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Re: Sarah's Life - [v0.2 Public release 09/05]

thx Impure for the free public .2 release. i love your game.

keep it up and make this the ultimate NTR! :D
i hope you will include choices, so she can take different paths.

You're welcome and thanks! In v0.3 I did a scene where Sarah can choose whether to help someone or not (this will lead into different paths further down the story).
 
Re: Sarah's Life - [v0.2 Public release 09/05]

I've just finished to play this game. TELL ME PLEASE the secret why people support this game.

- map design - awful. 0 efforts. Author even doesn't bother to use other tilesets. Elf sprites, Sara with cloak? So terrible.

- game play - 10 min or even less. So what is the point of this game?
- amount of pictures - 20 or even fewer. Seriously?

When people support so shitty product like this, other product with much better graphic and story remain unsupported.

So blackmailing element alone can bring so many patrons.

I am sorry for being so negative. But I can't find other words to describe it.
 
Re: Sarah's Life - [v0.2 Public release 09/05]

I've just finished to play this game. TELL ME PLEASE the secret why people support this game.

- map design - awful. 0 efforts. Author even doesn't bother to use other tilesets. Elf sprites, Sara with cloak? So terrible.

- game play - 10 min or even less. So what is the point of this game?
- amount of pictures - 20 or even fewer. Seriously?

When people support so shitty product like this, other product with much better graphic and story remain unsupported.

So blackmailing element alone can bring so many patrons.

I am sorry for being so negative. But I can't find other words to describe it.

This guy... So when is your game coming out then, I'd love to see it. How many people are happy to support what you're doing... Oh Wait.
You're just a Cunt. If people who " are better " aren't getting supported then they're obviously not as good as you're making out. Also don't finish it up with "sorry" after shitting all over someone's hard work.
 
Re: Sarah's Life - [v0.2 Public release 09/05]

Well honestly I like this new version.

Cannot wait to see more. If the updates keeps getting better like this most likely starting from June I may became a patron just to support you.
 
Re: Sarah's Life - [v0.2 Public release 09/05]

- map design - awful. 0 efforts. Author even doesn't bother to use other tilesets. Elf sprites, Sara with cloak? So terrible.

- game play - 10 min or even less. So what is the point of this game?
- amount of pictures - 20 or even fewer. Seriously?

When people support so shitty product like this, other product with much better graphic and story remain unsupported.

I am sorry for being so negative. But I can't find other words to describe it.

The elf figure is a pretty easy one to change, and without sprite elements it really isn't the focus of the game. Even so, that's an easy thing to edit in at a later point if that's something he wants to do. He could literally switch out the model for anything and it wouldn't make a difference. Terrible seems a stretch here.

I agree that the elements of game play are rather limited, it's similar to "Incest Story" in that the game generally takes place along a rail where you are led from event to event. That said, Incest Story also has a large following, if you're wondering where patrons come from.

20 pictures for a version 0.2 isn't that unusual, how many should you expect for a demo? The point is to give you a taste of the art. And you could potentially claim that the art isn't to your personal tastes or something, but it would be quite incorrect to say that it is simply bad art.

What other products are you referring to? Or are you just comparing this game to "something better"? Because that's a completely useless statement as is.

Finally, you say you're sorry for being so negative, but that's a load of crap. You aren't suggesting improvements, alternatives or advice to build on, just saying how you think anyone who supports the author is an idiot.

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Anyway, for everyone else, I've been doing editing for Impure on the grammar/sentences/spelling, so if you notice anything I've missed currently in the demo, let me know!
 
Re: Sarah's Life - [v0.2 Public release 09/05]

Played that first demo a few months back and now 0.2 and there's literally 20 min of added content. And I say content, not gameplay, because there is no gameplay here. This is nowhere close to an RPG, it's not even a VN, since there are not even choices here.
Nothing has improved since the demo. Same stock, completely out of place, character models. Plain maps, with no interaction in them at all. The 3D renders of the main character are decent, everything else is of much lower quality.
One can only envy you for your dedicated patrons, mate. Keep it going.
 
Re: Sarah's Life - [v0.2 Public release 09/05]

Game could be good but man, that's just too fast... Hobo event is just silly. 2 guys in 1 day? Does she ever says "no"? I wouldn't be surprised is her first "no" is to her husband Lol I would slow down the game, a lot. Hobo event can have a choice like "Scream rape" or "Show him". It shouldn't be first day at all, they can watch her first day and she can feel embarrassed because of the look in their eyes or something. Doesn't need to change jogging outfit for days, corruption should go slowly over time with various events where shes embarrassed or groped or whatever. Showing breasts first day kinda ruins it all, then 2 guys for 1 day did the same thing... Old guy can have changes too, like she saw him masturbating and then you put choice like "Stay and watch" or "Leave", also not first or second day, should be when she reaches certain corruption lvl... Peoples need to have choices or that isn't a game, it's a story you watch and just run over the maps when needed, click to see new text/pic's and that's all. I noticed you said in v0.3 you made first choice, she can chose something. That's really late and should be there from day one. Key' did same thing, made his game too fast, then he changed whole game and started from scratch. It's much better now, you can compare v.'s. This should be improved a lot, i saw some ideas, they are pretty good but everything is just too fast and shes acting like a whore from day 1... This is only my opinion, don't start trowing things at me right now. I really want your game to be better, maybe great/best game one day, there are no other reasons for writing this.
 
