenTorpedo]

Hello all, here's the latest update!
You can read more about the game and the update Here
Please report any bug you encountered. Any feedback would also be appreciated. Thanks, and have fun.

Change Log:

Spoiler

11.18.2019(0.09a)
-UI improvement.
-New H-event with the Duke.
-New non-H eventin the Carmeli.
-Two variations of Barbarian H-event in Carmeli hostage's resident.
-New H-event for low morale in the Barracks (civilian dress required)
-Added the recollection room, which could be accessed from the palace 2F.

 

[BrokenTorpedo]

Hello all, here's the latest update, the link is the same as usual

You must be registered to see the links

Please report any bug you encountered. Any feedback would also be appreciated. Thanks, and have fun.

Change Log:

Spoiler

-Added a few random events that balance out things a bit.
-New event line that can be opened when reach maximum loan number.
-New H-event of Williamina in the arena of Verrtignis.
-New H-event in the arena of Verrtignis.

 

[BrokenTorpedo]

Hello all, here's the latest update, the link is the same as usual

You must be registered to see the links

Please report any bug you encountered. Any feedback would also be appreciated. Thanks, and have fun.

Change Log:

Spoiler

-New H-event in the barrack.
-Next stage of the non-H Carmelli reconstruction event.
-Repeatable version of the poker game and the first bar scene with it.
-Fixed the bug where troops number won't go down in war at all.
-Readjusted the calculationof tax and expense.
-One minor dialog update outside the bar.

 

[BrokenTorpedo]

Hello all, here's another update! You can read more about the game and the update

You must be registered to see the links

, and the link is the same as usual

You must be registered to see the links

As usual, please report any bug you encountered. Any feedback would also be appreciated. Thanks, and have fun.

 

[XII]

soo i tried this game, bug wise its pretty clean, at least in my playthrough, though it has many typos, but overall i enjoy playing this game

a question though, what kind of fetish you're planning to put in the game? i kinda want to see pregnancy in it, cum drinking/eating and more gangbang, since my playthrough is slut queen

and are you going to sell the completed game? or its forever free?

 

[BrokenTorpedo]

@XII
Glade you like it.
As to fetishes, cum drinking and more gangbang will be there, pregnancy will only be in some of the endings I planned.
As to other fetishes, some come to mind right away: orgy, exhibitionism, cum bathing, milking and maybe a bit of bestiality, not sure if I would be allowed to make the last one.

I did plan for it to be completely free to play originally,
but looking at how the return on investment is right now, I might consider changing my model latter in the road.
but I will give my past supporters a completed game no matter what.

 

[XII]

so its safe to assume its only pregnant end then? a bit dissapointing, i kinda want it to be not pregnant end, something like repecussion from being slut, like getting huge hit to prestige or max prestige when discovered pregnant without husband, but the rest of listed fetish basically my another huge fetishes so no problem with pregnant end only, i'll happily play future updates when they're comes

Spoiler: just playthrough rant

my end goal would be something like a competent slut queen, like the country are prosperous but the queen are huge slut who'll bear anyone's childs, if you ever considering this i hope the game lore have something like unaging magic or super drug so i can be eternal slut queen haha

i think patreon forbid bestiality, i'm not sure though, also dunno about subscribestar

Spoiler: monetary suggestion

if you're open to middle ground maybe you could use itch.io using same scheme like indivi or nonoplayer in the other threads, so the broke/stingy/potential pirate could still download for free while those who appreciate it could donate/"buy" them, i suggesting itch because i'm currently the broke player-type(sorry), also not a fan of subscription-based support in general, and i don't want to see a dev became another certain wolf who spend more effort trying to combat pirate than improving the game

 

[BrokenTorpedo]

so its safe to assume its only pregnant end then? a bit dissapointing, i kinda want it to be not pregnant end, something like repecussion from being slut, like getting huge hit to prestige or max prestige when discovered pregnant without husband, but the rest of listed fetish basically my another huge fetishes so no problem with pregnant end only, i'll happily play future updates when they're comes

Spoiler: just playthrough rant

my end goal would be something like a competent slut queen, like the country are prosperous but the queen are huge slut who'll bear anyone's childs, if you ever considering this i hope the game lore have something like unaging magic or super drug so i can be eternal slut queen haha

Pregnancy in the normal game would require at least double the picture variations, and dozens of scenarios with how everyone react to it, depends on who the father is. Since, well, the protagonist is the queen, it'd kinda have a political impact here. Just thinking about everything that would have to come with it gives me a headache. Sorry.

competent slut queen could work as an ending, but things like unaging magic will not,
just don't expect for anything too high fantasy in general.

Spoiler: monetary suggestion

if you're open to middle ground maybe you could use itch.io using same scheme like indivi or nonoplayer in the other threads, so the broke/stingy/potential pirate could still download for free while those who appreciate it could donate/"buy" them, i suggesting itch because i'm currently the broke player-type(sorry), also not a fan of subscription-based support in general, and i don't want to see a dev became another certain wolf who spend more effort trying to combat pirate than improving the game

Well, if you don't want to take part in subscription-based support, i also have an account on Ko-Fi for donation, and a Gumroad shop that I'm selling my two old comics.

 

[BrokenTorpedo]

Hello all, here's another update! You can read more about the game and the update

You must be registered to see the links

, and the link is the same :

You must be registered to see the links

Please report any bug you encountered. Any feedback would also be appreciated. Thanks, and have fun.

 

[Ghotty]

excellent art and design, writing could use some work though, and I seriously question any story that narrates sex scenes in the first person with a female protagonist. Also, a gallery with hints wouldn't be amiss

 

[BrokenTorpedo]

excellent art and design, writing could use some work though,

well, writing is something I do snuggle with.

and I seriously question any story that narrates sex scenes in the first person with a female protagonist.

It's actually second person, since first person would be I/Me/My.

Also, a gallery with hints wouldn't be amiss

Not sure what you mean by "gallery with hints" though.

 

[Ghotty]

well, writing is something I do snuggle with.

It's actually second person, since first person would be I/Me/My.

Not sure what you mean by "gallery with hints" though.

Fair point on second person, and by 'gallery with hints' I mean, traditionally, a lot of rpg style h games have gallery rooms. The better ones allow you to interact with the greyed out scenes and give you a hint on how to get it. AKA 'Lose to invaders first time' or something like that. Also, I can recommend Grammarly for when you're writing the script. Helps a lot, even the free version.