That sounds great!Meh, blackmail is way too overused with the same typical submit and do sex unwillingly. Not my taste...
I prefer scenes that are tension inducing like doing those typical quest during Day time. Taking a bath at the fountain or better yet her palm tree where she hides her key is taken away with the key(maintenance) in it while she was doing her quests, but now she has struggling to hide with fear now that she can't return to her apartment.