Re: A New Titan Story - Titan Simulator
Seems alright so far. The art when you go into Raven's room is a bit off though. Mostly her breasts.
Conceptually the fighting is a neat enough system. 2 ways to attack the opponent and all, but the current fights didn't elaborate on that at all. Considering they both give tutorials on how to fight, I think one of the fights you should make focused on fighting health, and the other energy. Also the attacks are going to need number tweeking to make them better in certain situations. In both of Raven's fights I just used her strong attack. There was no incentive to try anything else.
Starfire had an odd thing where her "small starbolt" did more damage and cost less than her "determined starbolt" so I was a bit confused about that as well.
Yeah I have been debating with myself if I should completely redraw that piece of art.
I was originally going to focus on the health/energy thing but I ended up making it so it was possible to either way in terms of the Raven fights. Only using strong attacks doesn't work for anything I have tested. The determined starbolt should do less than small starbolt (well at this point in the game).
is there screenshots? original art? pixel art?
Original art. Maybe that will change in the future.
Do you have any previous projects? If not, have you ever worked on any H-games prior to this one?
EDIT: Alright, just played through a bit of it. The backgrounds look a bit meh for now and the art can be weird at points (EX: Raven's breasts). I wasn't expecting there to be animation but what there is at the current moment is pretty good actually. The fighting system has the potential to be extremely neat but for now it's just a proof of concept that needs to be worked on. The dialogue for Starfire is pretty spot on but Raven's needs a bit of work but that's probably just me.Speaking of dialogue, I severely hope you can pull off the timer thing (if you decide to continue with it) so it's not either frustrating to deal with or have it be so slow it doesn't even matter at all. Some nitpicking here but I figured the choices from the intro would have an impact on relationship with Raven and Starfire; and exactly why can you buy food and clothing from a video store?
On a more positive note I'm extremely excited for a Teen Titan story regarding Raven and Starfire. Also what other girls are you planning on adding in the foreseeable future?
I have worked on some previous game development but not H games before.
Raven's dialogue for the 2003 version does vary in spots. Yeah I may go and retime things (or maybe I'll change how the system works). The early choices in game do change minor things but I don't think most people will notice unless I point that out. There is food in certain video stores. In terms of clothing I've seen it before but it is unusual for sure.
I would like to get girls like Jinx in the game. I am a little hesitant of saying say I want Bumblebee, Argent etc simply because I have no idea how long it'll take me to get to the point where they would be in game but ideally I want to include them too.