Re: Sarah's Life - [v0.2 Public release 09/05]

Hobo event can have a choice like "Scream rape" or "Show him". It shouldn't be first day at all, they can watch her first day and she can feel embarrassed because of the look in their eyes or something. Doesn't need to change jogging outfit for days, corruption should go slowly over time with various events where shes embarrassed or groped or whatever. Old guy can have changes too, like she saw him masturbating and then you put choice like "Stay and watch" or "Leave", also not first or second day, should be when she reaches certain corruption lvl...

i agree with these points but also, the kid with the book could have been done different. you could have a choice here to keep reading or give the book back by having her react in shock and couple days since the kid is so hung up on her opinion, he can come back and try again. the meeting with the boss was odd, he didnt know who he was going to choose as his assistant but he already picked out a dress for sarah. he could have called her in his office the next day to say he picked out a dress for her.
 
Re: Sarah's Life - [v0.2 Public release 09/05]

The meeting with the boss was odd, he didnt know who he was going to choose as his assistant but he already picked out a dress for sarah. he could have called her in his office the next day to say he picked out a dress for her.

Call me paranoid, but I have a feeling the boss had already chosen who he wanted as his assistant.
 
Re: Sarah's Life - [v0.2 Public release 09/05]

Call me paranoid, but I have a feeling the boss had already chosen who he wanted as his assistant.

well, he says after meeting with her and likes her cause she doesnt question his rules, then he says ive made my decision. maybe i read that wrong "shrugs".
 
Re: Sarah's Life - [v0.2 Public release 09/05]

Played that first demo a few months back and now 0.2 and there's literally 20 min of added content. And I say content, not gameplay, because there is no gameplay here. This is nowhere close to an RPG, it's not even a VN, since there are not even choices here.
Nothing has improved since the demo. Same stock, completely out of place, character models. Plain maps, with no interaction in them at all. The 3D renders of the main character are decent, everything else is of much lower quality.
One can only envy you for your dedicated patrons, mate. Keep it going.

I was interested in the game from the start because I liked the look of the main character. Playing the demo I completely lost interest. The reason these games are supposed to be fun is customization and choices. Sarah's life has neither of these. Feels more like a visual novel and not a game. There needs to be ways for Sarah to avoid the sexual situations or else it's not even fun to play. With the ability for the player to make choices; answers to NPCs or choose what outfits to wear gives the game much more replay value also.
 
Re: Sarah's Life - [v0.2 Public release 09/05]

Take all the criticism as a positive Impure,

it means your game has gathered enough interest and fans that they feel the need to help you and put their ideas across to you because they want too see the game do well.

Although of course some people are just going to be complete asses about it but the majority of people just want to see the game succeed.
 
Re: Sarah's Life - [v0.2 Public release 09/05]

i agree with the negative criticism if the demo was the "first part" of a complete product. but its not.

i try to see the demo as a showcase of what the game will offer.
after each release i expect more content but also more of a game, with more options and routes to take.

that is the whole reason we have patreon. to be part of the journey of the making of a game.

so, yes, Impure need to improve the game, but that doesnt mean its bad or that we can not support the game. right now its in its early stage and it need work. i would not put it in the garbage can yet, it have potential and Sarah is hot! :D
 
Re: Sarah's Life - [v0.2 Public release 09/05]

and Sarah is hot! :D

This, keep the good work coming because this man speaks the truth!
I didn't mind the demo, I enjoyed it.
 
Re: Sarah's Life - [v0.2 Public release 09/05]

So hows everything going with this?
All goes well i hope.
 
Re: Sarah's Life - [v0.2 Public release 09/05]

So hows everything going with this?
All goes well i hope.

Thing are going great, the latest version v0.3 has been well received by my Patrons, and now I'm working on the next release v0.4.

Lately I've been very busy, and kinda forgot to visit this forum. I did however read all the comments, and I am very thankful for all the feedback. This will help me greatly to keep on improving the game with each release.
 
Re: Sarah's Life - [v0.2 Public release 09/05]

When do you think the next public demo will be released?
 
Re: Sarah's Life - [v0.2 Public release 09/05]

When do you think the next public demo will be released?

I don't want to promise anything, but probably around end of June/ beginning of July.
 
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Re: Sarah's Life - [v0.2 Public release 09/05]

I don't want to promise anything, but probably around end of June/ beginning of July.

That's okay, gives me something to look forward too :) Keep up the good work :)
 
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