Re: INCEST STORY - FREE VERSION AVAILABLE 0.2 (ENGLISH)
Leave the beach and find the fat guy in a suit who suddenly appeared near one of the houses.
The game is mostly backtracking and fetch quests transparently for padding after a certain point. The one where you try to take a third and fourth picture with your camera, and oops the batteries are dead, run home quick to pull some out of a drawer was pretty bad. I don't think you can just search the house and find the batteries until those events take place. If so, it can't even be sidestepped on subsequent runs. Forcing that progression doesn't add anything but time by making you have to walk through one of the few random-encounter zones twice more, and back through town, hoping the batteries are where you think they are.
I think that's the kind of thing you should only put in if it leads to unexpected places. And I don't mean some random house in town, or a store that wasn't used before, or the boot of one of the cars in the dealership. I mean the game takes a detour through a hell dimension where you fill the roll of Ash in Evil Dead, unexpected. And the reward at the end is a bunch of new porn and batteries.
The way it's done, he really ought to comment on the batteries getting low, giving you the option to pay attention, and preempt the problem. Then the penalty for not taking heed is having to backtrack, and maybe even missing a CG.
Oh, and speaking of the beach, it might be worth altering the changing station so that it can only be accessed from one side, or change which tiles trigger the "I need to change out of my swimsuit" message. You can activate it from the grassy side, and then he won't move again until you change back and go around the other side.