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Re: Aylia's Story - English H-Game Goodness!

He did, kinda :) Text from the patreon mail

"Hello everyone!

First and foremost, THANK YOU! I hit $10,000 per update this week, and it really was a "Holy Shit!" moment. I'm flabbergasted at the sheer support, even with all the mishaps I made along the way. So, thank you all! Thank you for pledging, thank you for sticking with me, and thank you for making this development thing become a reality."
 
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viciouswaffel said:
He did, kinda :) Text from the patreon mail

"Hello everyone!

First and foremost, THANK YOU! I hit $10,000 per update this week, and it really was a "Holy Shit!" moment. I'm flabbergasted at the sheer support, even with all the mishaps I made along the way. So, thank you all! Thank you for pledging, thank you for sticking with me, and thank you for making this development thing become a reality."
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The only thing left is to release the actual update. 10k is a lot.

Still, 2017 you say?
 
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slepth said:
The only thing left is to release the actual update. 10k is a lot.

Still, 2017 you say?
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Still - no money exchanges hands until the update actually happens, and the 2017 date is for the entire completed game. 10K is for the release of Chapter 2 (when it happens - after Chapter 1). Let's just say - no more promised deadlines until content starts to flow (saving YT from another explanation which seems to happen every page on this post...)
 
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Oh, believe me, I said, "Holy Shit!"--more than once. As for getting content out, $10k is definitely a lot... no one has more incentive than me to get these releases going. Moving part time was a big step, going full time this fall will be an even bigger step, and bringing in help will be the final step.

@AngelBoi: Yes, but I also think the white panties fit her personality. Don't worry, there will be more than one pair of panties.
 
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Mhh, I don't know about the nipple showing tho... Where's the point in trying to hide the boobies :p
 
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YummyTiger said:
Don't worry, there will be more than one pair of panties.
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I hope there will be a "without panties under her dress" option as well. :D

Anyway, congratulations for your achievements so far, i'm not the only one eager to test your next release.
 
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Ryuukun said:
Mhh, I don't know about the nipple showing tho... Where's the point in trying to hide the boobies :p
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It's good,

I like that she's struggling and failing to keep from being exposed, it's very hot IMO..
 
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Ryuukun said:
Mhh, I don't know about the nipple showing tho... Where's the point in trying to hide the boobies :p
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Dude, that's the best part. Accidental nipple is way, way hotter than deliberate nipple.
 
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YummyTiger said:
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Nip slip is fantastic. Like the new panties better than the old ones though they are quite standard. I mean, who would have thought thousands of years ago elves wore such plan and boring panties... that survived through the long imprisonment no less. But I'll let you work out the panty details, it is insignificant in the grand scheme of things... Though it was be awfully hot if her panties are a bit deteriorated... maybe for a different scene. :D

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Getting excited for ch1... again.
 
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While the white undergarments do match her innocence a bit better, that picture did bring one immediate concern to me. Her arms look almost child-like now. A little too chubby considering her general fitness and they're now unnaturally short. For the average person, their arms reach down so their fingers reach their thighs. For Aylia in the new art, they barely reach her hips, which is incredibly short.

And the weird curvier look to them is completely at odds with the altogether sharper features she otherwise has, which're often associated with elves.

I find I much prefer her body from before, with the more angular features. Please, keep her body consistant; she looked great and very elvish. The art showing her in the new underwear looks a bit less elvish and, if you ask me, more child-like, which'll make the naughty content a little awkward.

EDIT: Actually, disregard most of what I said. The more I looked at it, the more I liked it, but her arms still seem too short.
 
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Re: Aylia's Story - English H-Game Goodness!

idk where the childlike came from but her left arm is shorter and i thought she looked fine before.
 
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Thanks for the critiques.

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I will say, aside from maybe a preference on panty color/style, I don't see how, objectively, anyone could view the earlier version as better. Granted, art is subjective, but there were some serious flaws in the original.

@Shyao: I appreciate the critique! For me, I don't get "childlike" from this, but I do agree that her left arm is a bit too short. Perhaps, if focusing on that arm, she might come across as more childlike. Still, I want her to have some muscular framework, so in the newer art, you do see things like the slight curves on her arms in this art. It is super easy to extend her left arm a bit, and in adopting the pose myself, her elbow should be visible below her hand (that is actually already drawn, just hidden. Her right arm is actually a correct length and her left is not as short as it might appear, due to the angle.

Also, I agree that she was fine before, but when you compare this to the stuff I'm creating now, it is inferior to me. That's why I spent 1-2 hours to bring this artwork up-to-date. I want the art to be consistent across the board. I've grown a lot as an artist, and it took me awhile to settle into a style I liked. Now that I have, there shouldn't be revamps in the future, but I do want to fix the older stuff.

For me, I'm so, so, so much happier with the new version. I love the nipslip, I love the panties being visible. I love that she's trying to cover up, but failing. Ah, the trials and tribulations of the well endowed :D
 
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well, far as the way she looks now with more detail, its better, but she was in a cave with that pose if i aint msitaken and it didnt seem like the shading was all that much out of whack. youre right tho, you have to please yourself.
 
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torkenstiem said:
well, far as the way she looks now with more detail, its better, but she was in a cave with that pose if i aint msitaken and it didnt seem like the shading was all that much out of whack. youre right tho, you have to please yourself.
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That's true, didn't think about the cave. Still, most of the you see that portrait, she won't be in a cave. Having shading based on environment would be damn cool, but insane amounts of work. Just noting, I wasn't saying you were wrong or anything, I just feel that the new one is far better. The elbow, armpit, neck and hand all drove me nuts.

@AngleBoi: Yea, that's what I was saying, but it is not as bad as you might think. If you look at your elbow joint, it should end fairly close to the bottom of where her breasts would be. It is close to than, but not quite right. I'll just move the entire lower arm down a bit so that the elbow is visible, and that would alleviate the issue. Part of the reason is looks so short is the angle, she's angle away and the arm is not straight, both take away from the overall length.

EDIT: Arm extended.

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Shyao said:
The more I looked at it, the more I liked it
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It's the cameltoe. Everything is better with a cameltoe.

Ok, the other things YT pointed out may help a little bit, but I still think it's better mostly because of the cameltoe. And yeah, her left arm does look a bit too short.

EDIT: And just when I posted this YT fixed the arm. Great job, looks perfect now.
 
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YT, if you are having trouble with lenghts and stuff, you might want to get one of those wooden articulated figures ( this
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I'm no artist, so I don't know if they are useful, but hey :p
 
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I love the red panties,the white panties is very predictible
 
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That's a thong, right? Can't wait to see how her bum would look like.
 
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