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Re: Tentacle Lair Escape: Apocalypse

Finally finished both your stories and am ready to play this one. I must say, I'm imperesed. Few could take something like tentacle rape and make such a story out of it.

EDIT: I'm going with A, by the way.
 
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Re: Tentacle Lair Escape: Apocalypse

Thanks, its not something that happened overnight. In the beginning, all you had was the Innocent girl and the predatory tentacle we've seen hundreds of times. Since then it has evolved into several different factions, about 50 characters, 8 races (Black, White, Red, Blue, Purple, Green, Pink and Orange) each with their own personalities and ambitions, seems like alot of stuff, but it has come together by itself.

My Theory on writing is to just sit down and have fun with it, experiment, try things out until they work, taking the tentacle rape genre which is so simple by itself and expanding it into a whole huge conflict has been enjoyable and putting the characters in situations where the decision you make as you read arent necessarily easy or correct and seeing how people react is extremely enjoyable, especially when people get into huge debates about the psychology or personality of a character you have created for them. :D.
 
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Re: Tentacle Lair Escape: Apocalypse

Well we each have a view of the character and wish to mould her into something of course this something is different to each of us. Not to mention we attempt to act on knowledge our character does not have/know (meta-gaming) so of course fighting would break out.
 

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Re: Tentacle Lair Escape: Apocalypse

You can't really say for sure that others are meta-gaming when they want to take a path that others think is crazy that may or may not lead to something based on stuff players know that Ella does not, some are using their own views for what kind of person they think Ella is or want her to become with their choices but all options presented are ones that Ella would think of herself, Serifyn would not list something if he did not think she would do that based how past choices made.

Anyways, please take discussions here --> http://www.ulmf.org/bbs/showthread.php?t=21049 and keep the main thread clear of excess clutter, also try to keep disagreements civil
 
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D. plan, connive, scheme, contemplate the mysteries of the universe, and how awesome blue tentacles are and how we should totally work with them, and pie *subliminal messaging*
 
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(A)

Ella found herself alone in a cathedral, a large and wondrous structure where the ceiling towered high above her, its pearly ceiling had several illustrations carved into it, people of some importance and their history and how it related to the religion of this strange place.

Ella herself was wearing a white robe similar to what she had discovered in the church earlier in her adventure, but the fabric was silky smooth and very clean, showing not even a wrinkle of sign of age.

The Alter of the Cathedral was empty but equaled the magnificence of the surrounding walls and stained glass surrounding her, on it, it had several holy artifacts such as chalices and steel bowls and white cloth on which they were placed.

The Alter itself looked as it was made entirely of white alabaster stone and formed with delicate craftsmanship, every detail was important, the curves and rims of the alter were all precise and showed no sign of error.

"Where am i?" Ella said to herself, as she sat up from her crouched position, lifting her knees up from the kneeler build into the pew before her and sitting back, taking in more of this fantastic place.

"This place doesn't exist anymore" a woman said who appeared to her right, Ella looked over at her and was shocked to see how the woman was different.

The strange woman before her had what were unmistakably wings, white with soft feathers which came from her back, the white robe she was wearing was similar to Ella's but it was far more resplendent as it shimmered in the light which came in from the stained windows to her left, the woman's hair was completely white, a theme which seemed to carry onward even into these peoples genes.

"Who are you?" Ella asked as she sat back further in her pew and put her hands softly ontop of her thighs.

"We are your race's creators and guardians, we were called angels, before we were destroyed" The white haired angel said, with a sadness in her eyes.


"What happened to you?" Ella asked as she scooted over to make room for the angel to sit next to her.

"The Demons came and invaded our realm, they destroyed everything and killed everyone" The Angel said as she sat down next to Ella, looking out at the Alter before her.

"What is a Demon?" Ella asked, seeming confused

"A Demon is a creature of incredible power, they seek only to rule and subjugate all races, destroying what they cant control, and making everyone else into their slaves"

"Why did they destroy your race?"

"Because we cannot be controlled, because we tried to defy them, we created the human race in our image, we needed an ally, and a contingency plan in the event of our destruction."

