RPG Maker Sarah's Life v0.6 - [*NEW UPDATE* 30-8]

[Impure]

Update 30-08: Sarah's Life v0.6 - Patron release .

Update 21-07: Sarah's Life v0.5 - Patron release .

Update 03-07: Sarah's Life v0.3 - Public release . (Download link on my Patreon page)

Update 18-06: Sarah's Life v0.4 - Patron release

Update 09-05: Sarah's Life v0.2 - Public release . (Download link on my Patreon page)

Update 08-05: Sarah's Life v0.3 - Patron release.

Update 24-02: Sarah's Life v0.1 - Public release. (Download link on my Patreon page)

Update 15-02: Sarah's Life v0.1 - Patron release.



I would like to present to you my first game. It's called 'Sarah's Life'!

This game is about Sarah, a married woman that loves her husband very much. In the weekdays she works as a secretary at a company and in the weekends the couple likes to spend time with each other. But lately Steve (her husband) was swamped with his work and had to do overtime working at home in the weekends. And this mean for Sarah that she had some free time for her self to do the things she always wanted. Such as jogging.

And this is where the story of Sarah's Life begins.

Here are some screenshots from the game:

I don't want to spoil too much, so go ahead and play the demo!

Link to demo:

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This game will be about NTR (Netorare). This genre is not everyone's cup of tea, so i understand if you don't like it. This game will always be free. But if you like to support me during the process of developing this game i would appreciate that very much.

If you like to read more about this game you check out my Patreon page:

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Because this is my first game, I would appreciate any kind of feedback (positive or negative). I will try to fix/implement it in the next release.

If you have any questions feel free to ask.

 

[Severin]

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My only question right now:

Is it netorare where the husband finds out and has his face rubbed in it, or is it where he is blissfully ignorant or meh about it?

 

[Impure]

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My only question right now:

Is it netorare where the husband finds out and has his face rubbed in it, or is it where he is blissfully ignorant or meh about it?

The second one. I don't like the first kind, where the husband is okay with it.
So it will be behind the husbands back.

 

[torkenstiem]

Re: Sarah's Life - English H-Game [Demo]

short but sweet and the girl is gorgeous, i like the fact that the hubby dont like other guys even lookin at his wife...this sounds like it can get interestin fast

 

[hrpgheaven]

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EDIT: nope.

 

[Chartog]

Re: Sarah's Life - English H-Game [Demo]

Game looks great so far, really looking forward to more. Sarah is scorching hot. What fetishes will this game include?

 

[Impure]

Re: Sarah's Life - English H-Game [Demo]

short but sweet and the girl is gorgeous, i like the fact that the hubby dont like other guys even lookin at his wife...this sounds like it can get interestin fast

Thanks for trying out the demo! And i appreciate the kind words.

I'm a big fan of ntr, i used to read a lot of h-comics. So i have a lot of ideas for my game

 

[Impure]

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I tried it.

I can mentor you and help you improve your game drastically.

Free of charge, no strings attached, if you're interested PM me.

Thanks for trying out the demo!

And thank you for the offer, i will think about it and let you now through pm if i'm interested.

 

[Impure]

Re: Sarah's Life - English H-Game [Demo]

Game looks great so far, really looking forward to more. Sarah is scorching hot. What fetishes will this game include?

This means alot to me, thanks!

This is the first time i'm creating a game using RPG Maker, so i'm still learning while developing this. If i manage to put out a game you guys like that would mean i did something good!

So far the fetishes/genre: blackmail, netorare, exposure. voyeurism and humiliation.

I might add more later on, but for the moment these are the one's.

 

[BNavigator]

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Looks like a really good start. My one thought is a small consideration that it might make a bit more sense if she used to jog but found herself unable to for a very long time. It just feels like that would work better to justify her drive to jog,

 

[Wulfe]

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I guess this just isn't for me but I thought I should explain why, since it's nothing to do with cuckolded husbands and so far that's been the only subject for critical feedback.

Basically this game bothers me for the same reason as Officer Chloe: Nobody talks like this, and nobody acts like this.
The characters are all forced into these very standard archetypes (naive girl, lecherous old man) and literally everything they do or say is so chained to that archetype that it comes off as unnatural.

Sarah's so excited about jogging that she'll buy an outfit which is basically underwear? Instead of just, y'know, getting a tracksuit? Or maybe going to a different store?

And what sports store lets their stocks get down to just one incredibly revealing outfit? Who's managing that place?

And Sarah really loves her husband, lovey love love lovertrons the hell out of that guy! Loves him... But she won't have sex with him. In her sexy outfit. Because her first time jogging is going to take the entire day?!?
Is she a mutant? Or training for an olympic marathon that's only a week away?

Why don't you take the time to show us Sarah actually loving her husband instead of just insisting that she sooo does! She's suuuuper duper totes in love with him! (Frankly she doesn't even need to have sex with him if that's crucial to your Steve character. She could tease him a little, spend some time wriggling in his lap, and then just promise to keep the outfit on "for tonight")

My suggestion would be to really pay attention to the conversations you have with people in everyday life, think about them in detail afterward. Who said what? When? What did they/you want from the conversation? Did they/you get it? How do people avoid topics; how do they steer toward a topic?
Then go back through every conversation in the game and ask yourself how it would go if you were really having it with another person.
Because really it's the conversations she has (especially with herself, all those monologues) that make the scenarios she's in seem so implausible.

 

[Impure]

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@BNavigator
That's a good point. I will consider this and might change it in the next release.

@Wulfe
This is just a game and not real life, i'm making the story just the way i like it and i think it's hot and sexy! So far working on this game i have enjoyed every minute of it.

