Re: Fairy Fighting
Heres what you're actually proposing when you put it into a storyboard:
Tiki gets fucked by Alulune
Seed enters Tiki
Alulune releases Tiki
*fade to black*
Tiki upright in the middle of an Alarune flower looking at a vine
Not very interesting when you read it like that is it? Oh and I skipped the whole seed hatching scene cause thats WAYYYY beyond anything eluku has shown us. You're basically talking about a fully colored, animated H-manga at that point.
The problem is context, typical rookie writer's mistake (I've made the mistake myself). If you know the story, its easy to say "oh just do a fade to black, the audience will figure it out" but if you don't know the story it turns into a "wait, wtf just happened?" moment.*points at FluidHunter's special ending* Dick-like thing implants giant spheroid into Tiki? Check.
Still showing aftereffects? Check.
It's only missing the bit between "vines let Tiki drop" and "screen fades out"... and given that the part with the black background is a fixed animation...
It's doable. It'd take a lot of work, though.
Heres what you're actually proposing when you put it into a storyboard:
Tiki gets fucked by Alulune
Seed enters Tiki
Alulune releases Tiki
*fade to black*
Tiki upright in the middle of an Alarune flower looking at a vine
Not very interesting when you read it like that is it? Oh and I skipped the whole seed hatching scene cause thats WAYYYY beyond anything eluku has shown us. You're basically talking about a fully colored, animated H-manga at that point.
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