"You said this place doesn't exist? what happened to it?"

Slowly, the walled black and red, the stained glass which had shown heroic visages of the angels had turned to black and red images of the demons slaying the angels, the bodies of slain angels littered the cathedral, slumped over pews and the alter, their blood pouring down onto the ground and flowing through the cathedral.

A demon had an angel slumped over the Alter and was fucking her with its large cock, the Angel screamed out in pain as the creature's barbed phallus tore her insides apart, the demon was very large and menacing, it had a rhino-like appearance with red skin and impressive horns, it was a heavy creature which stood on four hooves.

Many of the statues and artifacts of this place were destroyed or splattered with blood, some of the pews were destroyed from huge battles which had taken place her earlier.

The demon yelled out in ecstasy as it ejaculated into the angel, causing the angel to cry out in pain again as its hot semen flowed into her, burning her insides, the demon produced a blade soon after and grabbed the Angel's hair, bringing her head back and it drew the blade across her neck, cutting her throat, the Angel fell to the ground, grabbing her neck and bleeding out, her white hair and face were familiar, it was the same angel which Ella was talking to now.

"The Demons are coming to your world now to destroy everything.......unless you can stop them" slowly, the horrific images of the cathedral disappeared and the white purity of the place returned, the blood being washed away by the light which shined through the glass again.

"How can i stop them?"

"You have the power Ella, you were born with it. our spirits have watched over you for years, and what little power we have left is yours"

"How do i use this power?" Ella asked

"That, we cannot tell you, a champion must find their own way, the path to unlocking the power in your soul can manifest itself in any number of ways, it is up to you to discover your true path."

"What about the Tentacles?"

"The Tacvi are creations of the Demons, ment to subjugate humanity after our race the angels had been destroyed"

"Are they my enemy as well?"

The angel got up from her seated position, preparing to leave. "The Demons are the enemy of every creature on your planet, even the tentacles...when they come, no creature will be spared"

"So the tentacles are not my enemy?"

"That is for you to decide, Champion......."

The Angel started to walk away, but Ella got up and stopped her.

"You arent tell me everything.....who are you?" Ella yelled to her.

"I was the Champion of race, Ella...." the angel said as she disappeared into thin air, leaving behind a single angel feather in her place.

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Ella woke to the sensation of her body being weakened, she felt a small bit of pleasure as she opened her eyes and looked down, a large orange tentacle was inserted into her and was slowly fucking her, draining her energy.

April came from her side to greet her from her sleep

"Finally awake?" April said as she reached down and grabbed the tentacle in her hand, rubbing it with her thumb as it slowly fucked Ella before her.

"A couple of days, your body wasent used to the energy draining effects of an overlord, but that is fairly normal for a new girl"

"How much longer do you plan on keeping me here?" Ella asked, her body was tired and even if she was released this second, she likely wouldn't be able to walk very far before collapsing.

"I told you, after the auction" April said as she walked over to a pile of apples and pears which had accumulated and picked up one of them at random.

"Who are you expecting to come and bid on me?" Ella said as she bobbed her head, barely able to continue with this conversation.

"All of the major tentacle factions are interested, we'll have representatives here from blue, black, green, purple, and pink" April said as she picked up Ella's Kris again and started slicing the apple she had just picked up.

"Can i ask you a question?" Ella asked

"Sure, why not?" April said, as she lifted a big slice of apple up to Ella's mouth, who accepted it into her mouth and chewed quickly.

"Why are you being so nice to me, i beat up yours princesses, i killed one of your tentacles and wounded another....why are you feeding me apples?" Ella asked as she chewed

"I see no reason to be uncivil, if i was in your position, i might fight as well, how can i blame you?" April said as she put a piece of apple into her own mouth.

"Doesn't your overlord want to punish me?"

"It does, but i wont let it, i'm the one who wears the pants around here......i mean figuratively"

Ella couldn't help but chuckle, even given her position.

"You arent a bad person April, just confused"

"I could say the same thing about you Ella"

Ella paused for a bit, thinking to herself for a moment.

"What do you think will happen to me once i've been auctioned off to the highest bidder?"

