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Theodosius

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Hello everyone. Yeah, I'm the author of this game and just want a bit of your attention -_- Sorry, my English is bad (not in the game, lol).

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In this game you play for an immoderately lascivious man, who turned his toes one fine day, and instead of finally getting to respond for his deeds… got to be a guardian angel of one sweet young lady…
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Last public version is
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Yes, i have
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And since I'm already here, some my other projects:

My childhood dream clicker: April in trouble (Done)


Just clicker with boobs and some more. Link:
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Fat Saga (Done)


Erm... it's just a small parody of two games at once. I like this one quite a bit, and maybe, in the future, I’ll make an extended version of the game with a more complex story.*
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Witch trainer fan mod:



It's a mod of
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game. The mod does not alter the original storyline, a crossover with an MLA's character was added, storylines not finished in the so-called Russian mod 1.2-1.6 were remade.
All new routes (Phoenix, Daphne, Cho Chang/Harry Potter, school paper) are currently finished and have a logical end. Now this is the only finished mod for this game.
Public release is here:
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I try to do an update of WT fanmod in March -_-
small hint
 

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New "My little angel" public build is aviable
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This game is extremely frustrating in the amount of time you spend waiting for the background processes to finish, plus the artificial time constraints imposed. it's a good idea, but it's not nearly as much fun as it could be if you spent less time judging the deceased, writing reports, reading porno, waiting for her to finish masturbating, etc.

More girls would be helpful too.
 
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Some thoughts:

Things I like about this game:

* The art is nice. Lots of good stuff there.

* I like that Anabel isn't being forced to do anything. I get really tired of games like this where the female protagonist is menaced over and over again.

Things that I don't like about this game:

* I already mentioned the wasted time so I won't go into that. However, your introduction is way too long. Everything with the PC could be eliminated--send him straight to his office and let the player decide if he wants explanations. Each element could be explained by either the angel of devil as they become important. It would get the player into the game much more quickly*

* "Fatty" seems to be a waste of time in the game and could easily be viewed as insulting by your core audience, many of whom he likely resembles. Id' change his name at the very least--something like "Toad" would work as a nickname--and perhaps show him pining over one of the girls.

* Speaking of the girls, why is no one trying to hook up with them? They're both attractive girls, and at least some of the guys are shown to have a little confidence. I would think at least Murano would be getting some attention.

* On that last point, there doesn't seem to be much incentive for Anabel to go down a path towards sluttiness. Sure, she wants a boyfriend, but she's not really competing with anyone or losing alternatives. She does well in school and the boys are ignoring both her and Murano, so what's her reason to ramp up her game? Maybe if Murano was going on lots of dates with the guys in her class or at the very least those guys were flirting with her, she'd have some reason to compete, but as things stand currently, it doesn't make sense.

* Along those lines, Anabel will wear the short skirt and the deep cleavage right from the beginning of the game, so there's little reason for the other options that I'm seeing, other than getting her to go out without underwear. Perhaps there should be more resistance there, at least initially.

* I'm not seeing a point to reducing Anabel's intelligence as her sluttiness goes up. Is there a reason she couldn't be both smart and slutty?

* On the subject of judging the deceased, there need to be far more profiles than currently exist, with more incentive for the player to judge them correctly. Perhaps a demotion or a closer inspection if he sends too many of the wrong people to heaven or hell? They could also be spaced out more so the player can actually focus more on the reason he's playing the game in the first place, which is (presumably) getting to the H content.

I think the game has a lot of potential, but there are a lot of things that could be worked on and reconsidered as well.
 
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Wow, thanks for such a detailed feedback oO To be honest, it's the first time I've heard about a long time waiting... it's renpy engine, you can skip animations/transition through LMB/ctrl
 
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I sort of wished I'd looked at your Patreon page first. I think there are a lot of things I wouldn't have brought up.
 
New public version of "My little angel" (ver. 0.6.2) is available:
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I've run into a handful of bugs:

* I've noticed this mostly when Anabel is sleeping, but if you work for a bit then go to check on her, when you get back to your office time has gone backwards. for instance, I'd work 4 hours till about 6AM, go check on her status (still sleeping), go back to my office to waste more time, and the clock will suddenly read 3;30 or something similar.

* I've completed level 7 of sorting the deceased. I've gone to the Angel's office to see if I can learn new skills, but when you enter the scene, all the dialogue is gone. Something is happening, but I've no idea what.

9 In the park with Jake, I received an actual error, although I didn't save it.

I'm liking some of the changes made, and it's great to see more content. There are some things that would be nice, however:

* when she's "studying" in her room, it would be great to have the option to suggest that she go out and do something else. It gets pretty boring as things currently stand.

* What's up with Murano? Is there going to be a situation where she gets more involved in some way?

* When you "work" in your office, it would be nice if you could work for either an even number of hours or an odd number. It's tricky trying to synchronize things so that you can be at Anabel's side when you want to influence her. It's particularly noticeable at night when she's sleeping, and I want to catch her before she gets dressed.
 
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Wooohoo! Witch trainer Fanmod is finished. You can download public version
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"My little angel" version 0.7.1 now is public!
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0.7.2 on beta test.
 
"My little angel" version 0.7.3(with walkthrough) is public. Link on
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. Next update 0.8.5 will be available in Oct ^_^
 
Wohoo! Beta test of "My little angel" 0.8.5
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!
 
All links seems to be down. Cant download any of the public release builds for "My little angel".
 
Lucifer Ash said:
All links seems to be down. Cant download any of the public release builds for "My little angel".
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Hm... Last build is 0.7.3- try this link
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I have a question about my little angel, what changed on the 8.5 version?
How does i use my powers so she can make new friends, and how to sell her body?
 
My little angel 0.8.6 is public now!
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