AWMBI - Discussion

[Keylo]

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And I'm off. Going to hunt a Kitty or two in my dreams tonight with good ol' winchester.

 

[BurningGold]

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Meh, I guess now would be a good time to put the goddess mission on pause.

 

[Guyver2216]

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welp bed time for me so you all have a good night see yall tommorow.

 

[Loli Defense Force]

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*sighs* darnit, I wanted to do another looting run -3-

 

[Shrike7]

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Isn't trancing supposed to help you regain stamina? Maybe Selena should take up meditation, maybe do some yoga with Kitty, it might help next time around

 

[TheWeirdOne]

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I'm pretty sure trance only works for mental... that's why I took it for Emily... <.<

 

[Mamono Assault Force]

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Isn't trancing supposed to help you regain stamina? Maybe Selena should take up meditation, maybe do some yoga with Kitty, it might help next time around

Going into a trance is more for the Inspired who've lost a great amount of Essence, and need to get it back quickly.

 

[Shrike7]

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Yeah, just re-read it. I think it should allow for some stam recovery as well, but meh, month big deal there.

Also, how come nobody wants to comment on my writing?

 

[Mamono Assault Force]

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Yeah, just re-read it. I think it should allow for some stam recovery as well, but meh, month big deal there.

Also, how come nobody wants to comment on my writing?

Because it's so awesome, we've been spending this whole time, trying to find a word that expresses it's awesome magnitude.

 

[Shrike7]

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Flattery will get you nowhere, I want criticism

 

[DeMatt]

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Because it's so awesome, we've been spending this whole time, trying to find a word that expresses it's awesome magnitude.

Seconded.

Flattery will get you nowhere, I want criticism

You misspelt "two" as "to" in your most recent story post. Happier?

 

[Mamono Assault Force]

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Flattery will get you nowhere, I want criticism

WRITE MORE ABOUT HER BOOBS, OR I SWEAR TO ME I'LL DO IT!

 

[TheWeirdOne]

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Tits or gtfo?

 

[Mamono Assault Force]

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Tits or gtfo?

Rather, tits or the kitten gets it.

 

[Shrike7]

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Do it then, I'm a dog person

 

[Mamono Assault Force]

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Curses...

*Shoves the kitty back into his top hat*

 

[Shrike7]

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This is not double posting because I fully expect to be ninja'd

I did misspell 'two', holy crap, fix'd, thankie DeMatt. A little happier now, just thought I'd ask because it seems like a bunch of my posts have become:

"(Etc)" she says, (etc)
"(Etc)" she says, (etc)
"(Etc)" she says, (etc)
"(Etc)" she says, (etc)

Repeat ad nausium. Its fairly spread between my other RPs and here, but it seems to me like I've hit a rut :/

 

[Shrike7]

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Shit, another not-a-double-post...

Zero says he's busy, that means we can NPC him, right? Right?

 

[Mamono Assault Force]

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This is not double posting because I fully expect to be ninja'd

I did misspell 'two', holy crap, fix'd, thankie DeMatt. A little happier now, just thought I'd ask because it seems like a bunch of my posts have become:

"(Etc)" she says, (etc)
"(Etc)" she says, (etc)
"(Etc)" she says, (etc)
"(Etc)" she says, (etc)

Repeat ad nausium. Its fairly spread between my other RPs and here, but it seems to me like I've hit a rut :/

I always add an emotion after says, like,

She says plainly,

She says seductively.

But, it's pretty hard to avoid the "she says" phrase, unless you did something like,

"Go to hell, you bloody narwhal!" she spat.

 

[Shrike7]

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There are a few ways around it, I use the descriptive often as well just feels like I'm hitting cookie-cutter post mode. Also, what about my not-so-double-post-but-oh-wait-it-is-a-double-post? :3