"That depends on which Overlord successfully purchases you. If Black wins, you'll probably be some kind of trophy for the rest of your life, if purple wins you'll probably be brutalized for the rest of your life with tentacles forced into your anus every day until you scream for mercy......and if blue win's you'll probably be eating sandwiches on the beach and laughing about the whole ordeal"

"Sandwiches on the beach?"

"im kidding, but really, i dont know why blue is here, many of their women are supposedly free, i dont know how they could justify bidding them to us for you"

"Free?"

"I don't understand it either, maybe you should ask them, im sure each representative will want to talk to you before we start the bidding so they can threaten you or something" April finished off the apple and got up to get another.

"I dont suppose you'd let me go?"

"its worth asking right?" April laughed to herself.

"Sorry, you're worth too much to us, orange isnt particularly powerful or respected in the world, we could really use the women you'd bring to expand, and even if you didnt, how can i be sure you wouldn't just come back here after you've rested and kill us all?"

"I guess you've got a point"

"You should close your eyes and go back to sleep, the energy being drained from your body will keep you weak while you remain with us, but if you are purchased by another overlord, who knows, maybe you could use the energy you've saved to escape......"

Ella closed her eyes and went to sleep easily.

Ella's dreams became strange as she started imagining herself in many different situations she never through she would be in.

What do you do?

A. Dream about yourself as a captive of the purple tentacles

B. Dream about yourself as a tentacle creature hunting for prey.

C. Dream about yourself as a cum-hungry whore, who loves nothing more than sticking tentacle cocks into herself and drinking up their semen.

D. Dream about yourself as a knight who has become empowered by tentacle corruption.
 
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Re: Tentacle Lair Escape: Apocalypse

This is the last 'Dream' sequence you will have for quite a while, when Ella wakes up, she will be auctioned off to one of her bidders.
 

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Re: Tentacle Lair Escape: Apocalypse

A.
time to motivate her to get out
 

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Re: Tentacle Lair Escape: Apocalypse

A. I prefer physical abuse over mental abuse. (I say abuse here, but generally being in a different state of mind from one's usual personality is what I mean, includes being drunk)

I have to say I rather like April, her honest and straightforward nature is refreshing.
 

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Re: Tentacle Lair Escape: Apocalypse

D. Maybe we can somehow down the road see things the way Zoey does, because even the angels, at least not implicitly state that the tentacles are evil or our enemies. But who knows, seeing ourselves as a mighty, powerful if not noble warrior might encourage us to fight back, or at least remain defiant.
 

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Re: Tentacle Lair Escape: Apocalypse

"D. Dream about yourself as a knight who has become empowered by tentacle corruption."

Read: "I want to be a pretty tentacle princess one day and smite the enemies of my tentacle overlord, so he'll be pleased and fuck me in the arse every night"


I vote A
 

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Re: Tentacle Lair Escape: Apocalypse

Carefull guys... I am afraid that we are choosing who Ella will be auctioned off to with this vote:

A->Purple
B->Blue or Black (not sure)
C->Pink
D->Black or Green (not sure)

I am going to skip my vote here.
 

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Re: Tentacle Lair Escape: Apocalypse

A. The four-sided coin of fate said so.
 

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Re: Tentacle Lair Escape: Apocalypse

D Remember the angel?
Tentacles don't have to be our enemies if we can somehow change them such as removing their Demonic taint it might be possible to change them without killing them.

And B,C aren't really an option in my view A could but it'll be like we are submitting to our fate of being bought off.
 

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Re: Tentacle Lair Escape: Apocalypse

I don't think this choice will have a huge impact or maybe lead into some intresting ideas that will probably get tossed aside anyways

maybe I'm just feeling a little evil but I'd love to see D maybe get an idea of if it's possible for tenticle power and holy power to work has one
 

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Re: Tentacle Lair Escape: Apocalypse

'Cause nobody has picked that one.

Edit : No, I change to A, afterall.
 
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Re: Tentacle Lair Escape: Apocalypse

I suppose than we cant have the option C as a bonnus : (

My vote goes to B,
 
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