[WIP - Full] [RJ140344]赤首の闘技場 (The Girl In the Red Slave Collar)

[Cursed Atelier]

Re: [RJ140344]赤首の闘技場 (The Girl In the Red Slave Collar)

New patch!

Current version of the patch is v8.2, so we are done about 82%.

Link: Removed


Changelog:

Fixed the lines in the "Hanging scene" and "Second time espacing town" events.
Fixed the QTE difficulties.
Translated and proofread the Ryan defeat scene.

Have fun!

Candiru.

Please report any other Errors or typos thank you.

 

[4GunZ]

Re: [RJ140344]赤首の闘技場 (The Girl In the Red Slave Collar)

Candiru, how do you do?

 

[Cursed Atelier]

Re: [RJ140344]赤首の闘技場 (The Girl In the Red Slave Collar)

Candiru, how do you do?

I am doing pretty fine, thanks for asking.

And I am still working on it with TNT90,
but proofreading sadly takes a lot of time.

And I got now a night time job, so I am going to work when we could work together on it.

Stupid time difference.

 

[4GunZ]

Re: [RJ140344]赤首の闘技場 (The Girl In the Red Slave Collar)

Good to hear that!

 

[AkiTooru]

Re: [RJ140344]赤首の闘技場 (The Girl In the Red Slave Collar)

In the 8.2 patch, when an enemy strangles you, the text says "X trys to strangle Sachi"
obs: it's skill 68

I had noticed it in hyperk2's patch, along with other mistakes too. I'm thinking of seeing if those were fixed in a ng+, if not I'll report here.

Also, looking at the difficulty settings, there might be a problem there, one of the difficulties is missing, along with one of the variables. You might have a wrong version, without the sex slave difficulty

 

[Cursed Atelier]

Re: [RJ140344]赤首の闘技場 (The Girl In the Red Slave Collar)

In the 8.2 patch, when an enemy strangles you, the text says "X trys to strangle Sachi"
obs: it's skill 68

I had noticed it in hyperk2's patch, along with other mistakes too. I'm thinking of seeing if those were fixed in a ng+, if not I'll report here.

Also, looking at the difficulty settings, there might be a problem there, one of the difficulties is missing, along with one of the variables. You might have a wrong version, without the sex slave difficulty

Thanks for the report, I will look into it.

And yes I got 1.05c and not 1.05d.

Candiru

 

[AkiTooru]

Re: [RJ140344]赤首の闘技場 (The Girl In the Red Slave Collar)

You're using RPGMakerTrans, aren't you? Isn't it version independant? Using a RPGMakerTrans patch should leave the options and variables there, just with the new option untranslated (as you are using 1.05c instead of 1.05d). At the same time older versions shoudn't break when using the patch.

 

[Cursed Atelier]

Re: [RJ140344]赤首の闘技場 (The Girl In the Red Slave Collar)

You're using RPGMakerTrans, aren't you? Isn't it version independant? Using a RPGMakerTrans patch should leave the options and variables there, just with the new option untranslated (as you are using 1.05c instead of 1.05d). At the same time older versions shoudn't break when using the patch.

Yes, I am using RPGMakertrans.

I think the problem is that in version 1.05d the difficulty "sex slave" was added.

And I have redone a lot but with a different patch, not the one for Hyper2K.

And I somehow made it, that it overwrites the difficulty settings.
I will fix it, if I have a bit more time.

 

[Cursed Atelier]

Re: [RJ140344]赤首の闘技場 (The Girl In the Red Slave Collar)

Happy New Year all!

 

[AlexDark94]

Re: [RJ140344]赤首の闘技場 (The Girl In the Red Slave Collar)

Happy New Year all!

Happy New Year to you as well!
Wish you the best of everything!

 

[zipetya]

Re: [RJ140344]赤首の闘技場 (The Girl In the Red Slave Collar)

Hiya candiru!
Happy -belated- New Year!

Any updates on this? I know most your TL efforts are pouring into Lilitales right now (and may you be blessed for it too!! xD), but I for one would really be excited for a 100% TLed 'Red Slave Collar' as well... Been waiting on a 100% for ages. lol

Anyways, hope you are doing fine!

 

[Dasher2417]

Re: [RJ140344]赤首の闘技場 (The Girl In the Red Slave Collar)

It is pretty much complete, and I played on the version before proofreading. The only thing missing, is a part of 5th duel's bad end.

 

[zipetya]

Re: [RJ140344]赤首の闘技場 (The Girl In the Red Slave Collar)

It is pretty much complete, and I played on the version before proofreading. The only thing missing, is a part of 5th duel's bad end.

Okay, so apart from that one QTE setting, everything is actually done with v0.82? And not problematic to apply to a 1.05d, right?

Well, then. I guess I have a game to play!
Thanks again everyone who worked hard to produce this TL for us!

 

[JackyHF]

Re: [RJ140344]赤首の闘技場 (The Girl In the Red Slave Collar)

I do not intend to nag, but is this translation completed yet? Thank you very much for your hard work, in either case.

 

[Cursed Atelier]

Re: [RJ140344]赤首の闘技場 (The Girl In the Red Slave Collar)

I do not intend to nag, but is this translation completed yet? Thank you very much for your hard work, in either case.

It is complete, translating wise but not proofread wise.
Currently my full energy goes into Lilitales. After that is done, I will ask SFrame if he could edit it for me. but it should be playable

Candiru

 

[Welkin2]

Re: [RJ140344]赤首の闘技場 (The Girl In the Red Slave Collar)

It is complete, translating wise but not proofread wise.
Currently my full energy goes into Lilitales. After that is done, I will ask SFrame if he could edit it for me. but it should be playable

Candiru

If proofreading is all you need, I can do a play test of it over the weekend.
Is the Nov. 30 link to your latest translation, or did you have one with the difficulty fix? I have 1.05d with Hyper2k's trans... I can make a copy and overwrite it with your translation.

 

[Cursed Atelier]

Re: [RJ140344]赤首の闘技場 (The Girl In the Red Slave Collar)

If proofreading is all you need, I can do a play test of it over the weekend.
Is the Nov. 30 link to your latest translation, or did you have one with the difficulty fix? I have 1.05d with Hyper2k's trans... I can make a copy and overwrite it with your translation.

Thanks for the offer, but sadly it`s not exactly just proofread, it`s also rewriting and retranslating.
(stuff I translated wrong, because I got the context wrong, or because I was just tired/dumb.) and there will also be a bugfixing and script fixing.

If you still want to help. If yes send me a PM, and I will list you what I would need.
But be warned my english is still work in progress. So some sentences won`t make a lot of sense.

Candiru

 

[rdantas]

Re: [RJ140344]赤首の闘技場 (The Girl In the Red Slave Collar)

Some bad endings are not translated. I'm not really sure, but the ending after duel #4, #5 and #6. I haven't tested further yet.

 

[Cursed Atelier]

Re: [RJ140344]赤首の闘技場 (The Girl In the Red Slave Collar)

Oh nice chatch, gonna check these next week.
Thanks.

 

[rdantas]

Re: [RJ140344]赤首の闘技場 (The Girl In the Red Slave Collar)

Oh nice chatch, gonna check these next week.
Thanks.

Thank you, Candiru.

Bad ending after the #7 battle is also not translated.