Re: Rinet's Quest (take a look!) [eng]
I believe the game (If everything goes well) will take an year and a half at least.
If you meant "party members", I believe it will be about... 15 maybe.
I say it will not be really good on fetiches, aside from standard sex, blowjob and a little anal...
No mind break, No slave making(I don't know if there will be another king or if they will be abused, we shall see) No guro...
If someone can link me some tags site I can establish it better.
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Well, AoT didn't inspire in the least and I am not a native : P ( I am from Brazil, actually)
I believe I can get better on the animations (and perhaps horrible is a strong word) but if I get backing and people don't think then necessary, I can drop them and focus on CGs only perhaps.
(ALso, if people don't think the animations are important I really want to know because it takes me time to make them.)
PS: I think the webm format fuck's the videos... Or perhaps I do... I don't know. : P
Thanks for the "Bug cathing", will be fixed in the next release.
Aise from that, thank you for the feedback!
Dude you really need to hire some native English speaker.
Your English is not on a level where you could do this by yourself and create a high quality product. You claim the Sex in this H game will be story driven which means that if can't spell "Bug CATCHING" and write the word access with 1 c, chances are this game will be ruined since nothing annoys people more than the feeling that a 10 year old wrote some erotic literature.
Not only does this pontentially ruin the game it will also make your Patreon look stupid.
Adressing your Patreon... this is your welcome message to all visitors:
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When I was in high school I had the RPGMAKER2k but I never actually “concluded” any game that I tried to develop. Years passed and I concluded my university (Game designer) and It tried to do some games with friends but... None actually succeeded. That's when I discovered the huge community of HRPG and some great games, and since I always liked pornography and games, I thought “why not?” Well, it doesn't sound very trustworthy I guess... I made a lot of games in university, but I never actually "gained" money doing it. But I wanted to tell you all, I am 100% sure that I can create a very nice game (check the video and stuff) and I would like to ask the cooperation of everybody who has an interest. Thank you!
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This translates to me:
Hi I used RPGMAKER2K by chance but never bothered to finish anything and just played around with it.
I finished university and messed around with some friends but none of the projects succeeded. (I take it you talk about money here)
That's when I discovered many successful Patreons who create HRPG's (Well look at some Projects who get more than 3k dollars per month and some giants like Akabur who are quite rich now)
YOU EVEN ADMIT THAT YOU SOUND LIKE A MONEY GRUBBING OPPORTUNIST. (which you probably are)
Even here on ULMF you begin your post by writing:
"I really hope I can count on your support and if you want to give me some money, please pledge! : P
Even so, the game will be "free", the first version is online in the patreon page and I will monthly upgrade it, so if you really can't/won't help, you can still play."
I really appreciate the fact that you are willing to release everything for free. That dispells some of the doubts I KNOW people have.
But still "give me some money"
It's not you that people want to fund it's your game.
You need some kind of production goal / plan and explain HOW their money can help fun the game! "give me money plz" is not an argument and not a good way to raise funds to create a game.
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YOU are new to this genre and the first step is to play&play&play&play and see what people like and where you talents could be used to create an interesting game.
It will also broaden your mind because if you state things like:
"I say it will not be really good on fetiches, aside from standard sex, blowjob and a little anal...
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it makes your game not only look retarded but also extremely boring.
I personally feel like you have no imagination and no touch for erotic writing in general.
Many games only feature vanilla sex scenes.... The writing and the art is what makes many of those games still great and loved by even hardcore HRPG fans.
I also played your game and have to say that it's really really boring.
The combat and the art are not really bad but they are the most generic things I have ever seen.
Your art is not bad! But even through the filter on your Patreon video i noticed that it's not on a professional level and won't attract many people.
So why exactly would people want to play your game?
PRO (playing)
- ??? Maybe the story Idea about the warrior Monks of the Order of Rinehart. That's a overused but still good idea with a lot of pontential.
- It's free
PRO (supporting you on Patreon)
- NO REASON aside from some overpriced totally unrealistic rewards which aren't even good. I personally wouldn't even pay 10 bucks for your 200USD tier.
CONS (playing)
- generic amateurish art
- generic combat & story
- generic Hscenes
- bad writing
- bad English (not that mine is better in any form but I am not creating games)
- nothing to make your game stand out from the masses
- nothing remotely fascinating or special about it.
CONS (supporting you on Patreon)
- you never finished anything
- you have nothing you previously created to show >>> NO TRUST IN YOU
- you are new to this genre and have no or limited experience/knowledge about it because:
- you are obviously in for the money as you yourself nearly admitted.
- your English and writing on Patreon makes it seem like an Idea you thought of last night while drinking
- unprofessional on all levels
This is in no way a post to bash you but to open your eyes.
My advice:
- Look for a partner who wants to start creating games too and ask him to take on the WHOLE WRITING and your Patreon account.
THIS IS ESSENTIAL.
Of course you can still determine the story and the contents... I'm only talking about the writing.
- Improve your art and make it stand out more. It has no special flair/trait and seems okay but generic....
- Change your Story or improve it. You need something which is not present in 99% of RPG games..... Especially if your art, writing and gameplay is subpar the story is the one thing which can still turn it into a great game. On the other hand if it's generic shit it will make the whole thing even worse.
- Think of something to boost the gameplay and combat. For example: make some special combat menu for Order of Rinehart which requires the player to think outside the box. Or anything else .... IT'S BORING like that. REALLY boring.
- Offer some realistic Patreon rewards (Monthly skype sessions to talk about the game or whatever) Maybe release the upcoming versions of the game a few days before you release it for free? (that would also work as beta testing which is a +)
- Try to look more trustworthy & professional and change your Patreon messages.
Anyway it's only the start! I think you can create a good game if you don't give up and improve some of the points i mentioned.... Anyway welcome and good luck. Keep us updated.
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Downvoting me with insults is not helpful to Stalker! If you think my advice is trash give him some better advice and disprove my arguments.