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So I’ve read many a CYOA and come to two conclusions.
A: I want to have a go
B: None seem to cater for those who prefer the more petite girl. (Seriously, C is the smallest bust I’ve seen
)
Now, perhaps it’s just author preference, or maybe there isn’t a proverbial market for it; I don’t know. But I’m going to address both at once. No reason not too eh?
In the future I’ll likely give more choices if I ever make a second but with a story outline in my head I hope it’s at least apparent/becomes so, on why some things about the character designs are not optional in spite of the fact they usually would be.
It’s also only fair to warn people, I don’t shy away from ‘grim’ situations in my writing and this may occur as a result of choices. It is also possible to get ‘bad ends’ and a flat out game over from death if really bad choices are made.
On the flipside there is an ending lined up if people get to it with her virginity intact (yes I know, Hentai forum, shush )
Our protagonist is the eldest daughter of the Miyashiro shrine, a mixed race Felim and human. Unlike her late mother she looks more human than feline except for her ears and tail, slightly pronounced canines and sharper nails, neither are really serviceable as weapons sadly.
In spite of her almost-human appearance she still suffers the same sort of reaction from people as a ‘savage were-cat’. (were-cat being a derogatory term.)
She’s never met one other than her mother, whom she barely remembers, but she fears that Felim would also look down on her for her heritage.
authors note: for mental image sake think of the ‘little bit beastly’ trope for her and the race ’cute monster girl’ although the race is half male
Her father never told her the details, but she has figured it was related to his marriage to a Felim that put her father at odds with the nearby town, the Patrician particularly. Not overly noticeable until the passing of his second wife during childbirth, a noblewoman and mother to her sister. She was a loving woman who treat her like her own daughter in spite of her heritage and the fact the marriage had been an arranged one. At this point the town basically ostracised her, other than the guild where she finds work, almost nobody seems willing to spare more than a few words if they can. Her sister gets a relatively warm reception however; she’s never really thought about the reason but is glad he hasn’t had to suffer unlike her and her father.
The shrine was built on this site many centuries ago to enshrine and appease a deity enraged and rampaging after an event little is known about other than the destruction it wrought. It became known as ‘the sundering of Umbra’. A great empire that ruled the known world from the continent of umbra was suddenly devastated overnight, only an archipelago of islands remains, the new Umbra imperial capital is built on giant bridges that connect them. While her father was alive the shrine was a point of interest for many travellers due to its origins and history. The shrine itself is located on an island a week’s travel from the capital.
Since her father’s passing the number of people who came for its blessings has dwindled and donations all but stopped. The shrine as a result has become dilapidated this is one of two reasons she joined the guild to get money. The other is the Patrician.
But before we get to that there are some things to clear up.
1) Priestess Miyashiro and her sister need names, very important.
2) the main colour(s) for their outfits, largely cosmetic but I’ll use people’s colour schemes for their dialogue colour to make thinks simpler in large text updates. Or at least something close too. As such anything that’s unreadable/nigh unreadable such as white or yellow are illogical.
For example as a Miko traditionally it would be red & white or blue & white.
3) I’ll give some options here
a) mc’s bust size, choose between AA and B (this will help me gauge what I mentioned before)
b) mc’s weapon of choice. Katana, Naganata (a glave like spear) or bow. All three will also get a tanto (single edged dagger) for tight quarters.
Mechanically this translates to better damage, defence bonus or ranged.
c) Sister’s bust size, no more than a D, let’s not be silly about this.
d) Sister’s hair colour, natural colours only.
e) Sister’s alchemy focus, offence, defence, medical.
More on the alchemy later, I’ve given enough backstory for one post
Bios will be posted upon completion of votes.
If anything needs clarifying feel free to ask.
Likewise suggestions or comments too, I'm not the sort to freak out over constructive critasism.
A: I want to have a go
B: None seem to cater for those who prefer the more petite girl. (Seriously, C is the smallest bust I’ve seen
) Now, perhaps it’s just author preference, or maybe there isn’t a proverbial market for it; I don’t know. But I’m going to address both at once. No reason not too eh?
In the future I’ll likely give more choices if I ever make a second but with a story outline in my head I hope it’s at least apparent/becomes so, on why some things about the character designs are not optional in spite of the fact they usually would be.
It’s also only fair to warn people, I don’t shy away from ‘grim’ situations in my writing and this may occur as a result of choices. It is also possible to get ‘bad ends’ and a flat out game over from death if really bad choices are made.
On the flipside there is an ending lined up if people get to it with her virginity intact (yes I know, Hentai forum, shush
)Our protagonist is the eldest daughter of the Miyashiro shrine, a mixed race Felim and human. Unlike her late mother she looks more human than feline except for her ears and tail, slightly pronounced canines and sharper nails, neither are really serviceable as weapons sadly.
In spite of her almost-human appearance she still suffers the same sort of reaction from people as a ‘savage were-cat’. (were-cat being a derogatory term.)
She’s never met one other than her mother, whom she barely remembers, but she fears that Felim would also look down on her for her heritage.
authors note: for mental image sake think of the ‘little bit beastly’ trope for her and the race ’cute monster girl’ although the race is half male
Her father never told her the details, but she has figured it was related to his marriage to a Felim that put her father at odds with the nearby town, the Patrician particularly. Not overly noticeable until the passing of his second wife during childbirth, a noblewoman and mother to her sister. She was a loving woman who treat her like her own daughter in spite of her heritage and the fact the marriage had been an arranged one. At this point the town basically ostracised her, other than the guild where she finds work, almost nobody seems willing to spare more than a few words if they can. Her sister gets a relatively warm reception however; she’s never really thought about the reason but is glad he hasn’t had to suffer unlike her and her father.
The shrine was built on this site many centuries ago to enshrine and appease a deity enraged and rampaging after an event little is known about other than the destruction it wrought. It became known as ‘the sundering of Umbra’. A great empire that ruled the known world from the continent of umbra was suddenly devastated overnight, only an archipelago of islands remains, the new Umbra imperial capital is built on giant bridges that connect them. While her father was alive the shrine was a point of interest for many travellers due to its origins and history. The shrine itself is located on an island a week’s travel from the capital.
Since her father’s passing the number of people who came for its blessings has dwindled and donations all but stopped. The shrine as a result has become dilapidated this is one of two reasons she joined the guild to get money. The other is the Patrician.
But before we get to that there are some things to clear up.
1) Priestess Miyashiro and her sister need names, very important.
2) the main colour(s) for their outfits, largely cosmetic but I’ll use people’s colour schemes for their dialogue colour to make thinks simpler in large text updates. Or at least something close too. As such anything that’s unreadable/nigh unreadable such as white or yellow are illogical.
For example as a Miko traditionally it would be red & white or blue & white.
3) I’ll give some options here
a) mc’s bust size, choose between AA and B (this will help me gauge what I mentioned before)
b) mc’s weapon of choice. Katana, Naganata (a glave like spear) or bow. All three will also get a tanto (single edged dagger) for tight quarters.
Mechanically this translates to better damage, defence bonus or ranged.
c) Sister’s bust size, no more than a D, let’s not be silly about this.
d) Sister’s hair colour, natural colours only.
e) Sister’s alchemy focus, offence, defence, medical.
More on the alchemy later, I’ve given enough backstory for one post
Bios will be posted upon completion of votes.
If anything needs clarifying feel free to ask.
Likewise suggestions or comments too, I'm not the sort to freak out over constructive critasism.
