VN/TEXT My master, the Parasite

[AHHHHHH And Agony]

My master, the Parasite is my first game, made using Twine.

The plot follows Rebbeca, a college student, off school for summer holidays. When you see a meteor crash into a nearby forest, you become entwined in an alien creature's plot to take over Earth for it's species.

So far no path has been finished, each with rather abrupt ends. I am working on adding more content however.

Fetishes include: Parasite (Obviously!)
Submission
Domination
Funtari
Legal loli
Some vore content (Skip able)
I originally released this with a loli character, but she has been changed to legal loli due to various reasons.

With this being my first game, I'd appreciate some feedback on what I can do to improve.

Mega: mega.nz/#!BBUQFQIB!yFlnCNkKT9ZbrzYTG5aqJdE82uW6Sb1UkupVSUd0AyU

Tfgamessite: tfgamessite.com/?module=viewgame&id=1000

 

[lordcruxis]

Re: My master, the Parasite

Out of curiosity, are you planning on letting Rebecca Dom without futa?

Is this going to remain text only or will pictures be added at some point?

Legal loli; that term cracks me up, but you honestly might just be better off calling her petite unless you legitimately mean she's like a 12 year old in stature.

More opinions to come later.

 

[jadex]

Re: My master, the Parasite

Well the one path I went down wasn't finished, but it was interesting so far.

How much content do you intend on making? It would be nice to see this expand into a longer game.

 

[AHHHHHH And Agony]

Re: My master, the Parasite

Out of curiosity, are you planning on letting Rebecca Dom without futa?

Is this going to remain text only or will pictures be added at some point?

Legal loli; that term cracks me up, but you honestly might just be better off calling her petite unless you legitimately mean she's like a 12 year old in stature.

More opinions to come later.

Rebecca will be able to dom without futa, but only in a couple of paths, as an extremely dominant Rebecca will be more inclined to become futa than anyone else.

I have zero art skills, so my options are either to keep it text only or have pictures taken from the internet. I'm probably going to stick with text only.

And finally, yes. Abbie literally looks and acts like a twelve year old. The only reason she isn't is because of various things like the laws on the subject and advice I've received to alter her age slightly due to the general consensus of loli content on tfgamessite.

 

[AHHHHHH And Agony]

Re: My master, the Parasite

Well the one path I went down wasn't finished, but it was interesting so far.

How much content do you intend on making? It would be nice to see this expand into a longer game.

What's in the game currently is around 10% of what I'm aiming for with the final product. The one thing I won't do however, is abandon this game entirely. The biggest thing that bugs me in games like these are when they are left half-finished.

I realize this may seem kind of ignorant of me, definitely as I haven't hit writers block yet but I expect it soon, but even if I can't continue with the game, I'll arrange for someone else to take over the project, but only as a last resort.

 

[MidnightXV]

Re: My master, the Parasite

mega link doesnt work

 

[AHHHHHH And Agony]

Re: My master, the Parasite

mega link doesnt work

Thanks, fixed it now

 

[lordcruxis]

Re: My master, the Parasite

I feel that atm there is to little content to fairly judge it yet. I feel it has potential, and will keep my eye on it for now though.

 

[AHHHHHH And Agony]

Re: My master, the Parasite

Updated to v.2.

Adds to the "Apocalypse route", a couple of endings added and small fixes.

 

[lordcruxis]

Re: My master, the Parasite

After the vet calls you back in there are several lines that are show up wrong

color:green;"Um, I don't-"
color:coral;"Rebecca, I am it's host. And you will be it's first victim."
Ok what the fuck is happening?
color:green;"Um, what? No, NO."
The reality of the situation sets in. If she's telling the truth, you're in serious danger.
color:coral;"But it feels so good Rebecca... Surely you want to submit? I promise I'll make you feel good..."
What? You need to get out of here!
color:pink;But... Her offer sure is tempting... Don't you want to feel ultimate pleasure?

Choosing to be the host leads to a page that says "double-click to edit this passage"


Love Abbi, let me have more Abbi

 

[AHHHHHH And Agony]

Re: My master, the Parasite

After the vet calls you back in there are several lines that are show up wrong

color:green;"Um, I don't-"
color:coral;"Rebecca, I am it's host. And you will be it's first victim."
Ok what the fuck is happening?
color:green;"Um, what? No, NO."
The reality of the situation sets in. If she's telling the truth, you're in serious danger.
color:coral;"But it feels so good Rebecca... Surely you want to submit? I promise I'll make you feel good..."
What? You need to get out of here!
color:pink;But... Her offer sure is tempting... Don't you want to feel ultimate pleasure?

Choosing to be the host leads to a page that says "double-click to edit this passage"


Love Abbi, let me have more Abbi

Thanks, fixed it now.

And don't worry, Abbie is important in the two paths I'm working on now.

 

[Buffmuffin]

Re: My master, the Parasite

This has great potential...

Would *love* to see animated version.

 

[nigger23]

Re: My master, the Parasite

wtf is "legal loli"

 

[Demontom]

Re: My master, the Parasite

A person who's of legal age, but looks and acts like a child.

 

[Haxor101]

Re: My master, the Parasite

Nice work so far, looking forward to future updates

 

[nigger23]

Re: My master, the Parasite

A person who's of legal age, but looks and acts like a child.

lmao

 

[upshaker]

Re: My master, the Parasite

Very interesting game. Looking forward to future updates as well!