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Had a bit of a brainstorm at work, decided to try my hand at writing after a long pause. Initially I thought about making a PBP game from Beppo's rather good idea but decided to scrap that, as I'd rather play in it than run it. Then the idea of a CYOA came to mind as a nice practice work. One of the CYOAs I've always liked was ZeroSpace's Touhou, so I decided to shamelessly steal the idea
My story here will be a variation of mine on UFO's story, and will star one of the hottest mamma jammas in Touhou, Byakuren. I'll be using plenty of other characters, along with some fanon inventions and the occasional picture, when there is a good spot to use them. There'll be items to use if you find any, hentai scenes of course and some bad ends if the choices go wrong. I still want to run the whole thing, and will probably just reset from a nearby option if you guys happen to score a bad end along the way.
The Gensokyo this story will happen at is a darker and more unforgiving than it's canon counterpart. Byakuren's been mysteriously released from her imprisonment, and now wants to continue her work on improving the relations between youkai and humans. She'll be needing something to move around with, as well as the crew to operate the vehicle. The objective here is to find and recruit the necessary 4 crewmembers (Nazrin, Shou, Murasa and Ichirin) and build the Palanquin Ship after they've been found. Byakuren is weak after her long imprisonment time, and won't be able to use any of her massive danmaku powers, only a few minor spells. That means she'll be at the enemy's mercy most of the time
Here's an image of Byakuren for the people who don't know what she looks like. It's a rather fanon image of her, but I love her like that
Now that I've gotten those out of the way, let's get this thing started
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The darkness. Everything was darkness
She's been in the darkness for what seemed like eternity. In the unrelenting, unmoving darkness, she thought about everything a person could imagine. The years and years of thought were getting on her mind, and Byakuren was sure she'd lose her sanity soon if something didn't happen soon. "Somebody help me, there's still things to be done" was her last thought before she fell unconcious once more
Suddenly, the darkness gave way to a blinding light. Byakuren suddenly felt something she'd almost forgotten about. Freedom. She was blinded, but could move and even talk again. The joy overwhelming her mind, she started carefully moving around. The sounds coming from her surroundings suggested that she was in a cave of some sort.
After a few moments of blind wandering, she could hear speech in the distance, a male and a young girl's voices. She began to move towards the voices, as she needed to reach a safe place and regain her senses.
A surprised yelp escaped her mouth as she knocked her foot on a rock and fell down on her face, passing out again.
"..u...o..kay? Ca.. yo...hea..me?"
Byakuren could hear someone calling her. Her vision was still a bit hazy, but she could see a handsome man looking over her. His face had a look of friendliness and concern. "Finally you've woken up" he says with a big smile
A week passes, as Byakuren recovers from the after-effects of her sealing under the care of the man called Rinnosuke. Still unable to summon her powers, Byakuren decides she needs to start her work again now that she's free. After sharing goodbyes with Rinnosuke, she heads out to the open world
A. Go towards the forest
B. Go towards the mountains
C. Go towards the sea
My story here will be a variation of mine on UFO's story, and will star one of the hottest mamma jammas in Touhou, Byakuren. I'll be using plenty of other characters, along with some fanon inventions and the occasional picture, when there is a good spot to use them. There'll be items to use if you find any, hentai scenes of course and some bad ends if the choices go wrong. I still want to run the whole thing, and will probably just reset from a nearby option if you guys happen to score a bad end along the way.
The Gensokyo this story will happen at is a darker and more unforgiving than it's canon counterpart. Byakuren's been mysteriously released from her imprisonment, and now wants to continue her work on improving the relations between youkai and humans. She'll be needing something to move around with, as well as the crew to operate the vehicle. The objective here is to find and recruit the necessary 4 crewmembers (Nazrin, Shou, Murasa and Ichirin) and build the Palanquin Ship after they've been found. Byakuren is weak after her long imprisonment time, and won't be able to use any of her massive danmaku powers, only a few minor spells. That means she'll be at the enemy's mercy most of the time
Here's an image of Byakuren for the people who don't know what she looks like. It's a rather fanon image of her, but I love her like that

Now that I've gotten those out of the way, let's get this thing started
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
The darkness. Everything was darkness
She's been in the darkness for what seemed like eternity. In the unrelenting, unmoving darkness, she thought about everything a person could imagine. The years and years of thought were getting on her mind, and Byakuren was sure she'd lose her sanity soon if something didn't happen soon. "Somebody help me, there's still things to be done" was her last thought before she fell unconcious once more
Suddenly, the darkness gave way to a blinding light. Byakuren suddenly felt something she'd almost forgotten about. Freedom. She was blinded, but could move and even talk again. The joy overwhelming her mind, she started carefully moving around. The sounds coming from her surroundings suggested that she was in a cave of some sort.
After a few moments of blind wandering, she could hear speech in the distance, a male and a young girl's voices. She began to move towards the voices, as she needed to reach a safe place and regain her senses.
A surprised yelp escaped her mouth as she knocked her foot on a rock and fell down on her face, passing out again.
"..u...o..kay? Ca.. yo...hea..me?"
Byakuren could hear someone calling her. Her vision was still a bit hazy, but she could see a handsome man looking over her. His face had a look of friendliness and concern. "Finally you've woken up" he says with a big smile
A week passes, as Byakuren recovers from the after-effects of her sealing under the care of the man called Rinnosuke. Still unable to summon her powers, Byakuren decides she needs to start her work again now that she's free. After sharing goodbyes with Rinnosuke, she heads out to the open world
A. Go towards the forest
B. Go towards the mountains
C. Go towards the sea
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