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Re: Meet and Fuck Games Community
YEAH VICTORY AT LAST
YEAH VICTORY AT LAST
This is my review of it.Has anyone pointed out that Geek Girl Gwen 2 is out?
Guess.Kel what you going to submit this time?
YEAH VICTORY AT LAST![]()
YEAH VICTORY AT LAST![]()
No rawart, no sub. Simple as that.
I re-read swf3 script and everything it's fine for me, except that there no Diamond MilfBut before I submit SWF 3 again, I want to know if anyone has anything to say about what they think might make it a little better.
I've put the script in a word document and anyone can comment in it.
You must be registered to see the links
Now, this time could I PLEASE actually get some feedback? And not just from one or two people.
Added Witch Hunter to the list
Red Riding Hood and Gloomy Forest
Robin and Witches
Once At A Party
World of Big Woman
Escape From The Tribe Of Amazons
The Mad Professor
Adventures On The Wild Planet
Three Tales
Witch Hunter
Any Chance to get a crack of these games?![]()
Because I couldn't think of where to fit her in.I re-read swf3 script and everything it's fine for me, except that there no Diamond Milf
Why no Diamond Milf?
Well, then let it like it is for now.Because I couldn't think of where to fit her in.
If I were to try, I'd have to get rid of either the first or second scene.
Leila Bomb won!
Next round for Kosmos just started
And what about Meetie? Is he planning to submit Godmilf sequel?
Me or Haseo can submit itWell, if someone would submit it for me, as I pause until the end of my semester in two months^^
At least a submission round and not nothing
Yeah, maybe. It's not really needed for the main story plot. What if I change it to Locust coming to see Justin as he's working, tries to get Justin to tell him what he's working on, but Justin says he can't because it's top secret, Locust then gets called away and after he leaves Blizzard Babe and Pyro Vixen come in to get him to settle their argument?-whoo some deep shit with Justin's Dad. While I certainly have nothing against depth in stories, I must wonder if that's not a little bit to MUCH depth they're here to fap, not to feel^^ A little less depressive Justin would be nice...I think^^
Whilst I understand your logic, there's one thing that evidently doesn't come across as well as I'd hoped. Night Whisper isn't a villain, she's an anti-hero, kinda like the Punisher.-hm well if Locust and Star Bimbo have actually beaten Night Whispers Goons and let Minx hunting down Whisper the story would be more coherent^^ and not just something here, something there
But Shadow Minx is an anti-hero tooWhilst I understand your logic, there's one thing that evidently doesn't come across as well as I'd hoped. Night Whisper isn't a villain, she's an anti-hero, kinda like the Punisher.
Look at it this way, if Sanctum Tower is a police station, then Shadow Minx is a cop and Night Whisper is a bounty hunter. They both do the same job, but Night Whisper doesn't have to follow a strict set of rules.
Ok that is true. But you know what I mean.But Shadow Minx is an anti-hero too![]()
But before I submit SWF 3 again, I want to know if anyone has anything to say about what they think might make it a little better.
I've put the script in a word document and anyone can comment in it.
You must be registered to see the links
Now, this time could I PLEASE actually get some feedback? And not just from one or two people.
Aside from a few grammar fixes, nothing.Kel, I read your story again, what exactly is different from the last time you submitted it?