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Re: JSK工房 Hgames Thread
Pretty damned solid translation as far as I can tell - as expected of Ritsu.
As far as awkward-sounding phrases go, I'd say this is probably better than the Vampire Hunter one, even.
Granted, I most certainly can't say I actually understand the whole "Blank test" thing in the skippable setup, so that could use some clarification.
Anyway, as to slightly odd phrases and errors:
Appears in multiple places
Odd phrases
Anytime you have "Letting out such voice" or "letting out such voices" or anything like that, you'd want to put "making noises like that" or something.
During the conversation segment of the game
Odd phrases
I don't know exactly what that's saying, but from the CONTEXT it sounds like she's saying that she's careful not to expose herself or something.
"I take care not to allow that, so it's all right"?
Or maybe
I'm careful not to allow that, so it's all right"?
I don't know.
The above is obtained by looking at her skirt.
Untranslated Dialogue
After "Do you like my legs that much?" The teacher has untranslated dialogue in his text box.
The above is obtained by investigating the story, basically, and looking at her legs as well.
Non-Ending Scenes
Untranslated Dialogue
In the "put it in yourself" scene, the girl has some untranslated text.
The above shows up after "Hyaa, please don't cum inside me anymore".
Lewd Ending
Could probably stand to be
Does this turn you on that much, sensei?
Or something like that. Dunno exactly what she's saying, but just "so much" out of nowhere doesn't seem like ordinary English construction.
The above is obtained by choosing "very fast" and letting the text scroll, in the Lewd ending.
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The above is obtained by hitting "very fast" and then "cum" immediately afterwards, for the first time in the Lewd Ending.
As to the game itself:
Lewd ending's my favourite by an infinitely long shot, unsurprisingly.
Incidentally, for the Lewd ending in Shion, all I found to be necessary was to max her submission bar and then make her cum 3 or more times before you ordered a sex scene.
Doesn't even matter if she really enjoyed the scene or not, her dialogue from the "stop" option will say that she did, and you get your ending.
I have no idea what effect the dialogue choices during the first part of the game have on endings, but if you just
1) command her clothes off to begin with,
2) always choose all top dialogue options, and
3)use the "look" button to actually get the submission bar up in between dialogues,
things work out.
Pretty damned solid translation as far as I can tell - as expected of Ritsu.
As far as awkward-sounding phrases go, I'd say this is probably better than the Vampire Hunter one, even.
Granted, I most certainly can't say I actually understand the whole "Blank test" thing in the skippable setup, so that could use some clarification.
Anyway, as to slightly odd phrases and errors:
Appears in multiple places
Odd phrases
Anytime you have "Letting out such voice" or "letting out such voices" or anything like that, you'd want to put "making noises like that" or something.
During the conversation segment of the game
Odd phrases
I don't know exactly what that's saying, but from the CONTEXT it sounds like she's saying that she's careful not to expose herself or something.
"I take care not to allow that, so it's all right"?
Or maybe
I'm careful not to allow that, so it's all right"?
I don't know.
The above is obtained by looking at her skirt.
Untranslated Dialogue
After "Do you like my legs that much?" The teacher has untranslated dialogue in his text box.
The above is obtained by investigating the story, basically, and looking at her legs as well.
Non-Ending Scenes
Untranslated Dialogue
In the "put it in yourself" scene, the girl has some untranslated text.
The above shows up after "Hyaa, please don't cum inside me anymore".
Lewd Ending
Could probably stand to be
Does this turn you on that much, sensei?
Or something like that. Dunno exactly what she's saying, but just "so much" out of nowhere doesn't seem like ordinary English construction.
The above is obtained by choosing "very fast" and letting the text scroll, in the Lewd ending.
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The above is obtained by hitting "very fast" and then "cum" immediately afterwards, for the first time in the Lewd Ending.
As to the game itself:
Lewd ending's my favourite by an infinitely long shot, unsurprisingly.
Incidentally, for the Lewd ending in Shion, all I found to be necessary was to max her submission bar and then make her cum 3 or more times before you ordered a sex scene.
Doesn't even matter if she really enjoyed the scene or not, her dialogue from the "stop" option will say that she did, and you get your ending.
I have no idea what effect the dialogue choices during the first part of the game have on endings, but if you just
1) command her clothes off to begin with,
2) always choose all top dialogue options, and
3)use the "look" button to actually get the submission bar up in between dialogues,
things work out.
dienow
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Re: JSK工房 Hgames Thread
I corrected as much as I could with what I had, as far as English goes. As I said, it needs another pass through. I'll ask Ritsu to pass me the files and I'll give it another run through it, but it'll have to wait till Monday. I have things I'm doing this weekend.
