AWMBI - Discussion

[Keylo]

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Their power level is over nine thousand.

Yes, they are pretty good. :3

And mine when I'm not brain-dead like I am right now? (36 hours in a row of writing stuff for a deadline...)

 

[TheWeirdOne]

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Oooh oohh what about my posts allmighty RaptorJesus!

 

[Shrike7]

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I have a question.
Are my posts decent?

Your smaller font size is a bit of a pain, as I spend most of my time reading on a 1.5 inch screen, but the writing itself is quite good. I think I noticed a couple repeated ideas and maybe a run on sentence or two, but I'm kind of bad for that myself, so I can't bug you about it too much

EDIT: ah what the hell, let's hear everyone's thoughts on my writing as well

 

[BurningGold]

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Does anyone think my posts would be better if I used a bigger font?

 

[Mamono Assault Force]

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And mine when I'm not brain-dead like I am right now? (36 hours in a row of writing stuff for a deadline...)

Power level is also over nine thousand.

Oooh oohh what about my posts allmighty RaptorJesus!

Your power level is 69!

 

[Keylo]

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Does anyone think my posts would be better if I used a bigger font?

Actually, it fits Iris's character somewhat as far as I can tell... gives me the whole "kinda meek" feeling.

 

[Kayi]

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Your font size and color does make it a bit harder to read at times. Your content is always great though ^^

Maybe try a few posts with larger font, and see how it looks?

 

[Shrike7]

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I didn't say that BG, I actually think that the smaller font fits Iris quite well, or at least the new version of her. If you're really worried about it, maybe just have the speech smaller and the thoughts and narrative full-size?

 

[Keylo]

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Oddly enough, I never had a quip with the font size, the main thing that causes me to go nazi on BG's posts at times is the spelling/typos...

 

[BurningGold]

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I wasn't trying to give Iris a meek feeling...
It be weird if River saw the new Iris...

 

[TheWeirdOne]

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Your power level is 69!

Should I feel stupid now?

 

[Shrike7]

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Haha, indeed it would

"Alright, who the hell are you and what did you do with my team leader?" *slapslap*

 

[BurningGold]

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"If you want to jerk off, the shower's just over there. I'll even wait outside while you diddle yourself.."

Hahahaha!!!
Oh man that was funny.

 

[Mamono Assault Force]

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Should I feel stupid now?

Naw, you should feel magical, as my favorite number is 69! :3

 

[BurningGold]

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Haha, indeed it would

"Alright, who the hell are you and what did you do with my team leader?" *slapslap*

" Ow, hey! All I did was get emotions..."

 

[Keylo]

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RJ, your magical number is going to be 4444 if I fall asleep before you make a reply in the goddess thread :V... (Must... make...one...more...post...before succumbing...to....fatigue!....)

 

[TheWeirdOne]

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Naw, you should feel magical, as my favorite number is 69! :3

DAMN YOU AND YOUR INABILITY TO GIVE STRAIGHT ANSWERS!

thanks!

 

[thetwo]

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RJ, your magical number is going to be 4444 if I fall asleep before you make a reply in the goddess thread :V... (Must... make...one...more...post...before succumbing...to....fatigue!....)

Yea, I'm also out after one more post....

 

[Shrike7]

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Haha, nice

Also, since I apparently didn't manage to edit it in before everyone read my post, how's my writing?

 

[Kayi]

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*jealous of DeMatt*