As for the second point, after i implement the corruption stats in the game, Sarah (or you playing) will be able to make her own choices.

And as last, the reason why she didn't have sex with Steve is because i made a choice not to show to much of Sarah in the first five minutes of the game. Later down the road in Sarah's Life she will slowly do more and more. This is the kind of game i'm making.

And thanks for trying out the demo and giving me feedback!

 

[yusufaydgn]

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Looks promising.. i made a small donation..for your work.. so keep up the good work man.. and most importantly enjoy your work

 

[Darkstrain]

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@Wulfe
This is just a game and not real life, i'm making the story just the way i like it and i think it's hot and sexy! So far working on this game i have enjoyed every minute of it.

i think that wulfe made a really good point though.

Everyone makes fun of the plot in porn movies like "the pizza guy replaced your pepperoni with real italian sausage"... yet that doesn't mean you have to write the da vinci code of porn though.

the issue is not the reality of the scenario you've made, but the forced way it develops, the end result is good and you seem to know what you're going for. but the hardest thing to get right is how things happen, and why they happen, take his suggestion a little more serious and you may find a better way to do things, though in mi opinion it isn't that far from awesomeness.

EDIT: as a really REALLY good example of bad writing look at all combin ation games... uuuuugh...

 

[bouli0]

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Hi, and welcome in the game-developping world.

Don't overlook the most aesthetically crucial, yet most ignored feature of an Hentai RPGMaker game : the key to hide the text bar... !!

I wish you best of luck with your promising project !

 

[BNavigator]

Re: Sarah's Life - English H-Game [Demo]

@BNavigator
That's a good point. I will consider this and might change it in the next release.

@Wulfe
This is just a game and not real life, i'm making the story just the way i like it and i think it's hot and sexy! So far working on this game i have enjoyed every minute of it.

As for the second point, after i implement the corruption stats in the game, Sarah (or you playing) will be able to make her own choices.

And as last, the reason why she didn't have sex with Steve is because i made a choice not to show to much of Sarah in the first five minutes of the game. Later down the road in Sarah's Life she will slowly do more and more. This is the kind of game i'm making.

And thanks for trying out the demo and giving me feedback!

Someone once said "It's comon rule of thumb that art tends to degrade the more simple primal and base the sensabilities it's appealing to are, and what's more simple primal and base than fucking?"

Still that is a bit of why I gave my suggestion for a tweak to the background, because if Sarah felt like 'is reality conspiring that I never jog again?' that would help justify her buying the skimpiest outfit in the first store she visited because she was all "If I don't grab this now, I'll never get to jog!"

Were you planning to do anything with a more conservative jogging outfit? because if so, Sarah might respond to her husband's uncertainty of her outfit by saying "I ordered one online, but it'll take a few days for it to get here." Though if you're not looking to do a more conservative outfit, that also offers the possibility for all sorts of possible mistakes with her order if you want her to find herself having an outfit she wouldn't seek out in most circumstances.

But on the whole don't worry too much, rediculous is one of the base states of porn and that's not a bad thing in my book.

 

[Impure]

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Looks promising.. i made a small donation..for your work.. so keep up the good work man.. and most importantly enjoy your work

Thank you for the support! I most definitely enjoy working on this game.

i think that wulfe made a really good point though.

Everyone makes fun of the plot in porn movies like "the pizza guy replaced your pepperoni with real italian sausage"... yet that doesn't mean you have to write the da vinci code of porn though.

the issue is not the reality of the scenario you've made, but the forced way it develops, the end result is good and you seem to know what you're going for. but the hardest thing to get right is how things happen, and why they happen, take his suggestion a little more serious and you may find a better way to do things, though in mi opinion it isn't that far from awesomeness.

EDIT: as a really REALLY good example of bad writing look at all combin ation games... uuuuugh...

I had just got home when i wrote that and my head was killing me. But yeah i agree that he made a good point. It's just that while i'm working on these scenes i always try to bring my own fantsay in them. If it sounds good, sexy and hot in my head, i type it down.

But yeah, i will try to improve the dialogues for the upcoming scenes in the next release of my game. I can promise you that.

Hi, and welcome in the game-developping world.

Don't overlook the most aesthetically crucial, yet most ignored feature of an Hentai RPGMaker game : the key to hide the text bar... !!

I wish you best of luck with your promising project !

Thank you for the kind words. Skipping text and key to hide the text will be in the next release.


And thank you all for the feedback.

 

[Impure]

Re: Sarah's Life - English H-Game [Demo]

Were you planning to do anything with a more conservative jogging outfit? because if so, Sarah might respond to her husband's uncertainty of her outfit by saying "I ordered one online, but it'll take a few days for it to get here." Though if you're not looking to do a more conservative outfit, that also offers the possibility for all sorts of possible mistakes with her order if you want her to find herself having an outfit she wouldn't seek out in most circumstances.

The first one. Sarah does not like wearing a revealing outfit and she is married . But since she was so eager to go jogging and "the skimpy outfit was the only one left at the store" she bought it anyways.

So this is where the story kicks off, now the homeless man had a reason to ogle her.

Further down the road (maybe next release?) Sarah will be able to buy different types of clothes. So the next time she goes jogging she can buy a less revealing outfit (for example the one in my signature).

I have so many ideas a.t.m, so nothing is of certain yet. And thanks for the feedback.

 

[triton631]

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You really have good start here, hope we see more of it. Love the blackmail theme and especially the model.

 

[Impure]

Re: Sarah's Life - English H-Game [Demo]

You really have good start here, hope we see more of it. Love the blackmail theme and especially the model.

I'm glad you enjoyed the demo!

Blackmail/NTR is my favorite genre in games and comics. Always has been and always will be.