I corrected as much as I could with what I had, as far as English goes. As I said, it needs another pass through. I'll ask Ritsu to pass me the files and I'll give it another run through it, but it'll have to wait till Monday. I have things I'm doing this weekend.
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Re: JSK工房 Hgames Thread
Just finished getting two of the endings on Shion, gonna shoot for the other two tomorrow. Had to look up the love ending
. Ah well. Got the ending three as listed by Shuichi while trying for it freehanded.
Two thumbs WAY way up, Ritsu and company. d(-.-)b
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Just finished getting two of the endings on Shion, gonna shoot for the other two tomorrow. Had to look up the love ending
. Ah well. Got the ending three as listed by Shuichi while trying for it freehanded.Two thumbs WAY way up, Ritsu and company. d(-.-)b
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Re: JSK工房 Hgames Thread
When I translated it, it actually made even less sense to me than it does now. I did my best to make something decent out of it, but it wasn't easy.
When I translated it, it actually made even less sense to me than it does now. I did my best to make something decent out of it, but it wasn't easy.
Re: JSK工房 Hgames Thread
Oh this is awesome. Thanks Ritsu!
I'm going to update the guide now. Thanks for posting the credits, I will update that as well.
As for the blank test, it sounds like our Scranton sheets that we use here. You know in school, they give you the test and you have to fill out your answers on a separate sheet of paper?
Oh this is awesome. Thanks Ritsu!
I'm going to update the guide now. Thanks for posting the credits, I will update that as well.
As for the blank test, it sounds like our Scranton sheets that we use here. You know in school, they give you the test and you have to fill out your answers on a separate sheet of paper?
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Re: JSK工房 Hgames Thread
Oh yeah i forgot to mention to you that you forgot a with in the Vampire Section and ending 3 in Shion IS IN NO WAY A GOOD TAPE ENDING.
Oh yeah i forgot to mention to you that you forgot a with in the Vampire Section and ending 3 in Shion IS IN NO WAY A GOOD TAPE ENDING.
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Re: JSK工房 Hgames Thread
Good if you like Yandere I guess... *shudder*
Fortunately, the lewd ending seems to supersede all the others except the love endings.
So like ... max her submission, make her cum three times, and you're home free as long as you avoid her leaving and avoid her confession.
I gotta admit though, I actually laughed pretty hard when I got that videotape ending.
Like "GG teacherguy ... GG. You done. You done. You better go the whole way and chain her up if she lets you go, otherwise she'll catch your eye on some other chick and you're ACTUALLY done."
Good if you like Yandere I guess... *shudder*
Fortunately, the lewd ending seems to supersede all the others except the love endings.
So like ... max her submission, make her cum three times, and you're home free as long as you avoid her leaving and avoid her confession.
I gotta admit though, I actually laughed pretty hard when I got that videotape ending.
Like "GG teacherguy ... GG. You done. You done. You better go the whole way and chain her up if she lets you go, otherwise she'll catch your eye on some other chick and you're ACTUALLY done."
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Re: JSK工房 Hgames Thread
Hmm... Something unexpected came up... Archer Girl may... take a while longer.
Hmm... Something unexpected came up... Archer Girl may... take a while longer.
Re: JSK工房 Hgames Thread
Hi guys！I m new to this forum.I would like to thanks for everyone that help translate the game.The translation r awesome！Btw，I am a Chinese n I would like to help u guys. Although I can't help in translation but I can tell u guys the some word in the game since japanese n chinese is a little similar. p.s I am a Chinese but I am from Malaysia but I don't think u guys will noe since my country is not so famous.
Hi guys！I m new to this forum.I would like to thanks for everyone that help translate the game.The translation r awesome！Btw，I am a Chinese n I would like to help u guys. Although I can't help in translation but I can tell u guys the some word in the game since japanese n chinese is a little similar. p.s I am a Chinese but I am from Malaysia but I don't think u guys will noe since my country is not so famous.
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Re: JSK工房 Hgames Thread
Anyone know how to get the yandere ending for Shion? It's not like Imoutoto where you simply reject her when she confesses, is it? None of the options allow you to reject her.
Anyone know how to get the yandere ending for Shion? It's not like Imoutoto where you simply reject her when she confesses, is it? None of the options allow you to reject her.
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Re: JSK工房 Hgames Thread
You'll want to check out posts #138-146 on page 5 (or just scroll up on this page to #902). It's really easy to mess up the conditions for that ending.
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Re: JSK工房 Hgames Thread
Keep telling her it's for punishment, ask about her parents and say she has to live up to their expectations, in other words never make it about her real reason for what she did. Then do her.
Keep telling her it's for punishment, ask about her parents and say she has to live up to their expectations, in other words never make it about her real reason for what she did. Then do her.