Re: SUPERCREEP (superhero themed English RPG)
Feedback; Finished playing the current version 0.011, I'll say like most people it has lots of potential and I'm looking forward to seeing more down the road.
I enjoyed it better then ICSTOR's Incest story and Milf control, id say the protagonist was more likable and the writing was much better. The attention to details is great and a definite strength. Details can make a bigger difference then bigger things, it's often surprising.
I love the premise, I have a few superpower fantasies myself and this game can easily channel them. So being invisible, and the works is awesome, especially if you get to choose immoral or moral choices.
That being said I hope the game will have at least 2 endings if not more.
Suggestions; The references are fun, but like mentioned before having the actress parodies spread out is a great idea. I'd suggest to keep the pop culture references low key. A reviewer once said about a game; "it's got so many references to pop culture it doesn't have it's own identity." If I where you id focus on your protagonist and world building. Also this will help it be more immersive. (make sure to keep the christina hendricks spoof, love Mrs Hendricks, lol)
Lots of people have expressed their disdain for the "trap" scene. I have an idea/solution. You make a switch at the beginning of the game making the play choose to see dickgirls or not. And each scene with a dickgirl has a value, if it's off the scene is disabled. If it's on it works normally. You just can't include any vital scenes with futa's or it would break your game.
I'm actually working on a Visual novel (at a extremely slow pace) and I have the same type of switch except it's for a Game +, so when I'm creating my game I'm adding a bunch of little bits of content here and there in the current game as I make it. Once you hit the end you can switch the game plus on, and it starts you back at the beginning the the value is on, unlocked a bunch of little sexy bonuses making the replay value even higher then just things you've missed.
I know lots of people say they don't care about story, but I'm probably the odd ball who enjoyed a strong story in my porno, and never gets satisfied. I'm not saying to make it huge, just don't trow it away.
There are lots of fetishes out there, but one thing is sure, everyone has different taste in women, so even if you don't do all the fetishes, variety of women will reach more people? maybe, yes we love big tits, but we also love all size tits, and don't forget the ass people.
Make sure to be true to your vision.
Conclusion;
I don't have any money to be a patreon, but I'd be glad to possibly buy the game once its out. And if you need a tester, I'd looove too. But I know you probably have other investors which can do that.
Keep us posted.
Are you referring to the protagonist on the cover image with the girls surrounding him? Keep in mind that the whole concept of that game is that you start off as a creep, which is supposed to be a bit unsettling, and he changes throughout the game. It's understandable that some players won't be able to relate to him though 
