Dangerous Missions Vol.1

[ArchAngelGundam]

Re: Dangerous Missions Vol.1

No problem. The first time is almost always worse then the next attempts. I look forward to what you come up with latter.

 

[plmnko]

Re: Dangerous Missions Vol.1

Yes, just go on, you will pulish your style and learn new things. Im loving this Cyoa so dont worry

 

[xgkf]

Re: Dangerous Missions Vol.1

Aww, I hope you don't end it already. There may have been a couple of hiccups in logic or character behavior, but it's nothing that can't be adjusted or that you can't work around if you wanted to. If you would prefer to simply try and learn from this CYOA and move on with another, fair enough, but I do hope you decide to continue with it.

 

[MrMe]

Re: Dangerous Missions Vol.1

Nah keep going man, its actually interesting to have a protagonist that isn't super woman