Monster Girl Island OOC chat

[MacdaddyG]

Re: Monster Girl Island OOC chat

So is it ur job to billite me cause youve been on my case why not support new writers than bring me down

 

[ToxicShock]

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If I see a single post about biting and eating titties, I'm gonna shit pain on all of you

 

[cross_grave]

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Listen, I'll say this once. It's hard to support a writer who produces so little. Your character background is very short and plain. I'd say that any competent person could come up with something like that in five minutes or so. It's an indicator of how much thought and effort you're putting into this. And I must admit that I don't like what I'm seeing. But perhaps if you stopped complaining about people and actually, you know, used that brain of yours and fixed the problem, I would reconsider my opinion.

If I see a single post about biting and eating titties, I'm gonna shit pain on all of you

Damn you, Toxic, for tempting me.

 

[Mamono Assault Force]

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*Bashes Daddy and Grave with a trout*

I'm seriously, guys. Seriously. If I see another exchange between Daddy and someone else, it'd better be them either giving non critical advice, or the intent and/or action of sexual abuse.

No negative emotions. EVER! NOT IN MY WORLD! DO YOU UNDERSTAND ME!?

Flowers, sunshine, happiness, rape and tentacles. Are we clear children?

 

[cross_grave]

Re: Monster Girl Island OOC chat

Huh? And what about my blood, fire and metal?

 

[MacdaddyG]

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OK i dont know if this counts as starting a fight but i want to say noteveryone has a huge background story ive seen a few my size and some smaller and i have seen preety big ones, and i say it matters what is written and if it gets the point across.

 

[cross_grave]

Re: Monster Girl Island OOC chat

Alright then. If not background, then how about you elaborate more about his appearance? Characteristic marks? Personality? Quirks, habits, faith, whatever? Another way to add depth to a character, and it might help you play your role better in the future if you plan this stuff beforehand. Might even give the GM some ideas on how to run your story.

 

[MacdaddyG]

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That is a very good point u bring up and yes i can do some editing to my profile put more thought into it

 

[TheWeirdOne]

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*Bashes Daddy and Grave with a trout*

I'm seriously, guys. Seriously. If I see another exchange between Daddy and someone else, it'd better be them either giving non critical advice, or the intent and/or action of sexual abuse.

No negative emotions. EVER! NOT IN MY WORLD! DO YOU UNDERSTAND ME!?

Flowers, sunshine, happiness, rape and tentacles. Are we clear children?

You're a sassy nanny and a carpet bagger!

On a more serious note:

Just ignore then Daddy before this gets worst.

EDIT: Also Daddy there's a spell checker that you can install in firefox to help spell words right if you so please.

 

[Termite]

Re: Monster Girl Island OOC chat

Okay, I think I can sum up some of the thoughts.

Grammar and Spell Check - This is the one that probably offends more people than you realize. A lot of people on these forums, ESPECIALLY in the RP Sections, prefer to be able to read a post without having to try and decipher what's been said. When someone writes as you have it tends to distract someone from understanding what's been said. Basically just try to write properly to help everyone get what you're saying.

Background - Let me ask you some questions: When exactly did Ragrok and Zoltan meet? How did they meet? What was the accident? Why did the witch capture you and not Zoltan? Why did she hex Ragrok? As arrogant as Zoltan is (that's right, I read everyone's threads), why would he send Ragrok to search for another witch? How exactly do Ragrok's powers work? Do you understand what the fetish section means? Answer these and it will help you give your character a lot more substance. Except for that last part. The fetish section is Raptor Jesus asking what you would most like to see happen to your character.

 

[Mamono Assault Force]

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You're a sassy nanny and a carpet bagger!

I will keel you.

 

[TheWeirdOne]

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I will keel you.

You're too much of a nanny bagger for that.

 

[Mamono Assault Force]

Re: Monster Girl Island OOC chat

You're too much of a nanny bagger for that.

Listen, you washed up willow, I won't be taking any riff-raff from a twinkle toe, cotton pickin' varmint what came out the rear end of a yello' liver'd yankee.

 

[ToxicShock]

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[TheWeirdOne]

Re: Monster Girl Island OOC chat

When I used my translator it told me he's either offering to give me WMDs or he's saying that since childhood I was destined to eat turnups for the rest of my life.

 

[Mamono Assault Force]

Re: Monster Girl Island OOC chat

Close, but you have it mixed up.

Your turnups told you WMD's would offer you to eat your destiny for the rest of your life.

 

[ToxicShock]

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WTF IS A TURNUP?

 

[TheWeirdOne]

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Do not question our ways Toxic.

Do not question our ways.

 

[Sponge]

Re: Monster Girl Island OOC chat

Edit: It keeps doing this, posting twice.. now I have to put something funny in....

 

[Sponge]

Re: Monster Girl Island OOC chat

Wait I just noticed some characters that have long subscribed AFTER me, have now gotten their stories... And I've been waiting for 2 weeks. >_<

Think it's Shetania and Samela.. or something. But whatever. 2 characters none the less 0_E